Like I'm Batman (Oh my geezus another nbser)

Dirty Words · 03-18-2007, 12:23 AM

Yes I had to put that in the title, figured it'd get y'all to look =/..

It's like I'm batman (batman) livin' in a mask
With these two face niggas just tryna get my cash
So I.. flip a coin tryna get my mind right
But it seems that my symbol's always in the limelight
So I crime fight.. two horns on my head
Coz I'm makin' devil music is what they moms said
But they.. all shallow, I'm not mad though
Keep to myself, walk in the dark shadows
..Skie's the limit.. that's true, y'all
Still thinkin' that I'm swingin', leapin' off the roof tops
..Nah, passed it, got a cloud, grabbed it
Smoked the motha fucka then I vanished like magic
..Not ready then ya bound to choke
The cape float and I gone in a cloud of smoke
..A lost soul in a town of nonsense
But all the criminals in the town, I got them

(Pause)

I can't sleep coz I'm forced awake
I ain't affraid but I just can't show my face
And it's strange.. coz I got good intentions
But still cops wanna have me arrested
Don't need a vest coz I dodge ya shots
I'm the bad guy still people stop to watch
They don't know me just the lies they heard
Laid back on the couch puffin' Ivy's herb
But there's more than the bat cave when I have dames
Just let the light save 'er, don't need distracting
I look to the sky and I see a star war
No peace anywhere so I'm stop go-in'
And tryin' to change shit.. stay on the dark side
Turn my head to any issues that are not mine
It's a cruel world.. yeah they hate ya so
Ya change clothes, ya swag and ya change ya soul
..All of this for a strangers eye
Maybe this'll make sense on the day you die

Too lazy too read? -

....DeMoNiK.... · 03-18-2007, 12:30 AM

its good on audio
flows well..nicely put ya feel me.. i liked it

dirty words you gettin good keep that up

Dirty Words · 03-18-2007, 02:13 PM

Thanks man,

Uppin' for some more feed.. please..?

Yung MiZfit · 03-18-2007, 02:18 PM

.....ya flow was good.......im guessing you do audio or you wrote this to a beat..........concept was also good.....your thoughts were expressed well.........decent multies.........7.35/10

holla

return da favor on mah drop if u want

~Menace~ · 03-18-2007, 03:27 PM

ya i really enjoyed this...u had some nice meta's, n a nice flow...sick beat also...i also like tha star wars ish...overall= hot track...i heard this before BTW =)

....DeMoNiK.... · 03-18-2007, 03:29 PM

haha..i just noticed that to it was a personal in ya battle

03-18-2007, 12:23 AM	#1
Dirty Words ..Better Than You.. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: ..Maryland.. Posts: 54 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Like I'm Batman (Oh my geezus another nbser) Like I'm Batman (Oh my geezus another nbser) Yes I had to put that in the title, figured it'd get y'all to look =/.. It's like I'm batman (batman) livin' in a mask With these two face niggas just tryna get my cash So I.. flip a coin tryna get my mind right But it seems that my symbol's always in the limelight So I crime fight.. two horns on my head Coz I'm makin' devil music is what they moms said But they.. all shallow, I'm not mad though Keep to myself, walk in the dark shadows ..Skie's the limit.. that's true, y'all Still thinkin' that I'm swingin', leapin' off the roof tops ..Nah, passed it, got a cloud, grabbed it Smoked the motha fucka then I vanished like magic ..Not ready then ya bound to choke The cape float and I gone in a cloud of smoke ..A lost soul in a town of nonsense But all the criminals in the town, I got them (Pause) I can't sleep coz I'm forced awake I ain't affraid but I just can't show my face And it's strange.. coz I got good intentions But still cops wanna have me arrested Don't need a vest coz I dodge ya shots I'm the bad guy still people stop to watch They don't know me just the lies they heard Laid back on the couch puffin' Ivy's herb But there's more than the bat cave when I have dames Just let the light save 'er, don't need distracting I look to the sky and I see a star war No peace anywhere so I'm stop go-in' And tryin' to change shit.. stay on the dark side Turn my head to any issues that are not mine It's a cruel world.. yeah they hate ya so Ya change clothes, ya swag and ya change ya soul ..All of this for a strangers eye Maybe this'll make sense on the day you die Too lazy too read? - __________________

03-18-2007, 12:30 AM	#2
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	its good on audio flows well..nicely put ya feel me.. i liked it dirty words you gettin good keep that up __________________ RASD

03-18-2007, 02:13 PM	#3
Dirty Words ..Better Than You.. Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: ..Maryland.. Posts: 54 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks man, Uppin' for some more feed.. please..? __________________

03-18-2007, 03:29 PM	#6
....DeMoNiK.... Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 944 Repped: 3 Repped 27 Times in 19 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	haha..i just noticed that to it was a personal in ya battle __________________ RASD

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03-18-2007, 02:18 PM	#4
Yung MiZfit Join Date: Dec 2006 Posts: 273 Repped: 0 Repped 9 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	.....ya flow was good.......im guessing you do audio or you wrote this to a beat..........concept was also good.....your thoughts were expressed well.........decent multies.........7.35/10 holla return da favor on mah drop if u want

03-18-2007, 03:27 PM	#5
~Menace~ Lonnel- Virgin Join Date: May 2006 Location: AZ ho Posts: 1,753 Repped: 116 Repped 38 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ya i really enjoyed this...u had some nice meta's, n a nice flow...sick beat also...i also like tha star wars ish...overall= hot track...i heard this before BTW =)