Drink

IronLungzz · 04-27-2007, 06:35 PM

Drink

Peoples just plain dependant, and alcohol fiend
An extremely bad habit, not a fucking disease…
They suckin on the bottle, just like they was little
Takes they liver’s life, and makes they bones brittle
Just drowning in there sorrows, like Noah’s arc
Drink until they a superman, and I aint talking clark
Drinking and Driving, I’ve been with a driver before
Like going to a new LCBO, they don’t know whats in store
Most think it’s hard, but it’s really just will power
Crashing when they drunk just makes they kills sour
And then for what? Go to jail for more the 25 years?
Just because you didn’t take the taxi after 25 beers!
Won’t you please listen, just listen to your kids
Can’t you see that life with them is a fun enough fix?
I don’t have a problem with drinkers, just with drunks
They be on the highlights more then Josh Smith dunks
Im just spitting an AA meeting, but this ones different
One that explains these snakes havin no more slitherin’
Half of them on the streets, asking for booze money
Drinking instead of living a life, you gunna loose dunny
They teeth are slowly shattering, teeth slowly chattering
Because they body’s blacking out n they know whats happening
Always comes and goes, wake up and never know
Where they are, where’s home and if they could go
See they aint welcome man, and whats rehab really do?
Talkin’ bout them clean bitches who relapse you silly fool
I wish I could help all them sorry sons of bitches
And sweep up all there messes like drunken witches
Now police got the ride program, but it doesn’t help
Because they loose they lives for not thinking for themselves
We need some solid help, that will work for everyone
Because wasting all there lives is no help for anyone
And if I have to take a stand, I will rise to the occasion
Why can’t all them drunks do the same wit they probation
Im talking all this difference, but really Im no leader
Caz they help is like a griffon n I aint talking Peter (None)
So imma sit here a think, while more lives is lost
But im not gunna find a solution to fulfill the cries cost…

Over_Flow · 04-27-2007, 10:00 PM

flow was amazing in this drop.....lmao..i like how u worded sum of the lines....most of it was dope...concept was cool....

And then for what? Go to jail for more the 25 years?
Just because you didn’t take the taxi after 25 beers!

^^lol dope bar...worded great....

I don’t have a problem with drinkers, just with drunks
They be on the highlights more then Josh Smith dunks

^^lol i liked the wordin....great flow...

overall: real nice peice.....creative...8.5/10

IronLungzz · 04-27-2007, 10:02 PM

Thankss Man

....DeMoNiK.... · 04-27-2007, 11:19 PM

oh my this

was above what you usually do i swear
this stay consistent through mostly the whole free
you had depth in the whole free
explain why you dont like drunks and such
and the topic was stuck to
the flow in it was nicely done
you didnt limit yourself on this
it was like a poetry piece it seems like
you have had experience with this
either from some one diing from it or being addicts
but nonetheless it was good and greatly imagined

Tha Truth · 04-28-2007, 12:43 AM

8.5/10 nice drop my nigga

IronLungzz · 04-28-2007, 08:10 PM

Thanks boys.

04-27-2007, 06:35 PM	#1
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Drink Drink Drink Peoples just plain dependant, and alcohol fiend An extremely bad habit, not a fucking disease… They suckin on the bottle, just like they was little Takes they liver’s life, and makes they bones brittle Just drowning in there sorrows, like Noah’s arc Drink until they a superman, and I aint talking clark Drinking and Driving, I’ve been with a driver before Like going to a new LCBO, they don’t know whats in store Most think it’s hard, but it’s really just will power Crashing when they drunk just makes they kills sour And then for what? Go to jail for more the 25 years? Just because you didn’t take the taxi after 25 beers! Won’t you please listen, just listen to your kids Can’t you see that life with them is a fun enough fix? I don’t have a problem with drinkers, just with drunks They be on the highlights more then Josh Smith dunks Im just spitting an AA meeting, but this ones different One that explains these snakes havin no more slitherin’ Half of them on the streets, asking for booze money Drinking instead of living a life, you gunna loose dunny They teeth are slowly shattering, teeth slowly chattering Because they body’s blacking out n they know whats happening Always comes and goes, wake up and never know Where they are, where’s home and if they could go See they aint welcome man, and whats rehab really do? Talkin’ bout them clean bitches who relapse you silly fool I wish I could help all them sorry sons of bitches And sweep up all there messes like drunken witches Now police got the ride program, but it doesn’t help Because they loose they lives for not thinking for themselves We need some solid help, that will work for everyone Because wasting all there lives is no help for anyone And if I have to take a stand, I will rise to the occasion Why can’t all them drunks do the same wit they probation Im talking all this difference, but really Im no leader Caz they help is like a griffon n I aint talking Peter (None) So imma sit here a think, while more lives is lost But im not gunna find a solution to fulfill the cries cost… __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

04-27-2007, 10:02 PM	#3
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thankss Man __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

04-28-2007, 12:43 AM	#5
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	8.5/10 nice drop my nigga __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

04-28-2007, 08:10 PM	#6
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04-27-2007, 10:00 PM	#2
Over_Flow Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Queens. NY Posts: 2,793 Repped: 525 Repped 939 Times in 277 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	flow was amazing in this drop.....lmao..i like how u worded sum of the lines....most of it was dope...concept was cool.... And then for what? Go to jail for more the 25 years? Just because you didn’t take the taxi after 25 beers! ^^lol dope bar...worded great.... I don’t have a problem with drinkers, just with drunks They be on the highlights more then Josh Smith dunks ^^lol i liked the wordin....great flow... overall: real nice peice.....creative...8.5/10

04-27-2007, 11:19 PM	#4
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	oh my this was above what you usually do i swear this stay consistent through mostly the whole free you had depth in the whole free explain why you dont like drunks and such and the topic was stuck to the flow in it was nicely done you didnt limit yourself on this it was like a poetry piece it seems like you have had experience with this either from some one diing from it or being addicts but nonetheless it was good and greatly imagined