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Old 03-16-2007, 03:14 PM   #1
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Posted This On Another Site, And Got Practically No Feed....It's Me And Bstill

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Being Strucken With These Media Showers, Corruption, Death Cancelled Out Beautiful Flowers
Tried To Help Me Come To Grip With The Towers, And Think Of The French As Imperical Froglike Cowards
Things Unwanted Strollin In And Huntin My Mind, Buffalo Soldier Thoughts, The Way The Intelligence Unwinds
Right Side Think For The Left Brain Unwantedly Intertwined, Leavin Hopelessness, Can't Even Throw A Why To Mankind
Media Shown Only To Make Money Standards, And Explain That Every Person Will One Day Die Of Cancer
Askin Questions, How Come I Get Evasive Answers? Propangda Kick Boxing My Mind In, Like Square Dancers
The Media Showers, Also Oblitterate Billboards, Some Images Shouldn't Be Seen Slicin Through Ya Retina Like Ten Swords
Taking Over My Cerebelum Then Over To The Spinal Cord, Last Time People Moved Slow With Minds Boxed In Was In A T Ford
Television, Radio, Computer Mind Extortion, It Tells You What To Think, Mostly It's Blown Out Of Proportion
Your Mind Isn't Thinkin Because Of Them Forcing, Choose Life?, They'll Make You Choose An Unwanted Abortion
All This Media Is Makin People's Vision Tainted, Literally, But Also When What They Witness Is Blood Red Painted
Meaning That War Is Necessary, And Hero's Shall Be Sainted, But To Also Pay Respects To The Imortal Lives Fainted
The Cold Hard Cases, And You Know Kids See-It, When The Coldest Thing In They're Minds Should Be A 'Nana Split
Of Course Not How Every Mafia Man, Has A Building Permit, And How Every Hardworking Man Can't Make It Legit
No More Thinkin, And No More Readin Marvelous Books, History Blows, So Now It's About Prodigious Crooks
Bibles Tucked Away In Religious Nooks, And The Most Educational Thing On The Tube Is Bam! Emotional Cooks
But It Must Be The Age We Live In, Cause Theres Been A Numbing Wall Up Ever Since The Fall In Berlin
And Producers Not Filled With Chagrin, Even Though What They Put Out Is Causing A Mental Pandemic To Begin
People Shook, And They Don't Even Know, Incoporating Mental Retardation, Almost Like America Is Blowin The Snow
Look At The Programmed Shows, It Went Downhill From "I Love Lucy", To Now "I Love Flava Flav's Ex-Hoe."

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Embedded in dreaded mediums, playback of encryption styled news
Fools! Alarms have sounded yet our public is dangerously a snooze
Mental subscriptions faithfully climb while conscriptions are primed
High definition broadcasts’ define ‘skewed lines’ perilously ill-timed

‘Media-Showers’ devour journalistic credibility each and every hour
Flower powered poisons pulse thru societal veins as intellects cower
The ‘main-stream’ screams of fabrication, alienation and ripe deceit
Wipe your feet on the backs of great nations, footprints left by elites

Socialist cleats scuff my marbled floors and stomp more than just ash
Assets liquidated by the flood waters of Babylon pouring thru my stash
If there was ever a great story to tell, it surely is: ‘News flash from hell’
You’ve been enslaved and caved by information portrayed as ‘INTEL’

Corruption rings loud when network jerks ‘LINE’ contents for perks
An army of ‘anchors’ weigh down the masses and schlemiel twerps
‘False doctrines’ and executive clad grins fueled by the virtues of sin
Poison our information highways with every angle the ‘media’ spins

Modern age scribes strike at the fabric of lives in a complex tapestry
Woven lies & gadget like spies blanket our minds in a……………….....
.………………………………………................Media-Showered Catastrophe
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this was fucking dope. . .imagery, vocab, concepts were amazing. . .the topica was fresh and dope also. . .damn. . .shit was nice. . .
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Old 03-16-2007, 05:02 PM   #3
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Thanks Tyrant...Much Appreciated.
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Old 03-16-2007, 09:58 PM   #4
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Old 03-16-2007, 10:16 PM   #5
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ya i really liked the topic, creative...both came very good with vocabulary, though if it would've been MORE in the rhyme scheme i think that would've made it better...i also like that even though u guyz were on tha same topic, u could still distinguish the difference in your guys' verses...i enjoyed the ending the first guy's ending, and this line: "Socialist cleats scuff my marbled floors and stomp more than just ash
Assets liquidated by the flood waters of Babylon pouring thru my stash", from the second guy
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Old 03-16-2007, 11:29 PM   #6
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Thanks Menace...I'm Here To Pretty Much Show That NBS Isn't Wack...

But Uppin For Some More Feed
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Old 03-16-2007, 11:32 PM   #7
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tell ur whack members to not come here, and tell ur good members to come.

that would show us that nbs isnt whack.
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Can You Please Stray Away From Beef With Me, And Actually Be Productive And Give Your Site a Good Name By Leaving Some Feed...
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i could, but unlike ppl at NBS, I dont give a fuck bout this website.....its just a website...
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With A 1,000 Something Posts Since September.... It Tells Me You Care A Little Bit Too Much...

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Yeah I care. That's why I was banned before on this site. neway i did like this drop. I was just suggesting that you tell your whack members to not come over here if u wanted to prove that NBS is not whack.
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^^ In Every Thread That A Member Had Bad Representation Of Our Site, I Noted It...Like In Street Kings Diss....

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And Where In Jersey You From Dog...201 Here...


Anyway Back To The Feed...
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Old 03-17-2007, 12:37 AM   #13
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well stuff like this certaintly represents your site well...you had vocab, imagery, and real nice concepts...both guys did a good job making this a dope collab..
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