***8 Bars Of Nastiness***

B Dope · 04-06-2007, 03:52 AM

This took me a lil bit to do. I put some effort into it and would like some constructive feed, good or bad...Rate it outta 10 would be kool too.

Keep your distance bitch I’m on the Verge of Flippin
Pray to God its not on you but the Words I’m Rippin
Butter flies in ya stomach your insides Hurt now
You went the whole nine yards but fell short of the First Down
I’m the top predator that has never Tasted defeat
Your just another wack rapper that’s Wasted a beat
Got you scared Shit less you’ve never Been This Stressed
Sweat drippin down ya cheek like a dope fiend before his Piss Test
Why go back and forth with you when your Threats so Little
Your in a wack group and still playing Second Fiddle
Every pussy has a glass jaw and a Nose so Brittle
Right hook to the face I leave Those two Crippled
Sending subliminals this bitch knows the riddle
Now his hearts feelin disturbed apposed to tickled
I make every one of my opponents go out on limbs
So their arms cant be held together without the pins

Jay Duece · 04-06-2007, 04:05 AM

some good shit dog, stay up, i know u can do way betta

8/10

B Dope · 04-06-2007, 04:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by $ KID J $

fuck, your gettin so good my dude, this shit is fucking hot mang

8.5/10

Thanks famo...*robot voice* bumping

KING BHOB · 04-06-2007, 05:12 AM

i was not impressed.

Jay Duece · 04-06-2007, 05:17 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MeekaHasSmallTits

Thanks famo...*robot voice* bumping

why u changing my posts homie lawl

B Dope · 04-06-2007, 05:21 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ROBBBEEERRRRRTTT

i was not impressed.

Can you expalin a lil more please

.Krysis. · 04-06-2007, 08:32 AM

We still ghetto... *girls voice* We still the Row !

scool · 04-06-2007, 09:53 AM

those are like 14 bars o something u dumb bitch

and u wacc fucc ur life

B Dope · 04-06-2007, 12:22 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nu' sCool

those are like 14 bars o something u dumb bitch

and u wacc fucc ur life

No u dumbass that is 8 bars which = 16 lines........Get you ass outta this section....U couldn't tell if a drop was hot or not.....and the fact u think young jeezy and lil wayne are good shows your stupidity in rap.....

YungCam15 · 04-06-2007, 01:12 PM

na dats 16 bars = a verse

DJ C Blizzard · 04-06-2007, 01:17 PM

2lines=1bar= he gots 16lines=8bars

DJ C Blizzard · 04-06-2007, 01:18 PM

but i gotta say that it is pretty good....better than mine i will admit....waayyyy better than mine....i agree with tha kid j on this one g

Tha Truth · 04-06-2007, 02:28 PM

Ight Meeka That Was Nice Gotta Rep

B Dope · 04-06-2007, 06:12 PM

ight thannks for the feeed

ThA ViiRu5 · 04-06-2007, 07:11 PM

yea dawg i rly liked the flow that was real sick and the i was just generally feelin it like that nine yards line was my favorite, i dont rly kno how to describe it but i liked it, 7.some-high-number/10

B Dope · 04-06-2007, 09:41 PM

ight...good looks on the feed

Tom Chambers · 04-07-2007, 12:33 AM

.....................................dope boy fresh.......
that whole nine yards line was dope to me.......................good flow.....

7.5/10

IronLungzz · 04-07-2007, 12:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Meek

Butter flies in ya stomach your insides Hurt now
You went the whole nine yards but fell short of the First Down

Yeah That Line Stood Out, I Like How You Turned The Saying Into A Hott Metta....Other Then That It Seemed Like Same Old Same Old, Some Generic Lines Some Meh..Dope Flow Though, Chopped In One Or Two Places, Decent Multies...7.7/10

B Dope · 04-07-2007, 12:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by IronLungzz

Yeah That Line Stood Out, I Like How You Turned The Saying Into A Hott Metta....Other Then That It Seemed Like Same Old Same Old, Some Generic Lines Some Meh..Dope Flow Though, Chopped In One Or Two Places, Decent Multies...7.7/10

ight thanks fam

Jay Hussle · 04-07-2007, 01:24 AM

that nine yard line was ill

the flow was nice and in this and the multies were good
the punches were decent
your elevating quickly though homie
keep it up

B Dope · 04-07-2007, 02:28 AM

Good looks on the feed....bumpin

LethalIsILL · 04-07-2007, 02:32 AM

flow was great i see u been workin on it had some nice multies didnt force them punches were decent nice work keep elavatin

B Dope · 04-07-2007, 01:59 PM

bizzuppin.........

B Dope · 04-07-2007, 09:56 PM

bizzupin.......

B Dope · 04-07-2007, 10:17 PM

bumpin,,,,,,,,,,,

04-06-2007, 03:52 AM	#1
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	*8 Bars Of Nastiness* *8 Bars Of Nastiness* This took me a lil bit to do. I put some effort into it and would like some constructive feed, good or bad...Rate it outta 10 would be kool too. Keep your distance bitch I’m on the Verge of Flippin Pray to God its not on you but the Words I’m Rippin Butter flies in ya stomach your insides Hurt now You went the whole nine yards but fell short of the First Down I’m the top predator that has never Tasted defeat Your just another wack rapper that’s Wasted a beat Got you scared Shit less you’ve never Been This Stressed Sweat drippin down ya cheek like a dope fiend before his Piss Test Why go back and forth with you when your Threats so Little Your in a wack group and still playing Second Fiddle Every pussy has a glass jaw and a Nose so Brittle Right hook to the face I leave Those two Crippled Sending subliminals this bitch knows the riddle Now his hearts feelin disturbed apposed to tickled I make every one of my opponents go out on limbs So their arms cant be held together without the pins

04-06-2007, 04:05 AM	#2
Jay Duece Killarado Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: Colorado Posts: 3,887 Repped: 1,463 Repped 901 Times in 302 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	some good shit dog, stay up, i know u can do way betta 8/10 __________________ THA "SHOTS GO HIT EM AND DROP HOS" THEY'L GO STRAIGHT TO YA GUT LIKE "ROSCOES CHICCEN AND WAFLES" "mE>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>" - Jay Boy Deuce

04-06-2007, 05:12 AM	#4
KING BHOB P.O.L.O/Attention:Deficit Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: East Side Pennsylvania Posts: 2,189 Repped: 0 Repped 590 Times in 201 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 25 Times in 20 Posts	i was not impressed. __________________ >\|>\|>\|> http://twitter.com/KingBhob <\|<\|<\|< >>>>>>>LIFE

04-06-2007, 08:32 AM	#7
.Krysis. AkA Riskz Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 3,253 Repped: 479 Repped 742 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	We still ghetto... girls voice We still the Row ! __________________ "I'm the Archbishop of this rap shit, excommunicate.. faith from my narrative, you don't want no arms like Hans Blix, watch me clamp this, like lock jaw, smack you so hard your frame took flight & soared like a Condor".

04-06-2007, 01:17 PM	#11
DJ C Blizzard Veteran Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: psssshhhhh Posts: 1,816 Repped: 432 Repped 568 Times in 164 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	2lines=1bar= he gots 16lines=8bars __________________ Oh, I'll neg you. I'll neg you real hard. I'll neg you so good that you'll be begging for more neg. Negga please. '

04-06-2007, 09:53 AM	#8
scool Banned Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: DA CHAT SEXHUN THRONE MAFUCCA.. DEEBO WUDDUP?? Posts: 20,134 Repped: 1,328 Repped 2,389 Times in 867 Posts Neg Reps: 267 Neg Repped at 488 Times in 326 Posts	those are like 14 bars o something u dumb bitch and u wacc fucc ur life

04-06-2007, 01:12 PM	#10
YungCam15 Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 606 Repped: 480 Repped 21 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	na dats 16 bars = a verse

04-06-2007, 01:18 PM	#12
DJ C Blizzard Veteran Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: psssshhhhh Posts: 1,816 Repped: 432 Repped 568 Times in 164 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	but i gotta say that it is pretty good....better than mine i will admit....waayyyy better than mine....i agree with tha kid j on this one g __________________ Oh, I'll neg you. I'll neg you real hard. I'll neg you so good that you'll be begging for more neg. Negga please. '

04-06-2007, 02:28 PM	#13
Tha Truth ..:General Truth:... Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: at ya girl crib Posts: 5,225 Repped: 675 Repped 1,045 Times in 251 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 2 Posts	Ight Meeka That Was Nice Gotta Rep __________________ {~Undisputed G$~}/Mechanical workin, Hechler handle's jerkin That'll pull the Gate in after you Heavenly church him-Bank$

04-06-2007, 06:12 PM	#14
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	ight thannks for the feeed

04-06-2007, 07:11 PM	#15
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,698 Repped: 581 Repped 190 Times in 111 Posts Neg Reps: 82 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	yea dawg i rly liked the flow that was real sick and the i was just generally feelin it like that nine yards line was my favorite, i dont rly kno how to describe it but i liked it, 7.some-high-number/10 __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

04-06-2007, 09:41 PM	#16
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	ight...good looks on the feed

04-07-2007, 12:33 AM	#17
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,340 Repped: 134 Repped 491 Times in 307 Posts Neg Reps: 20 Neg Repped at 69 Times in 54 Posts	.....................................dope boy fresh....... that whole nine yards line was dope to me.......................good flow..... 7.5/10

04-07-2007, 01:24 AM	#20
Jay Hussle Unimaginable Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: SoufSide Posts: 535 Repped: 0 Repped 52 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	that nine yard line was ill the flow was nice and in this and the multies were good the punches were decent your elevating quickly though homie keep it up __________________ Vakill-Worst Fears Confirmed

04-07-2007, 02:28 AM	#21
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Good looks on the feed....bumpin

04-07-2007, 02:32 AM	#22
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,995 Repped: 152 Repped 1,107 Times in 241 Posts Neg Reps: 45 Neg Repped at 88 Times in 63 Posts	flow was great i see u been workin on it had some nice multies didnt force them punches were decent nice work keep elavatin __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

04-07-2007, 01:59 PM	#23
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	bizzuppin.........

04-07-2007, 09:56 PM	#24
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	bizzupin.......

04-07-2007, 10:17 PM	#25
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	bumpin,,,,,,,,,,,

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