**Hood Reflection**

Yung MiZfit · 03-18-2007, 12:56 PM

erase you off the face of the earth, Run=In=Ya=Spot/
Money=Is=Stocked, got da "cheese"...Funny=Or=Not/
............stay off da corna boi cuz Dunny=Is=Hot/
cats=wild for crack=viles.....put 1=In=Ya=Sock/
...n u kno im Runnin=Ya=Block/
n u might not get got if you witty, apparently Sum=Of=Em=Not/
..............n i gotta keep Sum=In=Da=Glock/
cuz dey grimy n wanna find=me n put 1=In=Da=Drop/
Sum=Of=Dem=Cops love to hate, Love=It=Or=Not/
sum boroughs wanna be thorough but Runnin=Wit=SWAT/
crack so good, you cant just cop 1=Of=Mah=Rocks/
Run=From=Da=Cops, civilians Run=In=Ta=Shots/
hearin semi shots on the block, None=Of=Dem=Dropped/
hearin mothers cryin, talkin bout her Son=Could=Get=Shot/
...........stay on my time, why you Frontin=Da=Clock/
...in dis rap game, i was neva Wantin=Ta=Stop/

LethalIsILL · 03-18-2007, 02:23 PM

this was iigh other one was better multies were good but got borin cause
you were using the same rhymin ones throughout the verse 6.5/10

Dirty Words · 03-19-2007, 09:51 AM

It was cool up to the last few bars coz you started sayin' "shot" a lot wich made it seem like you were runnin' out of things to say.. I'm not much for "hood" drops in text but this was decent, nice flow and multis, you should take a crack at audio if you haven't already.. Keep doin' ya thing..

dLittles~ · 03-19-2007, 10:23 AM

so what... yaw rate shit on how many of these = = = = you come up with or is that the only way some people can understand how it rhyme

J~Souljah · 03-19-2007, 04:26 PM

no i put it there cuz i'm tired of usin spaces or - or ~.......

thx 4 da feed lethal n dirty

n dirty........i already do audio......

das y mah bars arent stretched

im still tryna remember how 2 do text

Dirty Words · 03-19-2007, 06:24 PM

Wooo yay maryland :)

J~Souljah · 03-19-2007, 11:13 PM

chea...charm city raised

Di$R3$p3(T · 03-20-2007, 01:01 AM

I Loved This Peice Of Work..Aha Nah im Fuking Around It Was Tight Though 7/10

03-18-2007, 12:56 PM	#1
Yung MiZfit Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 273 Repped: 0 Repped 9 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hood Reflection Hood Reflection erase you off the face of the earth, Run=In=Ya=Spot/ Money=Is=Stocked, got da "cheese"...Funny=Or=Not/ ............stay off da corna boi cuz Dunny=Is=Hot/ cats=wild for crack=viles.....put 1=In=Ya=Sock/ ...n u kno im Runnin=Ya=Block/ n u might not get got if you witty, apparently Sum=Of=Em=Not/ ..............n i gotta keep Sum=In=Da=Glock/ cuz dey grimy n wanna find=me n put 1=In=Da=Drop/ Sum=Of=Dem=Cops love to hate, Love=It=Or=Not/ sum boroughs wanna be thorough but Runnin=Wit=SWAT/ crack so good, you cant just cop 1=Of=Mah=Rocks/ Run=From=Da=Cops, civilians Run=In=Ta=Shots/ hearin semi shots on the block, None=Of=Dem=Dropped/ hearin mothers cryin, talkin bout her Son=Could=Get=Shot/ ...........stay on my time, why you Frontin=Da=Clock/ ...in dis rap game, i was neva Wantin=Ta=Stop/

03-18-2007, 02:23 PM	#2
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,964 Repped: 138 Repped 1,010 Times in 217 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	this was iigh other one was better multies were good but got borin cause you were using the same rhymin ones throughout the verse 6.5/10 __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

03-19-2007, 09:51 AM	#3
Dirty Words ..Better Than You.. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: ..Maryland.. Posts: 54 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	It was cool up to the last few bars coz you started sayin' "shot" a lot wich made it seem like you were runnin' out of things to say.. I'm not much for "hood" drops in text but this was decent, nice flow and multis, you should take a crack at audio if you haven't already.. Keep doin' ya thing.. __________________

03-19-2007, 06:24 PM	#6
Dirty Words ..Better Than You.. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: ..Maryland.. Posts: 54 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wooo yay maryland :) __________________

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03-19-2007, 10:23 AM	#4
dLittles~ General Population~ Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 14 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	so what... yaw rate shit on how many of these = = = = you come up with or is that the only way some people can understand how it rhyme

03-19-2007, 04:26 PM	#5
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	no i put it there cuz i'm tired of usin spaces or - or ~....... thx 4 da feed lethal n dirty n dirty........i already do audio...... das y mah bars arent stretched im still tryna remember how 2 do text

03-19-2007, 11:13 PM	#7
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	chea...charm city raised

03-20-2007, 01:01 AM	#8
Di$R3$p3(T [[HearT oF A ChampioN]] Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: NeW JeRseY Posts: 1,049 Repped: 17 Repped 15 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 6 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	I Loved This Peice Of Work..Aha Nah im Fuking Around It Was Tight Though 7/10