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BLACK!
Darkness Envelopes Minds, Corrupt Spirits Of The Weak Thoughts Of Death Defeat Living, Searing Visions Of The Bleak Situations Blown From Proportion, More Deadlier Than Abortion The Sight Of Light Is Bended By Their Brains, Ideas Are Contortions ----------------------- The Color Of Scholars Triumphant Over Oppression In The Past A Lesson Learned To Last Over Generations Behind The Man The Father Color Of Peaceful Acts That Spread Some Knowledge X Marked Spots Of Potent Souls Cut Short From Morehouse College BLUE! Waves Caress The Earth! Erosion's The Blame For Lesser Worth! Frozen Tears On Piers Of Docked Future-Buried Treasures Commit Drastic Measures, Belittled By Weights Of Feathers Color Of Serenity, The Sign Of One's Spirit's Soul Clarity Put Whole Hearted Peace Even Before Those Primarily -------------------- In Some Cases, Color Of Death, The Arch Enemy In Fact Mentally Intact, Their Thoughts Of Killing Due To A Person's Flag Stab A Neck To Claim One's Hood, Show Their Physical Endurance Leave The Victims Parents Friends And Family Permanently Hurtin The Cost Of Street Cred Is Too Precious To Even Bare The Thought Mentally Weak? Just Think Of All The Loved Ones You've 'ready Lost Tell Me Is It Surreal To Live Life Without My Favorite Color In Play? Even The Oldest Ones Wouldn't Admit It, They Just Stutter To Say...... RED! Hell's Kitchen! Cook Up Fiesta's Only Fit For Demons Spit Some Semen To Recreate The Birth Of Evil Cretins Perish Light, Death Overcomes Feeling, Cherish Night Through Sickness Or Poor, Burn! Like Marriage Rights ------------------------ Color Of Blood, The Pact Of Unity, The Soul Part Of One's Family The Tragedy Is That Its Shed Too Often To Dwell Inside Sanity Vanity Remains From Acts Of Violence, We Have The Right To Silence This Type Of Vibrant Should Only Be Spilled With Knowledge From Tyrants GREEN! The Sign Of Life, Happiness Enough To Cause Resign Of Sight To Rid Appearance Of Death, Therefore Decline My Life Seeds Under Soil Soon To Birth Inventions Of The Earth Results Aid The Actions Of Life, Love, Death And Mirth -------------------- The Color Of Poison, Gaseous Fumes Invade My Lungs The Taste Of Epidemic's Sweat Slowly Seeps Beneath My Tounge Lack Of Life Parades Its Presence, Lures Thoughts Of Suffocation Lay Lifeless, Numb To Feeling Similar To Cheeks Of Dentist Patients WHITE! The Sight Of The End, Moreso The Plight Of Amends Final Stage Of Life, Struggles, Pressure And Silly Trends Flashes Of Livid Places, Memories Of Grimacent Faces Life Before Your Eyes Of The Once Beloved Vivid Ages --------------------- Color Of Nothingness, The Pad To Which I Create My Masterpieces My Lyrics Are Written To Aid The Speaches Which The Pastor Preaches The Sight Of Clay Within My Palms, Which I Swiftly Begin To Mold After Tattered Edges And Tainted Figures, Perfection Is What I Hold And You Guys Suck And We Win *Drums* DUH DUH DUH DUHUUUUUUU! We Are Dope And You Guys SUCK SUCK SUCK SUCK SUCK SUCK! |
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Talking Bout Colours Huh?
Rainbow...Just The Thought Of This Freestyle Make Me Wanna Go Buy 4 Packs Of Skittles And Pick Out the Colors You DIdnt Mention
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this was quite nice...SMH @ tha other drop from tha guy from NBS...but ya this was a creative concept...u hit each color perfectly, if u wouldnt of put was color u were doing im sure i would still know which 1 u were talking about so i give credit for that...i enjoyed reading this, stay up
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Agreed....Im Still Going To Get Those Skittles Though And Some Starburst....Damn 20 dollars left.. Leaves House
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STFU this was perfectly written i Freestyled and According to ur Site I could Freestyle better than u could Write
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Who In hell Are u Talking To
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No Beef In My Effin Thread.. Streets Its Cool.. Just Damnit Feed And Only Feed.. Streets Can Come With Some 'Suicidal' Ish Lol
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LOL ...... Go feed on it .....
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Nah... Weo Not Right Now.. And Plus.. I Don't Want My Drop To Be Like Yours Lol.. W/20+Beef Posts lol
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Go To OUR FLAB thread and gime ur verse
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yes.....this was nice.........i give you props................8/10.......creative......
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co sign. . .this was dope. . .nice concept and excuted well. . .8.5/10
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Pshh.. This Is 9Star Quality Easy... You Guys Are Such Haters LOL!
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There were glimmers of potential; however, the bountiful source material went to waste in the end due to your lack of creativity & actual writing ability.
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ya this was creative and nice....see we can be nice if u guyz arent like ya usual wack selves
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Pshhh @ Whack... Cmon Now... And The Ending Was The Cherry On Top @ Shogun
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Learn English you dumb cunt - I wasn't referring to the "ending" of your piece, but my final perception of it; "end" being part of the idiom, not a stand-alone noun.
Maybe if you weren't retarded & learned English, you could venture past the wackness you currently create. |
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