Warmup

Youngcity415 · 04-25-2007, 11:01 PM

Wut Up HH Niggaz its been A Min peep my shit drop sum feed holla for collabs or w/e

Tired of hearing about how your gat be bustin dude who you touchin//
I could Get your life taking it’s nothing your life you’ll be clutching//
You don’t want ya kids on the back of milk carton I go to war like a Spartan//
Shotgun flow to ya chest find your body outer space with Marvin da martian//
Yall niggas aint hard I done seen tougher meat on steaks put ya life at steak//
Fucking with me that was a mistake put the gat where it aches boy I ain fake//
I’ll put the pounds to your head and leave your brain rattling just like A snake//
Got your blood on my shirt and boots and now I’m front row at your own wake//
But you aint even worth that weight if I had time in my hands you aint worth da wait//
Homie you getting outta place keep talking all that shit and ya face will be replaced//
Nigga you could die for an ounce of piff diss me you mine as well slit your wrist//
You can try and resist but imam kill every last of ya crew till yall no longer exist//

Who’s kicking that ill shit like kung fu I’ll show you what an automatic do//
Beat ya till ya black and blue and I’m spitten the sick shit like I had the flu//
Fucking with me then its death that you pursue give the grim reaper a debut//
Better watch who you’re stepping to cuz I’ll leave you wetter than shamoo//
I’ve gone insane in the brain complex style all you otha niggas is jus to plain//
You could never abstain this mind frame I eat rappers up like I’m inhumane//
Better think about what you spit before spit because I’m spraying aimless//
Shoot you up from the bottom to the top by tomorrow you’ll be nameless//

its a lil rough but drop sum feed

....DeMoNiK.... · 04-25-2007, 11:06 PM

its alright
had some nice lines
multies punches were decent
and such
flow was good
its good to see that your not a rookie

Homicidal Thots · 04-25-2007, 11:07 PM

this is pretty good, vocab was above average, flow was there, multies were good in some lines, bad in others, overall this is about a 7.5/10 good shit

Tha Truth · 04-25-2007, 11:12 PM

8/10 good shit

Youngcity415 · 04-25-2007, 11:19 PM

yea good looks on da feed yall uppin

Youngcity415 · 04-26-2007, 07:46 AM

uppin 4 mo feed

Youngcity415 · 04-27-2007, 12:12 AM

upppiiiinnnnnn

04-25-2007, 11:01 PM	#1
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Warmup Warmup Wut Up HH Niggaz its been A Min peep my shit drop sum feed holla for collabs or w/e Tired of hearing about how your gat be bustin dude who you touchin// I could Get your life taking it’s nothing your life you’ll be clutching// You don’t want ya kids on the back of milk carton I go to war like a Spartan// Shotgun flow to ya chest find your body outer space with Marvin da martian// Yall niggas aint hard I done seen tougher meat on steaks put ya life at steak// Fucking with me that was a mistake put the gat where it aches boy I ain fake// I’ll put the pounds to your head and leave your brain rattling just like A snake// Got your blood on my shirt and boots and now I’m front row at your own wake// But you aint even worth that weight if I had time in my hands you aint worth da wait// Homie you getting outta place keep talking all that shit and ya face will be replaced// Nigga you could die for an ounce of piff diss me you mine as well slit your wrist// You can try and resist but imam kill every last of ya crew till yall no longer exist// Who’s kicking that ill shit like kung fu I’ll show you what an automatic do// Beat ya till ya black and blue and I’m spitten the sick shit like I had the flu// Fucking with me then its death that you pursue give the grim reaper a debut// Better watch who you’re stepping to cuz I’ll leave you wetter than shamoo// I’ve gone insane in the brain complex style all you otha niggas is jus to plain// You could never abstain this mind frame I eat rappers up like I’m inhumane// Better think about what you spit before spit because I’m spraying aimless// Shoot you up from the bottom to the top by tomorrow you’ll be nameless// its a lil rough but drop sum feed

04-25-2007, 11:12 PM	#4
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	8/10 good shit __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

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04-25-2007, 11:06 PM	#2
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	its alright had some nice lines multies punches were decent and such flow was good its good to see that your not a rookie

04-25-2007, 11:07 PM	#3
Homicidal Thots Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: behind you (no homo) :ninja: Posts: 2,692 Repped: 485 Repped 352 Times in 127 Posts Neg Reps: 9 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	this is pretty good, vocab was above average, flow was there, multies were good in some lines, bad in others, overall this is about a 7.5/10 good shit

04-25-2007, 11:19 PM	#5
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yea good looks on da feed yall uppin

04-26-2007, 07:46 AM	#6
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin 4 mo feed

04-27-2007, 12:12 AM	#7
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	upppiiiinnnnnn