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Old 03-21-2007, 10:07 PM   #1
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Need to start droppin again (3 Bars)

I'm back wit a purpose to stab-ya-instigatin-bitches/
Ima hit ya so hard it'll have-ya-necessitatin-stitches/

I mean ya content is bullshit so i ain't scared-to-face-ya/
Ya talk so much shit that's it's only fair-to-erase-ya/

Ya wanna step to me/ One shot to crack-ya-smile/
Ima smoke you like I smoke my black-and-mild/
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Old 03-22-2007, 12:19 AM   #2
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this is crack only if its 3 bars

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Old 03-22-2007, 02:08 AM   #3
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your concepts seem just a little bit basic to me and it just seems like your bars are a little bit random. maybe its just me tho.

keep working on it
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Old 03-22-2007, 06:55 AM   #4
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all the multies were off accept for the last bar, the syllables were different..keep working on it
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Old 03-22-2007, 07:17 AM   #5
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All repped

Eric i got u on da other thread instead
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Old 03-22-2007, 09:01 PM   #6
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Could Use Alot More Work On Multis And Shit..Way Too Simple Though 6/10
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Old 03-23-2007, 11:35 AM   #7
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