Hip Hop's Back

YoungJ · 03-24-2007, 02:41 PM

N. Streetz

Hip Hop Is An Art Form & Sport Beef’s Only Aggressive Competition
Wrist Watches And Wardrobes Excessive Beyond Beautician
Verses Related To Poetry Every Word Is Just As Important As The Last
The Culture Evolved Into Something Enforcing From The Past
From Ball Point Pens & Notepads Break Dancing In Them Pro Keds
To Spitting About Guns, Hoes, Crack And Dope Heads
Most Come From Them Project Buildings Nosey Ladies With Broke Kids
Dirty Clothes What The Results Of No Detergent Or Soap Did
Music’s All We Got And Like The Great Late Notorious We Hope Big
Money Is The Root Of All Evil As The Diamonds My Folks Dig
Legend Like John Heaven Only Knows So Lyrically I Speak From My Heart
Until The Rise Of My Father Who Disappeared Deep In The Dark
I Illuminate Its Grave With Every Speech That I Start ...

$cotty B

We Live In An Environment Where Most Just Act Fake And Mimmick
But I Still Express The Truth And Hope They Know That I Aint No Gimmick
It Started Off With Earning A Rep But Now It's Wack How Rap Seems
From The Grind And Losing Minds And Making Cash Off Crack Feens
My Father Left Me A Bad Path I Wonder If He'll Ever See Me Follow
He Took My Mind With Him I Feel Like A Victim Livin' In Sleepy Hollow
I Wish I Made It Here Earlier When Lyrics Actually Mattered To Spit
Seen Alot Of Shit And Im Still Unwrappen Gods Gifts But My Raps Are Legit
With No Light We Just Write And Let Our Days Roll On A Vike
Think About Life And Whats Right And Pour My Soul On A Mic
I Speak For The Ones Bussin' Guns And Bums That Have To Sleep In The Park
Until The Rise Of My Father Who Disappeared Deep In The Dark
I Put Pain In His Soul With Every Speach That I Start ...

-LATIN- · 03-24-2007, 06:57 PM

The whole thing was tite...
Some nice smooth punches
Also you guys finished both verse real good
Keep em coming..1

mtownhustla · 03-24-2007, 08:04 PM

Good Ver5e5 From Both..
N.streetz=10/10
Yours-8/10

YoungJ · 03-24-2007, 11:50 PM

good lookz on the feed

Lyrical Messiah · 03-25-2007, 12:13 AM

Uppin For Some Feed

IronLungzz · 03-25-2007, 12:36 AM

N. Streetz

Hip Hop Is An Art Form & Sport Beef’s Only Aggressive Competition
Wrist Watches And Wardrobes Excessive Beyond Beautician
Nice opening to the topic, sets up possible fire if u continue strong
Verses Related To Poetry Every Word Is Just As Important As The Last
The Culture Evolved Into Something Enforcing From The Past
the first line is stretched, second flows nice
From Ball Point Pens & Notepads Break Dancing In Them Pro Keds
To Spitting About Guns, Hoes, Crack And Dope Heads
Nice flow, though its a generic line
Most Come From Them Project Buildings Nosey Ladies With Broke Kids
Dirty Clothes What The Results Of No Detergent Or Soap Did
Music’s All We Got And Like The Great Late Notorious We Hope Big
Money Is The Root Of All Evil As The Diamonds My Folks Dig
Feelin these lines, STRAIGHT real talk..
Legend Like John Heaven Only Knows So Lyrically I Speak From My Heart
Until The Rise Of My Father Who Disappeared Deep In The Dark
I Illuminate Its Grave With Every Speech That I Start ...
Sexy lines here, second and third line felt the most..hawt

$cotty B

We Live In An Environment Where Most Just Act Fake And Mimmick
But I Still Express The Truth And Hope They Know That I Aint No Gimmick
chopped flow in second line...2 bad would of been a solid opener 2
It Started Off With Earning A Rep But Now It's Wack How Rap Seems
From The Grind And Losing Minds And Making Cash Off Crack Feens
Straight flow right here but generic bar
My Father Left Me A Bad Path I Wonder If He'll Ever See Me Follow
He Took My Mind With Him I Feel Like A Victim Livin' In Sleepy Hollow
This bar had an okay metta, and first i seen in this collab so far, nice
I Wish I Made It Here Earlier When Lyrics Actually Mattered To Spit
Seen Alot Of Shit And Im Still Unwrappen Gods Gifts But My Raps Are Legit
REAL TALK in that first line...
With No Light We Just Write And Let Our Days Roll On A Vike
Think About Life And Whats Right And Pour My Soul On A Mic
Hott ass flow but generic bar
I Speak For The Ones Bussin' Guns And Bums That Have To Sleep In The Park
Until The Rise Of My Father Who Disappeared Deep In The Dark
I Put Pain In His Soul With Every Speach That I Start ...
hott ending aswell

Overall this was a nice collab, i would say N Streets looked better overall with less generic lines and starting good from the begining, wheras Scotty started off slow then had them hott flowing bars, just he had too many generic bars...7/10, nice lil collab ya'll got going, just try picking a topic less common

Lyrical Messiah · 03-25-2007, 12:50 AM

Good Lookin On The Feed ^^^^

Raezr Productions · 03-25-2007, 01:24 AM

Hate Text, but anywayz.......Streetz verse was titest, Scotty came hard too, Black Card Gang Stand Up!!!

Lyrical Messiah · 03-25-2007, 03:24 PM

Upping For Some Feed

♪Spoken Word♪ · 03-25-2007, 04:24 PM

jea man... i think these are some of the lines u showed me a few days ago... shits hot tho... good shit... both of you... you doin ya thing, multies, flow and punches was on point... real talk shit too... 9/10... holla

YoungJ · 03-25-2007, 06:23 PM

good lookz uppin

03-24-2007, 02:41 PM	#1
YoungJ Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,042 Repped: 205 Repped 391 Times in 119 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 6 Times in 6 Posts	Hip Hop's Back Hip Hop's Back N. Streetz Hip Hop Is An Art Form & Sport Beef’s Only Aggressive Competition Wrist Watches And Wardrobes Excessive Beyond Beautician Verses Related To Poetry Every Word Is Just As Important As The Last The Culture Evolved Into Something Enforcing From The Past From Ball Point Pens & Notepads Break Dancing In Them Pro Keds To Spitting About Guns, Hoes, Crack And Dope Heads Most Come From Them Project Buildings Nosey Ladies With Broke Kids Dirty Clothes What The Results Of No Detergent Or Soap Did Music’s All We Got And Like The Great Late Notorious We Hope Big Money Is The Root Of All Evil As The Diamonds My Folks Dig Legend Like John Heaven Only Knows So Lyrically I Speak From My Heart Until The Rise Of My Father Who Disappeared Deep In The Dark I Illuminate Its Grave With Every Speech That I Start ... $cotty B We Live In An Environment Where Most Just Act Fake And Mimmick But I Still Express The Truth And Hope They Know That I Aint No Gimmick It Started Off With Earning A Rep But Now It's Wack How Rap Seems From The Grind And Losing Minds And Making Cash Off Crack Feens My Father Left Me A Bad Path I Wonder If He'll Ever See Me Follow He Took My Mind With Him I Feel Like A Victim Livin' In Sleepy Hollow I Wish I Made It Here Earlier When Lyrics Actually Mattered To Spit Seen Alot Of Shit And Im Still Unwrappen Gods Gifts But My Raps Are Legit With No Light We Just Write And Let Our Days Roll On A Vike Think About Life And Whats Right And Pour My Soul On A Mic I Speak For The Ones Bussin' Guns And Bums That Have To Sleep In The Park Until The Rise Of My Father Who Disappeared Deep In The Dark I Put Pain In His Soul With Every Speach That I Start ...

03-24-2007, 06:57 PM	#2
-LATIN- -+=IAMLYRICZ=+- Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: CHI CITY/DIRTY SOUTH Posts: 1,952 Repped: 375 Repped 33 Times in 30 Posts Neg Reps: 64 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	The whole thing was tite... Some nice smooth punches Also you guys finished both verse real good Keep em coming..1 __________________

03-25-2007, 12:36 AM	#6
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	N. Streetz Hip Hop Is An Art Form & Sport Beef’s Only Aggressive Competition Wrist Watches And Wardrobes Excessive Beyond Beautician Nice opening to the topic, sets up possible fire if u continue strong Verses Related To Poetry Every Word Is Just As Important As The Last The Culture Evolved Into Something Enforcing From The Past the first line is stretched, second flows nice From Ball Point Pens & Notepads Break Dancing In Them Pro Keds To Spitting About Guns, Hoes, Crack And Dope Heads Nice flow, though its a generic line Most Come From Them Project Buildings Nosey Ladies With Broke Kids Dirty Clothes What The Results Of No Detergent Or Soap Did Music’s All We Got And Like The Great Late Notorious We Hope Big Money Is The Root Of All Evil As The Diamonds My Folks Dig Feelin these lines, STRAIGHT real talk.. Legend Like John Heaven Only Knows So Lyrically I Speak From My Heart Until The Rise Of My Father Who Disappeared Deep In The Dark I Illuminate Its Grave With Every Speech That I Start ... Sexy lines here, second and third line felt the most..hawt $cotty B We Live In An Environment Where Most Just Act Fake And Mimmick But I Still Express The Truth And Hope They Know That I Aint No Gimmick chopped flow in second line...2 bad would of been a solid opener 2 It Started Off With Earning A Rep But Now It's Wack How Rap Seems From The Grind And Losing Minds And Making Cash Off Crack Feens Straight flow right here but generic bar My Father Left Me A Bad Path I Wonder If He'll Ever See Me Follow He Took My Mind With Him I Feel Like A Victim Livin' In Sleepy Hollow This bar had an okay metta, and first i seen in this collab so far, nice I Wish I Made It Here Earlier When Lyrics Actually Mattered To Spit Seen Alot Of Shit And Im Still Unwrappen Gods Gifts But My Raps Are Legit REAL TALK in that first line... With No Light We Just Write And Let Our Days Roll On A Vike Think About Life And Whats Right And Pour My Soul On A Mic Hott ass flow but generic bar I Speak For The Ones Bussin' Guns And Bums That Have To Sleep In The Park Until The Rise Of My Father Who Disappeared Deep In The Dark I Put Pain In His Soul With Every Speach That I Start ... hott ending aswell Overall this was a nice collab, i would say N Streets looked better overall with less generic lines and starting good from the begining, wheras Scotty started off slow then had them hott flowing bars, just he had too many generic bars...7/10, nice lil collab ya'll got going, just try picking a topic less common __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

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03-24-2007, 08:04 PM	#3
mtownhustla Memphis Boi Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Memphis,TN Posts: 212 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good Ver5e5 From Both.. N.streetz=10/10 Yours-8/10

03-24-2007, 11:50 PM	#4
YoungJ Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,042 Repped: 205 Repped 391 Times in 119 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 6 Times in 6 Posts	good lookz on the feed

03-25-2007, 12:13 AM	#5
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03-25-2007, 12:50 AM	#7
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Good Lookin On The Feed ^^^^

03-25-2007, 01:24 AM	#8
Raezr Productions Banned Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Murda Mitten Michigan Posts: 2,989 Repped: 164 Repped 365 Times in 73 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hate Text, but anywayz.......Streetz verse was titest, Scotty came hard too, Black Card Gang Stand Up!!!

03-25-2007, 03:24 PM	#9
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Upping For Some Feed

03-25-2007, 04:24 PM	#10
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	jea man... i think these are some of the lines u showed me a few days ago... shits hot tho... good shit... both of you... you doin ya thing, multies, flow and punches was on point... real talk shit too... 9/10... holla

03-25-2007, 06:23 PM	#11
YoungJ Veteran Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,042 Repped: 205 Repped 391 Times in 119 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 6 Times in 6 Posts	good lookz uppin