Gpt Damn! Baller Cool Off!

B Dope · 02-14-2007, 11:36 PM

This is a battle verse against someone.

This kids still a rook, he's neva used a multie syllable rhyme
Alone I kill with looks, While your raps are not lyrical Prime
Ya dome shook afta my doggs show ya how the chrome looks
I can do that cause I got more connects than a phone book
My next jook is to get my own text book, So I aint soly trifle
Cause ya a groupie studyin my frees like it was the holy bible
I'm Doin a fine plunder and still on a high level like pine lumber/
N this kid is on the lowest level like #1 being a 'Prime' number/

Reddi Ree · 02-15-2007, 12:34 AM

itz ok i like some of da punchez.....watz multiez

U Not Like Me · 02-15-2007, 12:39 AM

Solid multies but if this is a battle verse then every bar or most should have a punch...your closer was nice though but the other lines were bigging yourself up which isn't hittin your opponent just to let you know...here's a bar by bar breakdown

This kids still a rook, he's neva used a multie syllable rhyme
Alone I kill with looks, While your raps are not lyrical Prime

weak...okay first line but 2nd line was just poinless almost...

Ya dome shook afta my doggs show ya how the chrome looks
I can do that cause I got more connects than a phone book

Kind of played with the phone book thing and why you talking about yourself with your connects?? battle the opponent and don't talk about yourself

My next jook is to get my own text book, So I aint soly trifle
Cause ya a groupie studyin my frees like it was the holy bible

okay i guess, but you need to hit him personally in battles, you know what i mean...it's kind of weak saying something like "your wack, you study my shit, i'm better than you"

I'm Doin a fine plunder and still on a high level like pine lumber/
N this kid is on the lowest level like #1 being a 'Prime' number

Nice, used his name in a good way easily your best bar...this is a perfect example of what you should be doing...find any posts to use agaisnt him or just clown him by using his name as done by this bar...use anything you can

and ya flow is nice so you got that on hold...and if this was a regular free then i would have thought it was a pretty solid drop but it was a battle verse and you need to go at him and not talk about what you can do, etc....because this verse almost seems like half of it is a freestyle that you wrote and the other is a battle verse against Prime

B Dope · 02-15-2007, 12:55 AM

Thanks for the feed, I repped both of ya. And I got ya that i wasn't too personal but thats ok. I aint worried about this fella. I kinda rushed it cause I'm leavin for State basketball tomorrow. Didnt feel like writing today.

B Dope · 02-15-2007, 01:10 PM

bumpin.........

-K.P- · 02-15-2007, 01:12 PM

low inter standard, you are too focused on multies Baller, and even the multies aren't all that, think more creatively

Jay Hussle · 02-15-2007, 01:18 PM

^
I agree..

I see why u be ratin peoples drop like u do
because u speacilize in mulites
work on all of it

B Dope · 02-15-2007, 01:27 PM

I got 3 punches in there in there and a word play with the guy prime I'm batteling. SO I'm not jus focusing on multies.

.Krysis. · 02-15-2007, 02:11 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -K.P-

low inter standard, you are too focused on multies Baller, and even the multies aren't all that, think more creatively

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Baller · 11-09-2007, 11:50 PM

killer shyt man

02-15-2007, 12:34 AM	#2
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	itz ok i like some of da punchez.....watz multiez __________________ myspace.com/reeyaboy

02-15-2007, 01:18 PM	#7
Jay Hussle Unimaginable Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: SoufSide Posts: 535 Repped: 0 Repped 52 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ I agree.. I see why u be ratin peoples drop like u do because u speacilize in mulites work on all of it __________________ Vakill-Worst Fears Confirmed

11-09-2007, 11:50 PM	#10
Baller Vulture Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: NM Posts: 3,088 Repped: 110 Repped 242 Times in 145 Posts Neg Reps: 94 Neg Repped at 61 Times in 39 Posts	killer shyt man __________________

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02-14-2007, 11:36 PM	#1
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Gpt Damn! Baller Cool Off! Gpt Damn! Baller Cool Off! This is a battle verse against someone. This kids still a rook, he's neva used a multie syllable rhyme Alone I kill with looks, While your raps are not lyrical Prime Ya dome shook afta my doggs show ya how the chrome looks I can do that cause I got more connects than a phone book My next jook is to get my own text book, So I aint soly trifle Cause ya a groupie studyin my frees like it was the holy bible I'm Doin a fine plunder and still on a high level like pine lumber/ N this kid is on the lowest level like #1 being a 'Prime' number/

02-15-2007, 12:39 AM	#3
U Not Like Me You Should Already Know Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Springfield, Massachusetts Posts: 293 Repped: 63 Repped 9 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Solid multies but if this is a battle verse then every bar or most should have a punch...your closer was nice though but the other lines were bigging yourself up which isn't hittin your opponent just to let you know...here's a bar by bar breakdown This kids still a rook, he's neva used a multie syllable rhyme Alone I kill with looks, While your raps are not lyrical Prime weak...okay first line but 2nd line was just poinless almost... Ya dome shook afta my doggs show ya how the chrome looks I can do that cause I got more connects than a phone book Kind of played with the phone book thing and why you talking about yourself with your connects?? battle the opponent and don't talk about yourself My next jook is to get my own text book, So I aint soly trifle Cause ya a groupie studyin my frees like it was the holy bible okay i guess, but you need to hit him personally in battles, you know what i mean...it's kind of weak saying something like "your wack, you study my shit, i'm better than you" I'm Doin a fine plunder and still on a high level like pine lumber/ N this kid is on the lowest level like #1 being a 'Prime' number Nice, used his name in a good way easily your best bar...this is a perfect example of what you should be doing...find any posts to use agaisnt him or just clown him by using his name as done by this bar...use anything you can and ya flow is nice so you got that on hold...and if this was a regular free then i would have thought it was a pretty solid drop but it was a battle verse and you need to go at him and not talk about what you can do, etc....because this verse almost seems like half of it is a freestyle that you wrote and the other is a battle verse against Prime

02-15-2007, 12:55 AM	#4
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for the feed, I repped both of ya. And I got ya that i wasn't too personal but thats ok. I aint worried about this fella. I kinda rushed it cause I'm leavin for State basketball tomorrow. Didnt feel like writing today.

02-15-2007, 01:10 PM	#5
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	bumpin.........

02-15-2007, 01:12 PM	#6
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	low inter standard, you are too focused on multies Baller, and even the multies aren't all that, think more creatively

02-15-2007, 01:27 PM	#8
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I got 3 punches in there in there and a word play with the guy prime I'm batteling. SO I'm not jus focusing on multies.