**Thinkin Aloud**

Yung MiZfit · 03-18-2007, 01:41 PM

empty thoughts of Ressurectin=Mah=Brethren, keep Protestin=Da=Reverend/
dis song da hood singz wantz me 2 bring mah smith n Wessin=Ta=Heaven/
had ta.....Sever=Wuts=Tethered between Me=N=Da=Darkness/
Fleein=Dis=Carcus of me....leavin all dis Glee=In=Da=Darkness/
now ima.....Shell=Of=Mahself....tryna Settle=Wutz=Felt/
Inside=Mah=Soul, Linez=Of=Gold...Settle=Deyself/
2 be hated on....Shitted=On.....so i got mah Fitted=On/
2 hide mah mind.....unstable foundation i'm Livin=On/
but still....i feel....im 2 fly 2 Fall=Out=Da=Sky/
unwanted battlez.....all dis pressure 2 Call=Out=Dis=Guy/
itz pleasure 4 otherz 2 see tha bad Positions=We=Placed=In/
until itz their turn...n now we juss Missin=Replacements/
and its kinda funny how all these dummies Givin=Da=Basics/
when their rhymes are basic.....i Wish=Ta=Erase=It/
...............but dont mind me...im juss thinkin=Aloud/
elevatin 2 a point....i write wut i Think=In=Da=Clouds/

.Krysis. · 03-18-2007, 02:00 PM

I Like...

That's All I Plan On Saying

LethalIsILL · 03-18-2007, 02:20 PM

i was feelin it the flow on the first bar wasnt good other than that it was good.multies were str8 the = thing is annoyin tho but most of them connected well and wasnt forced vocab was iigh better use of them then most people on here tho overall 7/10

....DeMoNiK.... · 03-18-2007, 03:16 PM

yea was up with that = sign shit
but its alright

J~Souljah · 03-19-2007, 11:14 PM

yea uppin.......

Shogun · 03-19-2007, 11:36 PM

Random randomness flawed at its foundation.

Di$R3$p3(T · 03-20-2007, 01:02 AM

Yea Keep It Coming (no Homo)...8/10

J~Souljah · 03-20-2007, 04:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shogun

Random randomness flawed at its foundation.

shogun......do u actually realize what you say

random randomness flawed at its foundation

........superb analysis

Shogun · 03-20-2007, 06:41 PM

Yes, because repeating what I posted is really a "superb" rebuttal; oh well, gay people do gay things, lawlawlawl.

mtownhustla · 03-20-2007, 06:46 PM

thi5 5hit i5 wacK

J~Souljah · 03-20-2007, 09:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shogun

Yes, because repeating what I posted is really a "superb" rebuttal; oh well, gay people do gay things, lawlawlawl.

........wow.........i didnt repeat it......it was a quote without quotationz

u make no sense at all

but thnx 4 da feed mtown w/e

Shogun · 03-21-2007, 01:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by J~Souljah

........wow.........i didnt repeat it......it was a quote without quotationz

u make no sense at all

To quote is to repeat, dummy.

J~Souljah · 03-22-2007, 04:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shogun

To quote is to repeat, dummy.

i dont consider quoting repetitive

03-18-2007, 01:41 PM	#1
Yung MiZfit Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 273 Repped: 0 Repped 9 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thinkin Aloud Thinkin Aloud empty thoughts of Ressurectin=Mah=Brethren, keep Protestin=Da=Reverend/ dis song da hood singz wantz me 2 bring mah smith n Wessin=Ta=Heaven/ had ta.....Sever=Wuts=Tethered between Me=N=Da=Darkness/ Fleein=Dis=Carcus of me....leavin all dis Glee=In=Da=Darkness/ now ima.....Shell=Of=Mahself....tryna Settle=Wutz=Felt/ Inside=Mah=Soul, Linez=Of=Gold...Settle=Deyself/ 2 be hated on....Shitted=On.....so i got mah Fitted=On/ 2 hide mah mind.....unstable foundation i'm Livin=On/ but still....i feel....im 2 fly 2 Fall=Out=Da=Sky/ unwanted battlez.....all dis pressure 2 Call=Out=Dis=Guy/ itz pleasure 4 otherz 2 see tha bad Positions=We=Placed=In/ until itz their turn...n now we juss Missin=Replacements/ and its kinda funny how all these dummies Givin=Da=Basics/ when their rhymes are basic.....i Wish=Ta=Erase=It/ ...............but dont mind me...im juss thinkin=Aloud/ elevatin 2 a point....i write wut i Think=In=Da=Clouds/

03-18-2007, 02:00 PM	#2
.Krysis. AkA Riskz Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 3,253 Repped: 479 Repped 742 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I Like... That's All I Plan On Saying __________________ "I'm the Archbishop of this rap shit, excommunicate.. faith from my narrative, you don't want no arms like Hans Blix, watch me clamp this, like lock jaw, smack you so hard your frame took flight & soared like a Condor".

03-18-2007, 02:20 PM	#3
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,014 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	i was feelin it the flow on the first bar wasnt good other than that it was good.multies were str8 the = thing is annoyin tho but most of them connected well and wasnt forced vocab was iigh better use of them then most people on here tho overall 7/10 __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

03-18-2007, 03:16 PM	#4
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yea was up with that = sign shit but its alright __________________ RASD

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03-19-2007, 11:14 PM	#5
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	yea uppin.......

03-19-2007, 11:36 PM	#6
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Random randomness flawed at its foundation.

03-20-2007, 01:02 AM	#7
Di$R3$p3(T [[HearT oF A ChampioN]] Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NeW JeRseY Posts: 1,049 Repped: 17 Repped 15 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Yea Keep It Coming (no Homo)...8/10

03-20-2007, 06:41 PM	#9
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Yes, because repeating what I posted is really a "superb" rebuttal; oh well, gay people do gay things, lawlawlawl.

03-20-2007, 06:46 PM	#10
mtownhustla Memphis Boi Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Memphis,TN Posts: 212 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thi5 5hit i5 wacK