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Shadows
Boy locked himself in his room, surrounded by shadows Put in album after album remembering all his life’s battles He knew all the words of the songs, and spit with the artist He had no friends at school, picked on because he was the smartest Cried every night and wouldn’t hesitate to cry in the morning He’d be sitting at his desk and shed tears without a warning He’d be laughed at, spat at, clapped at and half assed When his body was that gassed, He knew the feeling that passed It wasn’t a fun life, but his parents told him it wasn’t fair But his life wasn’t theirs, it was no excuse for them never there He didn’t change but he grew, and he finally took a stand Finally made the demand to be recognized as a man But it was a silent victory, he left his house that night And with fright, went out in the world to live the bigger fight And all lifes live, and all lifes lost go together to pay the greater cost A life in the shadows, is a life better lost to the cause of life’s greater cost So he was walking up the sidewalk, always armed the cold shoulder But when the rain hit harder, storms in his mind grew bolder Every night he closed his eyes, an age of his life past He was nearly 17 in a 30 year old body cast You couldn’t tell, he kept himself clean, kept to himself Family stopped looking after 8 months disregarding they wealth Milk cartons were faceless, while his mother continued the facelifts Lost boy left nameless filled with rattling thoughts like snake pits He traveled across the country, saw sights that were never seen Hard for most to believe but he was at a point many have never been I still wonder how he lived, knowing he was a walking death How he held air so sacred but every night he’d hold his breath But he’d wake up the next morning, take it as a sign from god Knowing that he didn’t have to get even just because he was odd Walked on and walked on, but he never hesitated his pace Living in the shadows with the race of death in his place And all lifes live, and all lifes lost go together to pay the greater cost A life in the shadows, is a life better lost to the cause of life’s greater cost He soon realized that people noticed, old posters that were posted About a year know and he stole it to keep it in his heart forever noted The kind of kid who was silent, finally shouted aloud And all the death around took form of shadows to soon surround He trusted these entities, and fell back into there arms They took all of his memories and turned them into charms They mislead the boy, pretended to be his friends Healed all his wounds and bandaged the cuts and bends He thought of it as a chance, saw the light threw a crack It was the first and the last time he felt a stab in the back He fell to his knee’s, they brought him closer to his goal His life had been a train wreck and they supplied the coal That night he ended it, and finished what was there to start Because for the greater cost shadows must be relinquished from the heart… And all lifes live, and all lifes lost go together to pay the greater cost A life in the shadows, is a life better lost to the cause of life’s greater cost This is just an example, of one in a few Because the shadows could of inflicted you You know the people, polite but sad though Corrupted angels filled with nothing but shadows….
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this is real nice.....flowed real good and the verses were hott.....the hook was simple yet pretty coo.....first verse was my favorite....nice shit tho...8.5/10..stay up
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Thanks, upps.
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This is nice yo..i can tell you new around here
but my lil homie Cable told me about chu but anyways this is good nice lyrics and flow was great as well 7.8/10 keep that up holla at cha bwoi |
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Thanks ......
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Banned
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Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life
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Damn This Is Some Deep Shit
He had no friends at school, picked on because he was the smartest Cried every night and wouldn’t hesitate to cry in the morning He’d be sitting at his desk and shed tears without a warning He’d be laughed at, spat at, clapped at and half assed When his body was that gassed, He knew the feeling that passed It wasn’t a fun life, but his parents told him it wasn’t fair But his life wasn’t theirs, it was no excuse for them never there ^^^My Favorite Lines Fam Maybe We'll Get A Collab In BTW Could You Rate My Drop Hip Hop's Back |
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Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO-
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thx for feed, and yeah, sure.
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