Pre-Game

YoungJ · 04-25-2007, 08:45 PM

We're All Steady At Times And Through My Mind Comes The Finer Creations
..Where Im Designing All The Plots And Thoughts Of Preperation
Remain Waiting.. The Guts Aching, I'm Ignoring The Hatin'
The Game Face And I Wait, Analyze Myself In The Basement
..It's Where I Started And Trained When I Was Just An Opponent Of Pain
They Say I Waste Away My Life Spittin'.. But The Moment I Gain
And I'm Just Hoping For The Best.. You Probably Hoping The Same
The Kickoff Hasn't Happened Yet.. I'm Still Chokin' The Game
My Goals Insane To Think And Damn Near Impossible To Meet
But Nothing Changed... My Whole Lifes Been An Obstacle To Beat
I Stand Tall And With Shackles On My Feet.. I'll Still Run
I Wont Fall.. You Can Put Me In Some Slings.. I'll Still Punch!
And I'm Still The One That I Was When I Said I Would Make It
I Make Promises In Life And Still I Hope Not To Break It
It's Almost Arrived I Gotta Thrive For When I Enter The Life
Can't Be The One Off To The Side.. I'm The Center Of Light
Sit Back And Remember The Nights But I Can't Arrange Mine
I've Learned So Much Through These Years It's Almost Game Time

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YoungJ · 04-25-2007, 08:45 PM

by the way this is a spit 4 rank my bad for not puttin it in the title... cant edit that either

Homicidal Thots · 04-25-2007, 08:49 PM

yea you can edit the title, just goto edit post, and click go advanced and it should let you edit it

YoungJ · 04-25-2007, 08:53 PM

good lookz on that.. it did work.. drop feed

....DeMoNiK.... · 04-25-2007, 09:06 PM

this was a nice drop scotty
i like the multies constantly staying on point
some off
and the flow was good
liked the topic and the title
stay up

NOBODY STANDING[NBS]

Tha Truth · 04-25-2007, 09:13 PM

ight i rank this 7.5/10

YoungJ · 04-26-2007, 03:54 PM

propz on the feed

Lyrical Messiah · 04-26-2007, 06:35 PM

Nice Wordplay
Nice Multies
Good Concept

..It's Where I Started And Trained When I Was Just An Opponent Of Pain
They Say I Waste Away My Life Spittin'.. But The Moment I Gain
And I'm Just Hoping For The Best.. You Probably Hoping The Same
The Kickoff Hasn't Happened Yet.. I'm Still Chokin' The Game

My Fav Part

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YoungJ · 04-26-2007, 07:53 PM

good lookz on the feed
upppin

ReFleXiOn · 04-26-2007, 07:59 PM

pretty straight drop, consistant for the most part, overall u did ya thing...1

YoungJ · 04-29-2007, 11:15 PM

thanks for the feed

04-25-2007, 08:45 PM	#1
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Pre-Game (Spit4Rank) Pre-Game We're All Steady At Times And Through My Mind Comes The Finer Creations ..Where Im Designing All The Plots And Thoughts Of Preperation Remain Waiting.. The Guts Aching, I'm Ignoring The Hatin' The Game Face And I Wait, Analyze Myself In The Basement ..It's Where I Started And Trained When I Was Just An Opponent Of Pain They Say I Waste Away My Life Spittin'.. But The Moment I Gain And I'm Just Hoping For The Best.. You Probably Hoping The Same The Kickoff Hasn't Happened Yet.. I'm Still Chokin' The Game My Goals Insane To Think And Damn Near Impossible To Meet But Nothing Changed... My Whole Lifes Been An Obstacle To Beat I Stand Tall And With Shackles On My Feet.. I'll Still Run I Wont Fall.. You Can Put Me In Some Slings.. I'll Still Punch! And I'm Still The One That I Was When I Said I Would Make It I Make Promises In Life And Still I Hope Not To Break It It's Almost Arrived I Gotta Thrive For When I Enter The Life Can't Be The One Off To The Side.. I'm The Center Of Light Sit Back And Remember The Nights But I Can't Arrange Mine I've Learned So Much Through These Years It's Almost Game Time the feed links

04-25-2007, 09:13 PM	#6
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	ight i rank this 7.5/10 __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

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04-25-2007, 08:49 PM	#3
Homicidal Thots Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: behind you (no homo) :ninja: Posts: 2,692 Repped: 485 Repped 352 Times in 127 Posts Neg Reps: 9 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	yea you can edit the title, just goto edit post, and click go advanced and it should let you edit it

04-25-2007, 08:53 PM	#4
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	good lookz on that.. it did work.. drop feed

04-25-2007, 09:06 PM	#5
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was a nice drop scotty i like the multies constantly staying on point some off and the flow was good liked the topic and the title stay up NOBODY STANDING[NBS]

04-26-2007, 03:54 PM	#7
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	propz on the feed

04-26-2007, 06:35 PM	#8
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Nice Wordplay Nice Multies Good Concept ..It's Where I Started And Trained When I Was Just An Opponent Of Pain They Say I Waste Away My Life Spittin'.. But The Moment I Gain And I'm Just Hoping For The Best.. You Probably Hoping The Same The Kickoff Hasn't Happened Yet.. I'm Still Chokin' The Game My Fav Part Middle Weight

04-26-2007, 07:53 PM	#9
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	good lookz on the feed upppin

04-26-2007, 07:59 PM	#10
ReFleXiOn Blissful Poetry Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Canada, SK. Posts: 1,052 Repped: 0 Repped 26 Times in 21 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	pretty straight drop, consistant for the most part, overall u did ya thing...1

04-29-2007, 11:15 PM	#11
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	thanks for the feed