Need to start droppin again (3 Bars)

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 03-21-2007, 10:07 PM

I'm back wit a purpose to stab-ya-instigatin-bitches/
Ima hit ya so hard it'll have-ya-necessitatin-stitches/

I mean ya content is bullshit so i ain't scared-to-face-ya/
Ya talk so much shit that's it's only fair-to-erase-ya/

Ya wanna step to me/ One shot to crack-ya-smile/
Ima smoke you like I smoke my black-and-mild/

єяіс є · 03-22-2007, 12:19 AM

this is crack only if its 3 bars

7/10

Ms. Anonymous · 03-22-2007, 02:08 AM

your concepts seem just a little bit basic to me and it just seems like your bars are a little bit random. maybe its just me tho.

keep working on it

-K.P- · 03-22-2007, 06:55 AM

all the multies were off accept for the last bar, the syllables were different..keep working on it

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 03-22-2007, 07:17 AM

All repped

Eric i got u on da other thread instead

Di$R3$p3(T · 03-22-2007, 09:01 PM

Could Use Alot More Work On Multis And Shit..Way Too Simple Though 6/10

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 03-23-2007, 11:35 AM

^^^REPPED^^^

All feed is good feed

03-21-2007, 10:07 PM	#1
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Need to start droppin again (3 Bars) Need to start droppin again (3 Bars) I'm back wit a purpose to stab-ya-instigatin-bitches/ Ima hit ya so hard it'll have-ya-necessitatin-stitches/ I mean ya content is bullshit so i ain't scared-to-face-ya/ Ya talk so much shit that's it's only fair-to-erase-ya/ Ya wanna step to me/ One shot to crack-ya-smile/ Ima smoke you like I smoke my black-and-mild/ __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

03-22-2007, 12:19 AM	#2
єяіс є REPPIN' THE LOX/D-BLOCK Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: On Tha' Block 24/7 Posts: 1,043 Repped: 30 Repped 333 Times in 168 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this is crack only if its 3 bars 7/10 __________________ Real Niggaz listen to Real Hip-hop

03-22-2007, 07:17 AM	#5
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	All repped Eric i got u on da other thread instead __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

03-23-2007, 11:35 AM	#7
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	^^^REPPED^^^ All feed is good feed __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

Thread Tools
Show Printable Version Email this Page
Display Modes
Linear Mode Switch to Hybrid Mode Switch to Threaded Mode

03-22-2007, 02:08 AM	#3
Ms. Anonymous Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 2 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	your concepts seem just a little bit basic to me and it just seems like your bars are a little bit random. maybe its just me tho. keep working on it

03-22-2007, 06:55 AM	#4
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	all the multies were off accept for the last bar, the syllables were different..keep working on it

03-22-2007, 09:01 PM	#6
Di$R3$p3(T [[HearT oF A ChampioN]] Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NeW JeRseY Posts: 1,049 Repped: 17 Repped 15 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Could Use Alot More Work On Multis And Shit..Way Too Simple Though 6/10