Sunshine

/-Ne 1-\ · 03-16-2007, 06:17 PM

My Sunshine, Brightens My Life With Every Smile She Sends
And Can Mend A Broken Spirit With Some Bacon And Eggs
My Light In These Cold Days Frozen Streets And Hard Faces
My Stressed Thoughts With Retrospective Talks, She Replaces
A Down Chick, Not Scared To Get Dirty, Fresh To Def As Well
Even Through Dreams, Her Angelic Figure Tends To Prevail
Personality Matches Whats Benenath, A Fight Not Most Would Win
Light Skin Caresses My Iris, Regret Blinks, Open To Look Again
Hoping To Take Our Relationship To An Even Higher Ground
Considering When I See You Words Can't Manage Out My Mouth
But Your Inner Beauty Seems To Attract Brief Conversations
While Your Outter Figure Keeps My Thoughts Salivatin'
A Love-Hate I Love Your Being And Hate My Own Weakness
Your Beauty Swells My Insides, Preventing Me From Speakin
No Progression, I Hope I Could Overcome My Fear Of Rejection
Because The Seconds Im With You Can Be Described As Perfection

Chorus:
The One To Make A Pair, The Second Person To My Family
One I'm Willing To Walk Over Thresholds Of Past Amity
The One To Whom I'm One With, Our Spirits Intertwined
My Own, My Light, My Heart, My Love, My Sunshine

I Want You In My Life, The Only One I Looked To For Support
When The Rest Doubted My Brain, Unspoken Words, And My Heart
My Deepest Love's Been Sparked, With Your Encouragin Words
Flurries Of Blurs Is My Whole Life With You, No Hurries Occur
Black Berries Ain't Her, Gifts To Her Are Only Decorations
And Brushes Off Lint As Much As She Does Other's Speculations
The Last Piece To My Puzzle, Missing Link To My Happiness
And Her Finesse Speaks For Her Loudly, Like A Silent Activist
I'd Cry For You, Cry With You, Take Your Pain And Shield Your Heart
We'd Be One Love And One Light With One Whic And One Spark
And One Arc As We Float Over The Seas Of Mere Friendship
With Forever On Both Sides Of Our Boat In Clear Penmenship

Chorus:
The One To Make A Pair, The Second Person To My Family
One I'm Willing To Walk Over Thresholds Of Past Amity
The One To Whom I'm One With, Our Spirits Intertwined
My Own, My Light, My Heart, My Love, My Sunshine

M. Expo · 03-16-2007, 11:12 PM

ohh....................

M. Expo · 03-16-2007, 11:13 PM

i have to wait 30 seconds in between posts!!!!

Hazerd · 03-16-2007, 11:21 PM

Nbs All Day! Aye!

/-Ne 1-\ · 03-17-2007, 12:44 AM

Lol @ This Feed.. Uppppppppp

HH4ll · 03-17-2007, 12:50 AM

yes this was very good, dope concepts, new outlooks on the \'ode to ___ female\' piece, good imagery with some dope similies and metas. . .nice job

check out my piece: last pill in the bottle

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The GFather101 · 03-17-2007, 12:51 AM

Thats wazzup!

03-16-2007, 06:17 PM	#1
/-Ne 1-\ ~~~~~~~~~~1~~~~~~~~~~ $/-Ne 1-\'s Avatar$ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: CA Posts: 69 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts $/-Ne 1-\ not very known on the site$	Sunshine Sunshine My Sunshine, Brightens My Life With Every Smile She Sends And Can Mend A Broken Spirit With Some Bacon And Eggs My Light In These Cold Days Frozen Streets And Hard Faces My Stressed Thoughts With Retrospective Talks, She Replaces A Down Chick, Not Scared To Get Dirty, Fresh To Def As Well Even Through Dreams, Her Angelic Figure Tends To Prevail Personality Matches Whats Benenath, A Fight Not Most Would Win Light Skin Caresses My Iris, Regret Blinks, Open To Look Again Hoping To Take Our Relationship To An Even Higher Ground Considering When I See You Words Can't Manage Out My Mouth But Your Inner Beauty Seems To Attract Brief Conversations While Your Outter Figure Keeps My Thoughts Salivatin' A Love-Hate I Love Your Being And Hate My Own Weakness Your Beauty Swells My Insides, Preventing Me From Speakin No Progression, I Hope I Could Overcome My Fear Of Rejection Because The Seconds Im With You Can Be Described As Perfection Chorus: The One To Make A Pair, The Second Person To My Family One I'm Willing To Walk Over Thresholds Of Past Amity The One To Whom I'm One With, Our Spirits Intertwined My Own, My Light, My Heart, My Love, My Sunshine I Want You In My Life, The Only One I Looked To For Support When The Rest Doubted My Brain, Unspoken Words, And My Heart My Deepest Love's Been Sparked, With Your Encouragin Words Flurries Of Blurs Is My Whole Life With You, No Hurries Occur Black Berries Ain't Her, Gifts To Her Are Only Decorations And Brushes Off Lint As Much As She Does Other's Speculations The Last Piece To My Puzzle, Missing Link To My Happiness And Her Finesse Speaks For Her Loudly, Like A Silent Activist I'd Cry For You, Cry With You, Take Your Pain And Shield Your Heart We'd Be One Love And One Light With One Whic And One Spark And One Arc As We Float Over The Seas Of Mere Friendship With Forever On Both Sides Of Our Boat In Clear Penmenship Chorus: The One To Make A Pair, The Second Person To My Family One I'm Willing To Walk Over Thresholds Of Past Amity The One To Whom I'm One With, Our Spirits Intertwined My Own, My Light, My Heart, My Love, My Sunshine
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03-16-2007, 11:21 PM	#4
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03-17-2007, 12:44 AM	#5
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03-16-2007, 11:12 PM	#2
M. Expo Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 166 Repped: 20 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ohh....................

03-16-2007, 11:13 PM	#3
M. Expo Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 166 Repped: 20 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	i have to wait 30 seconds in between posts!!!!

03-17-2007, 12:50 AM	#6
HH4ll Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 197 Repped: 9 Repped 36 Times in 14 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	yes this was very good, dope concepts, new outlooks on the \'ode to ___ female\' piece, good imagery with some dope similies and metas. . .nice job check out my piece: last pill in the bottle 1

03-17-2007, 12:51 AM	#7
The GFather101 ~Reppin Nobodysmiling~ Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NY The Great! Posts: 3 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thats wazzup!