Singin' For The Lawd

IronLungzz · 04-24-2007, 10:54 PM

See im not one who promtes the bible
but it leads us christians too our survival
And for that, i have to say god i thank you
Promise that ya' name is somethin' i sang too

See im in sanctury of god, where all right is done
Be thanking the lawd, while the devil see's shun
aint that religous, but theres some things ya' gotta do
and if thats speakin the truth, then why is so new?
and why do we blame shit, on people who arent guilty
with red hands blamless, and preachers filthy
but my points dont find lines, they get covered up
Never to be seen by the public, but that isnt enough
they get trashed n shit, made fun of too
Matta fact, you probably didn't belive em too
but thats ok, i didn't excpect god to be belived in
Caz most you people drive the cars you were concieved in

See im not one who promtes the bible
but it leads us christians too our survival
And for that, i have to say god i thank you
Promise that ya' name is somethin' i sang too

once more, the bible leads us christians too our survival
and our life is just the test too pass us into heavens arrival
And for that, i study hard in all the wrongs i've done
And think i've made up for it with the ryhmes i've sung
but mind you, i know sins can really, TRULY, TOTALLY, be forgiven
Specially by the non-belivers who let the lord be striven
So listen, and pay attention what im about to say is serious
Learn from others, and make life an unforgetable experience
But wait theres more, don't the the door hit you on ya' way out
caz once the doors closed no one can hear ya' shout
and if your not heard, not even god himself can save you
The fire will sink its teeth in and the devil will enslave you

See im not one who promtes the bible
but it leads us christians too our survival
And for that, i have to say god i thank you
Promise that ya' name is somethin' i sang too

....DeMoNiK.... · 04-24-2007, 11:11 PM

i like the whole piece the emotion was clear
great topical piece
the chorus was also nice
the flow was choppy at time
but got through to pass nice
keep it up

MoneyMaka · 04-24-2007, 11:32 PM

ha ha ha ha zzzzz oh shit i fell asleep

nah it was good 8/10

Di$R3$p3(T · 04-24-2007, 11:37 PM

Nice Shit My Nigga Keep It Up..8/10

GC!!

IronLungzz · 04-25-2007, 04:47 PM

lol thx...

YoungJ · 04-25-2007, 09:46 PM

i liked this piece too
you dont usually see shit with hooks on this site that much
but i was feelin it.. 8/10
you do audio?

IronLungzz · 04-26-2007, 05:04 PM

wordddddddd^

04-24-2007, 10:54 PM	#1
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Singin' For The Lawd Singin' For The Lawd See im not one who promtes the bible but it leads us christians too our survival And for that, i have to say god i thank you Promise that ya' name is somethin' i sang too See im in sanctury of god, where all right is done Be thanking the lawd, while the devil see's shun aint that religous, but theres some things ya' gotta do and if thats speakin the truth, then why is so new? and why do we blame shit, on people who arent guilty with red hands blamless, and preachers filthy but my points dont find lines, they get covered up Never to be seen by the public, but that isnt enough they get trashed n shit, made fun of too Matta fact, you probably didn't belive em too but thats ok, i didn't excpect god to be belived in Caz most you people drive the cars you were concieved in See im not one who promtes the bible but it leads us christians too our survival And for that, i have to say god i thank you Promise that ya' name is somethin' i sang too once more, the bible leads us christians too our survival and our life is just the test too pass us into heavens arrival And for that, i study hard in all the wrongs i've done And think i've made up for it with the ryhmes i've sung but mind you, i know sins can really, TRULY, TOTALLY, be forgiven Specially by the non-belivers who let the lord be striven So listen, and pay attention what im about to say is serious Learn from others, and make life an unforgetable experience But wait theres more, don't the the door hit you on ya' way out caz once the doors closed no one can hear ya' shout and if your not heard, not even god himself can save you The fire will sink its teeth in and the devil will enslave you See im not one who promtes the bible but it leads us christians too our survival And for that, i have to say god i thank you Promise that ya' name is somethin' i sang too __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

04-24-2007, 11:37 PM	#4
Di$R3$p3(T [[HearT oF A ChampioN]] Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NeW JeRseY Posts: 1,049 Repped: 17 Repped 15 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Nice Shit My Nigga Keep It Up..8/10 GC!! __________________ "BacKk oN ThA BeAsT ModE" [OvErALL RecOrd]-[WiNz:"73" SliiP uHpz:"9"]

04-25-2007, 04:47 PM	#5
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lol thx... __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

04-26-2007, 05:04 PM	#7
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	wordddddddd^ __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

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04-24-2007, 11:11 PM	#2
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i like the whole piece the emotion was clear great topical piece the chorus was also nice the flow was choppy at time but got through to pass nice keep it up

04-24-2007, 11:32 PM	#3
MoneyMaka Collectin CasH Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Philly Posts: 276 Repped: 26 Repped 3 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ha ha ha ha zzzzz oh shit i fell asleep nah it was good 8/10

04-25-2007, 09:46 PM	#6
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	i liked this piece too you dont usually see shit with hooks on this site that much but i was feelin it.. 8/10 you do audio?