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Old 03-25-2007, 08:32 PM   #1
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Domestic Violence (Meeka Diss)

you and your inferier plans with no obligation to appear at a stance..
as the incoharint will chant, this bitch couldnt even cheer in the stands..
Meeka only screaming my name cuz my jagged blade detains more pain then her period cramps!..
shes stupid, whats cool about her? her own click moves without her..
her cooch is loose and sour, even some internet dudes devoured..*
who would scout her? her multies got more force then jedi superpowers..
this chick swares she hot as fuck, you think your hard to reply to?..
nah, its prolly even impossible for guys ta slide it hard up inside you..
and aint u used ta be mad close ta whip? yea, ya probably bi too..
real talk, and dont claim ya first lady general, even DA SGT denied you..**
DAMN!!
i'm empowered to blow, bullets raid her face with a showering flow..
she a net thug, she aint never bust shit or run wit kids out of her home..
leadin tha pack? nah, only time she incharge is wit her internent router "controls"..
i'm ready and willin, to confetti and dismiss tha soul of anyone grillin..
so tell this bitch not ta speek or i'll leave her floatin in tha water like immigrant children..
look at her face, it looks like when tha twin towers fell she was still in tha buildin!..
now how you feelin at mind? knowing that i'm willing to ride fufilling my pride..
she says she gets drunk, burns trees and chills wit kills for guys..
bitch please, tha only wood u burnin is your creamation of the box that u sittin inside..
Ya Kno?!

*She Dated Da Sgt
** She Asked Da Sgt For Him To Let Her Give Him Head And She Said No... Dunno How E-Head Is Possible?!?!??!

HOLLA THA FUCK BACK... SHITS DONE... GAME OVER!!
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Old 03-25-2007, 08:36 PM   #2
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haha that jedi shit is funny...

good flow
and Unforced multies
she tried to get on my brother about a question
pwned twice in the same week
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Old 03-25-2007, 09:21 PM   #3
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a couple of long lines that could be shortened...and a couple nice punches here n there...first couple of lines didn't go well with the rest IMO, oversaturated with multies...


i don't know if its me...but i noticed you be going through like diff. phases spo-wo...where u like listen to a certain rapper a lot or a certain style or brand of rap...



........so i'm guessing right now you're watching a lot of battles huh? ya verse had that kind of style...i don't know...it seems like ur rap style changes by what the next thing you get hooked on is...



not saying its bad...but try to be a lil more consistent, feel me?
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I WILL NOT LEAVE FEED ... SMH ... ASKES ME TO COLLAB & DROP'S DA DISS WITHOUT ME ... DUMB ASS ...
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Old 03-25-2007, 11:17 PM   #6
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.....i didn't ask this....but may i ask why you are dissing meeka???
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Old 03-25-2007, 11:24 PM   #7
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Because Meeka has small tits^^^
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Old 03-26-2007, 12:17 AM   #8
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Shm....damn..my Sis Gotta Come Back Hard After This One...even I Was Shocked...
An Laughing To...that Twin Towers Line Was Deadly..!!
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^she told me she ain't returning to this wonderful board....
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Old 03-26-2007, 02:17 AM   #11
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Yes^^^She couldn't take the ittie bittie tittie comittie abuse from us
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I Can Give Her Some Of Mines Then..
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who would scout her? her multies got more force then jedi superpowers..
More played "then" computer games!!!11111


Overall: learn English before posting, monkey, thanks.
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who would scout her? her multies got more force then jedi superpowers..
I could have sworn... i said something VERY similar to that...
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I Can Give Her Some Of Mines Then..
I need to see a pic then I'll decide....perferovly no bra
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i guess this means i win... WOOHOO
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I Was The Diss King I Fucked Niggas Up Ask Sho Kase.
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^word........except me.....i straight shitted on you................like i was up in outerspace shitting on you......Word to bond...
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lol this nice spoken i never asked da sgt to let me give him no head tho how do that sound but good diss if i stop being lazy i'll spit a rap back
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and i'll juss demolish u yet... AGAIN E~Z
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who would scout her? her multies got more force then jedi superpowers..

Lol.

so tell this bitch not ta speek or i'll leave her floatin in tha water like immigrant children..

Damn.

Good diss. In some lines, u focused on making good lines with great vocab. In others I could tell u just tryin to get at her. it was balanced.

Overall...9/10.
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who would scout her? her multies got more force then jedi superpowers..


lmfao.. had me rollin'
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