Just For The FUN Of It -Pezimistik

Pezimistik · 04-23-2007, 03:45 AM

this is just for the fun...feedbak plz

i hit quick fast in a fury,
my spits sick so im winnin early,
my sprees still spinnin so you finished shurly,
im clean but my words are dirty,
pigs come i flip them a birdy,
my feet stand firmly,
so those that heard me,
know that these cats im burning,
with a match they rap n learning,
im on fire but no need for jury,
they admire cuz i speak n bury,
no hurry,
i take my time,
you aint great like mine,
you cant anticipate my lines,
look how im treating you,
no ones believe you,
seeing you,
n some people think im eating you,
your like an open book, im reading you,
line by line, i know your rhymes by mind,
so try n lie through this,
im a guy you tried to hit but died cuz missed

tell me what ya think...feedbak

Pezimistik · 04-24-2007, 03:22 AM

uppin for feedbak..come on peeps feedbak tell me what you think

MoneyMaka · 04-24-2007, 05:01 PM

azzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Witty Qwan · 04-24-2007, 05:07 PM

preschool punchez

ya boy Mike · 04-24-2007, 05:52 PM

I LIKE YO FLOW MAN

YO COME VOTE MY BATTLE

Famoz · 04-25-2007, 01:20 AM

this is real short but i was feeling it, u had a great structure and it stayed on topic....not vet i guess tho

Pezimistik · 04-25-2007, 04:08 PM

Thanks yo, uppin for more feed

J~Souljah · 04-25-2007, 04:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by YoungSparks

preschool punchez

stfu n stop hatin

u and dollaz

scool · 04-25-2007, 08:10 PM

shit aint nothing siriuz

04-23-2007, 03:45 AM	#1
Pezimistik Adverse Records Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Thornton, Colorado (Denver) Posts: 273 Repped: 5 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Just For The FUN Of It -Pezimistik Just For The FUN Of It -Pezimistik this is just for the fun...feedbak plz i hit quick fast in a fury, my spits sick so im winnin early, my sprees still spinnin so you finished shurly, im clean but my words are dirty, pigs come i flip them a birdy, my feet stand firmly, so those that heard me, know that these cats im burning, with a match they rap n learning, im on fire but no need for jury, they admire cuz i speak n bury, no hurry, i take my time, you aint great like mine, you cant anticipate my lines, look how im treating you, no ones believe you, seeing you, n some people think im eating you, your like an open book, im reading you, line by line, i know your rhymes by mind, so try n lie through this, im a guy you tried to hit but died cuz missed tell me what ya think...feedbak

04-24-2007, 05:07 PM	#4
Witty Qwan # Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: My crib Posts: 3,053 Repped: 155 Repped 484 Times in 311 Posts Neg Reps: 21 Neg Repped at 82 Times in 75 Posts	preschool punchez __________________ [02:34PM] Lyrikcha FUCK THIS FAGGOT CHAMBERS NIGGA...IM A CUT HIS HEAD OFF AND PUT IT ON A STICK FOR MY NIGGA TIGER CAN DEFROST THE GAT AND SMOKE U

04-24-2007, 05:52 PM	#5
ya boy Mike Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: QUEENS Posts: 4,848 Repped: 678 Repped 142 Times in 66 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	I LIKE YO FLOW MAN YO COME VOTE MY BATTLE __________________ You'll think im spellin' Iverson when the beef all done, cuz I'll leave you on the IV in the ER, SON-40 Cal

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04-24-2007, 03:22 AM	#2
Pezimistik Adverse Records Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Thornton, Colorado (Denver) Posts: 273 Repped: 5 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin for feedbak..come on peeps feedbak tell me what you think

04-24-2007, 05:01 PM	#3
MoneyMaka Collectin CasH Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Philly Posts: 276 Repped: 26 Repped 3 Times in 2 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	azzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

04-25-2007, 01:20 AM	#6
Famoz Banned Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 1,548 Repped: 126 Repped 391 Times in 210 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	this is real short but i was feeling it, u had a great structure and it stayed on topic....not vet i guess tho

04-25-2007, 04:08 PM	#7
Pezimistik Adverse Records Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Thornton, Colorado (Denver) Posts: 273 Repped: 5 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks yo, uppin for more feed

04-25-2007, 08:10 PM	#9
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	shit aint nothing siriuz