Tha Depths Of A Thought (Deep Shit, Been A Minute)

♪Spoken Word♪ · 03-17-2007, 05:36 PM

i'm movin wit this vibe, call it poetry in motion..
as i close my eyes and open these emotions..
tha more i stay shut, tha closer to demotion..
devotion is a strong pride, captured by assumptions..
so keep high chins, even if laughed at by tha public..
opinions never matter, who can ratify a judgement?..
but i sit & wonder, is there a reason for us breathin?..
or is mother earth canibalistic & just needs us for tha bleeding?..
her every need satisfied & drivin by passionette cries..
life easily slips so tha heart beat that is captured inside..
can either steady pace or stop, but we have to decide..
cuz that simple thought of suicides in tha back of ya mind..
death rings tha bell, crackin tha chime, lifes flashin designs..
god and satan both hold your soul, so trapped in a twine..
so lemme ask you, whats tha choice that'll pass throu ya mind?..
either die heavenly or devilish, what do your actions imply?..!!

Jea Man... I'm Tryna Get Away From All That Gun Talk And Shit... Holla At Tha Kid

Lyrikcha · 03-17-2007, 05:40 PM

thats what im talkin bout man...I see to many people talk about guns in every song...thats why i dont rap about that shit, well i dont do that shit anyways so why would i rap about it...but this was good unlike that lil nigga CC who think he the text Nas

♪Spoken Word♪ · 03-17-2007, 06:16 PM

jea man... props on tha feed... keep that shit comin

LMFAO @ LYRIKs SIG

♪Spoken Word♪ · 03-17-2007, 11:00 PM

sleep much? YUUUPPP

Raichu · 03-17-2007, 11:06 PM

Hot shit man.

JR-One · 03-17-2007, 11:07 PM

Get At Me On Aim.. ..

Lyrical Messiah · 03-17-2007, 11:47 PM

Nice Comeback Bro I Already Told You How I Felt About This On Aim

♪Spoken Word♪ · 03-18-2007, 12:22 AM

much props peoples... keep that feedback comin

♪Spoken Word♪ · 03-18-2007, 11:25 AM

come on now... im hungry

J~Souljah · 03-18-2007, 12:19 PM

hmmmm.....this was good......multiez were nice towardz tha end...vocab was decent.......demotion n assumption dont rhyme.....but tha main problem i have with dropz like these iz that people start rambling on about nonsense in the process of trying to sound "enlightened"......it seemed that u struggled with this a little in this drop but i liked it.......7/10

holla

Komplex · 03-18-2007, 05:22 PM

but i sit & wonder, is there a reason for us breathin?..
or is mother earth canibalistic & just needs us for tha bleeding?..
her every need satisfied & drivin by passionette cries..
life easily slips so tha heart beat that is captured inside..

I can tell u put passion into this one.

the lyrics is deep, fa real. flow and vocab was good too. stay up.

03-17-2007, 05:36 PM	#1
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Tha Depths Of A Thought (Deep Shit, Been A Minute) Tha Depths Of A Thought (Deep Shit, Been A Minute) i'm movin wit this vibe, call it poetry in motion.. as i close my eyes and open these emotions.. tha more i stay shut, tha closer to demotion.. devotion is a strong pride, captured by assumptions.. so keep high chins, even if laughed at by tha public.. opinions never matter, who can ratify a judgement?.. but i sit & wonder, is there a reason for us breathin?.. or is mother earth canibalistic & just needs us for tha bleeding?.. her every need satisfied & drivin by passionette cries.. life easily slips so tha heart beat that is captured inside.. can either steady pace or stop, but we have to decide.. cuz that simple thought of suicides in tha back of ya mind.. death rings tha bell, crackin tha chime, lifes flashin designs.. god and satan both hold your soul, so trapped in a twine.. so lemme ask you, whats tha choice that'll pass throu ya mind?.. either die heavenly or devilish, what do your actions imply?..!! Jea Man... I'm Tryna Get Away From All That Gun Talk And Shit... Holla At Tha Kid

03-17-2007, 05:40 PM	#2
Lyrikcha So Kiss my ass BIOTCHES Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: woodbridge, VA Posts: 6,371 Repped: 11 Repped 792 Times in 297 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 56 Times in 44 Posts	thats what im talkin bout man...I see to many people talk about guns in every song...thats why i dont rap about that shit, well i dont do that shit anyways so why would i rap about it...but this was good unlike that lil nigga CC who think he the text Nas __________________ No, I don't like you, Yes, you are a better emcee then Chambers, I give props where props are due.-Smoke1Life

03-17-2007, 11:07 PM	#6
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,021 Repped: 19 Repped 52 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Get At Me On Aim.. .. __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

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03-17-2007, 06:16 PM	#3
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	jea man... props on tha feed... keep that shit comin LMFAO @ LYRIKs SIG

03-17-2007, 11:00 PM	#4
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	sleep much? YUUUPPP

03-17-2007, 11:06 PM	#5
Raichu Banned Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: Yonkers Posts: 2,558 Repped: 435 Repped 91 Times in 49 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Hot shit man.

03-17-2007, 11:47 PM	#7
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Nice Comeback Bro I Already Told You How I Felt About This On Aim

03-18-2007, 12:22 AM	#8
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	much props peoples... keep that feedback comin

03-18-2007, 11:25 AM	#9
♪Spoken Word♪ Banned Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Lawrence, Mass. Posts: 1,293 Repped: 54 Repped 122 Times in 53 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	come on now... im hungry

03-18-2007, 12:19 PM	#10
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	hmmmm.....this was good......multiez were nice towardz tha end...vocab was decent.......demotion n assumption dont rhyme.....but tha main problem i have with dropz like these iz that people start rambling on about nonsense in the process of trying to sound "enlightened"......it seemed that u struggled with this a little in this drop but i liked it.......7/10 holla

03-18-2007, 05:22 PM	#11
Komplex Poetic Swagger Join Date: Sep 2006 Posts: 1,164 Repped: 117 Repped 99 Times in 50 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	but i sit & wonder, is there a reason for us breathin?.. or is mother earth canibalistic & just needs us for tha bleeding?.. her every need satisfied & drivin by passionette cries.. life easily slips so tha heart beat that is captured inside.. I can tell u put passion into this one. the lyrics is deep, fa real. flow and vocab was good too. stay up.