Fallen Souljaz (NBS Written)

Dylerius · 03-16-2007, 06:23 PM

[Verse 1]
Lance, it's been awhile since youve passed
never would have thought i'd make it to be the last
the night you died, i wont lie, i cried
but in front of the homies, i kept my eyes dried
we poured out liquor, Hennessy to be exact
"fight to the death" we agreed would be the pact
jammed in the caddy, strapped, patiently waiting
smart motherf*ckers, they didnt take the bait and
two weeks had passed since the tragic day
all we could do was sit back and hit the yay
we wanted to kill those f*ckers for wut they did
but two of the homies f*cked up n both did bids
i can still remember, f*cked up, poppin pills
you made me promise if u died, clip up n kill
i miss you dog, my brother for eternity yo
it was homocide, only eighteen years old

[Hook x2]
Another Day Goes By, I Sit And Wonder Why
Forever On My Mind, Wishing That I Was Blind

[Verse 2]
James, you went a little differently
f*cked a dime and ended up with HIV
we tried to tell you, she went around
called us liars, but now who's the clown?
in a coffin you lay, six feet deep
was one night really worth eternal sleep?
let's be real, i miss you man, but your not here
let's be real, i love you man, but your not here
i guess it was destiny
for you to f*ck that P*SSY
at the funeral, i couldnt cry for you
your own stupidity, didnt think it was true
brothers? then why didnt u listen?
now its too late, your spirits here but your bodies missin
brothers? then why didnt u listen to me?
now its too late, James, R.I.P 2003

[Hook x2]

[Verse 3]
at a young age, started to get in trouble
twelve years old, takin shots in the double
he was a strate kid, always took sh*t
til late one nite, he caught one from a clip
from that day on, never left the crib witout a gun
one on his hip, knew that it was never fun
watched as all his frends got lowered in caskets
swore to everyone that he would get those bastards
no one understood him, thought he was a punk
til a neighborhood kingpin shoved him in a trunk
made him slang drugs to get the paper
started to like it, turned to an everyday caper
then sumone tried to rob him for eight G's
the kid grabbed a gun and squeezed to the breeze
he killed the theif, blood on his hands, alone
the fallen soldier is me, that nite i lost my soul

JR-One · 03-16-2007, 08:07 PM

Lmfao.. ..

What Clever Rhymes..!.. Para Ejemple:

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fob Jr.

no one understood him, thought he was a punk
til a neighborhood kingpin shoved him in a trunk

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr. Fantastic

at a young age, started to get in trouble
twelve years old, takin shots in the double

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nobunny Smiling

from that day on, never left the crib witout a gun
one on his hip, knew that it was never fun

Shit, That Was Amazing.. .. Out Of 10.. .. I'd Probably Give You.. ..
Hmmmm.. ..

0.. ..

On The Real Though.. .. This Was Bad.. .. It Didn't Showcase Rhyming Ability Whatsoever.. .. It Featured Basic 1 Syllable Multies Throughout.. .. The Story Was Unoriginal, It's Been Done By Pretty Much Every Rookie MC.. .. Rapping About Fallen Homies Albeit Most Of The Time The Entire Thing Being Fictional (Much Like Your Free, I Assume).. .. Anyways, I Stand By The 0/10.. ..

Sniper Locs · 03-16-2007, 08:22 PM

dose why do you capitalize all your words, just makes your dumbass look even more retarded

Jay Hussle · 03-16-2007, 08:24 PM

^

Dont Be Mad Because Your Slow And Keep Up With Words
He Types If Your Dumbass Dont Understand Get A Fucking
Dictionary Capitalize Words Dont Mean Shit
Let Me Ask You This Though Why Are You So Wack

JR-One · 03-16-2007, 08:50 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr.Slow Flow

dose why do you capitalize all your words, just makes your dumbass look even more retarded

Because When I Made This Alias.. .. I Started Doing It.. .. To Look Stylistic & Super Coolie.. .. Then When I Came Out As Dose, I Just Kept Doing It Because I Already Had 150 Posts Or So Typing Capitalized.. .. The Same Way That The U.S. Uses The US Customary System To Measure Things.. .. Even Though It's A Nonsensical System.. ..

M. Expo · 03-16-2007, 10:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by JR-One

Lmfao.. ..

What Clever Rhymes..!.. Para Ejemple:

Shit, That Was Amazing.. .. Out Of 10.. .. I'd Probably Give You.. ..
Hmmmm.. ..

0.. ..

On The Real Though.. .. This Was Bad.. .. It Didn't Showcase Rhyming Ability Whatsoever.. .. It Featured Basic 1 Syllable Multies Throughout.. .. The Story Was Unoriginal, It's Been Done By Pretty Much Every Rookie MC.. .. Rapping About Fallen Homies Albeit Most Of The Time The Entire Thing Being Fictional (Much Like Your Free, I Assume).. .. Anyways, I Stand By The 0/10.. ..

one syllable multies?????

Dylerius · 03-16-2007, 10:30 PM

ok first of all...that shits from the heart

n yall r jus puttin my shit down becuz NBS owns u fuckin faggots

Over_Flow · 03-17-2007, 10:03 AM

tfa. dirtywords, ne1 and some other nbs cats are good.....but u makin them look bad

JR-One · 03-17-2007, 08:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by M. Expo

one syllable multies?????

Rather Than Saying "Multiple Rhyming" I Used "One Syllable Multies".. .. I Know The Difference Between A Multi And Multiple Rhymes.. ..
What I Should've Said Is: Dylerius, You Were Using Extremely Simple Rookie-esque Multiple Rhymes Throughout.. ..

Happy..?..

03-16-2007, 06:23 PM	#1
Dylerius N-B-S Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: South Jersey Posts: 25 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Fallen Souljaz (NBS Written) Fallen Souljaz (NBS Written) [Verse 1] Lance, it's been awhile since youve passed never would have thought i'd make it to be the last the night you died, i wont lie, i cried but in front of the homies, i kept my eyes dried we poured out liquor, Hennessy to be exact "fight to the death" we agreed would be the pact jammed in the caddy, strapped, patiently waiting smart motherfckers, they didnt take the bait and two weeks had passed since the tragic day all we could do was sit back and hit the yay we wanted to kill those fckers for wut they did but two of the homies fcked up n both did bids i can still remember, fcked up, poppin pills you made me promise if u died, clip up n kill i miss you dog, my brother for eternity yo it was homocide, only eighteen years old [Hook x2] Another Day Goes By, I Sit And Wonder Why Forever On My Mind, Wishing That I Was Blind [Verse 2] James, you went a little differently fcked a dime and ended up with HIV we tried to tell you, she went around called us liars, but now who's the clown? in a coffin you lay, six feet deep was one night really worth eternal sleep? let's be real, i miss you man, but your not here let's be real, i love you man, but your not here i guess it was destiny for you to fck that PSSY at the funeral, i couldnt cry for you your own stupidity, didnt think it was true brothers? then why didnt u listen? now its too late, your spirits here but your bodies missin brothers? then why didnt u listen to me? now its too late, James, R.I.P 2003 [Hook x2] [Verse 3] at a young age, started to get in trouble twelve years old, takin shots in the double he was a strate kid, always took sht til late one nite, he caught one from a clip from that day on, never left the crib witout a gun one on his hip, knew that it was never fun watched as all his frends got lowered in caskets swore to everyone that he would get those bastards no one understood him, thought he was a punk til a neighborhood kingpin shoved him in a trunk made him slang drugs to get the paper started to like it, turned to an everyday caper then sumone tried to rob him for eight G's the kid grabbed a gun and squeezed to the breeze he killed the theif, blood on his hands, alone the fallen soldier is me, that nite i lost my soul

03-16-2007, 08:24 PM	#4
Jay Hussle Unimaginable Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: SoufSide Posts: 535 Repped: 0 Repped 52 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ Dont Be Mad Because Your Slow And Keep Up With Words He Types If Your Dumbass Dont Understand Get A Fucking Dictionary Capitalize Words Dont Mean Shit Let Me Ask You This Though Why Are You So Wack __________________ Vakill-Worst Fears Confirmed

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03-16-2007, 08:22 PM	#3
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	dose why do you capitalize all your words, just makes your dumbass look even more retarded

03-16-2007, 10:30 PM	#7
Dylerius N-B-S Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: South Jersey Posts: 25 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ok first of all...that shits from the heart n yall r jus puttin my shit down becuz NBS owns u fuckin faggots

03-17-2007, 10:03 AM	#8
Over_Flow Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Queens. NY Posts: 2,793 Repped: 525 Repped 939 Times in 277 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	tfa. dirtywords, ne1 and some other nbs cats are good.....but u makin them look bad