Empire

I'm not Ludacris, but i'm Back For The First damn Time
My lines are ludicrous, been waitin' on my time to shine
You fuckin' with a mastermind, My rhymes are similar to a rock
Hard as they come/cum, similar to my cock
As I get ya girl drippin' wet, like a sprung leak
I hit it then run, cuz dude I gotta eat
Don't you understand stupid? I'm a beast in these streets
Potato famine, fake irish rappers won't eat for weeks
But now i'm done with that -ee shit, let's move on to some G shit
Gangstas' guns, goin' off for no good reason
This game is a gamble, players' snitchin', commiting treason
At any time your life could be over, but i'll make it to the top
In a record office wearin' suits like Hova
He started out just like me, writing rhymes in a notebook
Scribblin and erasing hoping he'd get seen
It's not where ya start out, it's what you end up to be


this is my 2nd attempt i think its a lot better than the first please leave comments

Tha Truth

u gettin better

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{~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin
That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

Empire

thanks bro

....DeMoNiK....

are you sure you didnt bite this
cause you improvin this fast is crazy
but w/e

its cool nice flow
ill be watching you

Empire

nah man i just actually thought it out a little instead if doing it in a second

Empire

bump for more criticism

lookout for another drop 2morrow