Never Let Your Life Pass You By (must Read)

ReFleXiOn · 04-26-2007, 02:20 AM

This is a very indepth drop, some cats might be able to relate, some might not...I could give a fuck wat y'all say but this shit is real and from the heart...take this knowledge and embrace it...lol, and if y'all want u can rate it or w/e seems to be going on these days on HH.....anyway, here goes...

My mind is burning with rage as life is turning it's page,
I'm grown up but inside the inner child is yearning to play.
Mischief and laughter my first rich kiss is shattered,
Call me Reflexion the truth is this shit was patterned.
At first this mirror image was of a kid who couldn't read,
Inside I couldn't breathe...
Misfortune took it's toll the dice rolled a life that shouldn't be.
Cats speak of streets my hood was the forest, wood n' trees,
Met the city of techs, respect and knowledge that took to me.
Looked at these cats talked as novice that brought a promise,
Traded brawn for brains, pawned my way and got a godess.
But in this chess'd/chest game the next play can destroy ya next day,
Made a wrong move but didn't lose cuz that's where my chest stays.
Got taken out by the queen yet my soul is what I redeemed,
Then I couldn't deny the weed...
In the end the fork in the road tends to bend as I try to dream.
Ensomnia plays it's roll age doesn't refrain to show,
I still got "thought" but these days my "train" is slow.
Constantly my glass is dry no matter how often u pass the rye,
Youthful memories are all we have realize the past's ur life...
Never let ya life pass u by................................................ .

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ReFleXiOn · 04-26-2007, 06:15 PM

uppin' for feed

Lyrical Messiah · 04-26-2007, 06:59 PM

Yo This Is Nice Fam
Did A Good Job On This It Was Deep
Multies On Point Simple But On Point
7.5/10
Keep Dropping and Stay Up

ReFleXiOn · 04-26-2007, 07:05 PM

^thanx for the feed, i think u missed some of the conceptual wordplay though...u havta search for it...1

♪Spoken Word♪ · 04-26-2007, 07:26 PM

At first this mirror image was of a kid who couldn't read,
Inside I couldn't breathe...
Misfortune took it's toll the dice rolled a life that shouldn't be.
Cats speak of streets my hood was the forest, wood n' trees,
^^Ill Multies!!^^

Damn Yo... This Shit Is Real!! Fa Real... I Feel Wat You Sayin And Doin Fam And This Shit Was Really Impressive... Juss The Depth Of Emotion That You Reached Is What Grabbed Me In... Good Ass Drop... 8.5 - 9/10

ReFleXiOn · 04-26-2007, 11:02 PM

thanx famo, u know how I do, feed is much appreciated...1

04-26-2007, 02:20 AM	#1
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,091 Repped: 0 Repped 30 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	Never Let Your Life Pass You By (must Read) Never Let Your Life Pass You By (must Read) This is a very indepth drop, some cats might be able to relate, some might not...I could give a fuck wat y'all say but this shit is real and from the heart...take this knowledge and embrace it...lol, and if y'all want u can rate it or w/e seems to be going on these days on HH.....anyway, here goes... My mind is burning with rage as life is turning it's page, I'm grown up but inside the inner child is yearning to play. Mischief and laughter my first rich kiss is shattered, Call me Reflexion the truth is this shit was patterned. At first this mirror image was of a kid who couldn't read, Inside I couldn't breathe... Misfortune took it's toll the dice rolled a life that shouldn't be. Cats speak of streets my hood was the forest, wood n' trees, Met the city of techs, respect and knowledge that took to me. Looked at these cats talked as novice that brought a promise, Traded brawn for brains, pawned my way and got a godess. But in this chess'd/chest game the next play can destroy ya next day, Made a wrong move but didn't lose cuz that's where my chest stays. Got taken out by the queen yet my soul is what I redeemed, Then I couldn't deny the weed... In the end the fork in the road tends to bend as I try to dream. Ensomnia plays it's roll age doesn't refrain to show, I still got "thought" but these days my "train" is slow. Constantly my glass is dry no matter how often u pass the rye, Youthful memories are all we have realize the past's ur life... Never let ya life pass u by................................................ . 1

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04-26-2007, 06:15 PM	#2
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,091 Repped: 0 Repped 30 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	uppin' for feed

04-26-2007, 06:59 PM	#3
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Yo This Is Nice Fam Did A Good Job On This It Was Deep Multies On Point Simple But On Point 7.5/10 Keep Dropping and Stay Up

04-26-2007, 07:05 PM	#4
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,091 Repped: 0 Repped 30 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	^thanx for the feed, i think u missed some of the conceptual wordplay though...u havta search for it...1

04-26-2007, 07:26 PM	#5
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	At first this mirror image was of a kid who couldn't read, Inside I couldn't breathe... Misfortune took it's toll the dice rolled a life that shouldn't be. Cats speak of streets my hood was the forest, wood n' trees, ^^Ill Multies!!^^ Damn Yo... This Shit Is Real!! Fa Real... I Feel Wat You Sayin And Doin Fam And This Shit Was Really Impressive... Juss The Depth Of Emotion That You Reached Is What Grabbed Me In... Good Ass Drop... 8.5 - 9/10

04-26-2007, 11:02 PM	#6
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,091 Repped: 0 Repped 30 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	thanx famo, u know how I do, feed is much appreciated...1