Dolla Day (Beginin of Da End) pt. 1

Reddi Ree · 02-14-2007, 07:49 PM

Im da lil nigga wit da keyz, got da streetz locked
A hunnet degreez, ma earz freeze, make da heat drop
Rollin wit G'z, best believe dey got dat heat cocked
So u betz take a eaze, for u get dem niggaz on ya street popped
Go spread da newz, tell everybody da kid back
Yea I did dat, left ya manz laid wit his lid cracked
U hear da flow, I think U should know, I'll get U kidnapped
Dey come up where U live at, Run up on U wit big gatz
So much Ice on da boy, im gettin brain freeze
Yall movin too slow for me, I think yall need to change speedz
Itz young Dolla, deez lil niggaz been sleepin on me
And Im like a mouse trap wit da cheeze boy I keep it on me
I got dis rap shit locked off, and Im not soft
We pop off and take deez lil niggaz top off
I been hot on da corna, knockin dem rocks off
It really aint no more room on ma dick, so nigga HOP OFF!!!

Reddi Ree · 02-14-2007, 08:00 PM

Tell me wat yall think

Lyrical Messiah · 02-14-2007, 08:05 PM

Its iight i was feelin it could use improvement tho so keep at it i see potential you could be really good

Reddi Ree · 02-14-2007, 08:07 PM

thanx....ima try to have more next time

Reddi Ree · 02-14-2007, 09:15 PM

tell me wat yall think

Jay Hussle · 02-14-2007, 09:17 PM

its alright..cool better than most i see around here for they first drop

Reddi Ree · 02-14-2007, 09:22 PM

aight thanx

Reddi Ree · 02-14-2007, 11:43 PM

check it out see how it is

B Dope · 02-15-2007, 12:31 AM

THis was ok. You had multies that was good. Some were forced though. Through some punches in too. Check out my free now.

Reddi Ree · 02-15-2007, 11:52 AM

tell me wat yall think

02-14-2007, 07:49 PM	#1
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	Dolla Day (Beginin of Da End) pt. 1 Dolla Day (Beginin of Da End) pt. 1 Im da lil nigga wit da keyz, got da streetz locked A hunnet degreez, ma earz freeze, make da heat drop Rollin wit G'z, best believe dey got dat heat cocked So u betz take a eaze, for u get dem niggaz on ya street popped Go spread da newz, tell everybody da kid back Yea I did dat, left ya manz laid wit his lid cracked U hear da flow, I think U should know, I'll get U kidnapped Dey come up where U live at, Run up on U wit big gatz So much Ice on da boy, im gettin brain freeze Yall movin too slow for me, I think yall need to change speedz Itz young Dolla, deez lil niggaz been sleepin on me And Im like a mouse trap wit da cheeze boy I keep it on me I got dis rap shit locked off, and Im not soft We pop off and take deez lil niggaz top off I been hot on da corna, knockin dem rocks off It really aint no more room on ma dick, so nigga HOP OFF!!!

02-14-2007, 09:17 PM	#6
Jay Hussle Unimaginable Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: SoufSide Posts: 535 Repped: 0 Repped 52 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	its alright..cool better than most i see around here for they first drop __________________ Vakill-Worst Fears Confirmed

02-14-2007, 11:43 PM	#8
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	check it out see how it is __________________ myspace.com/reeyaboy

02-15-2007, 11:52 AM	#10
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	tell me wat yall think __________________ myspace.com/reeyaboy

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02-14-2007, 08:00 PM	#2
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	Tell me wat yall think

02-14-2007, 08:05 PM	#3
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Its iight i was feelin it could use improvement tho so keep at it i see potential you could be really good

02-14-2007, 08:07 PM	#4
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	thanx....ima try to have more next time

02-14-2007, 09:15 PM	#5
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	tell me wat yall think

02-14-2007, 09:22 PM	#7
Reddi Ree Everybody'z Favorite Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: C-M-D, Nu Jerzey Posts: 1,000 Repped: 230 Repped 29 Times in 24 Posts Neg Reps: 3 Neg Repped at 9 Times in 4 Posts	aight thanx

02-15-2007, 12:31 AM	#9
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	THis was ok. You had multies that was good. Some were forced though. Through some punches in too. Check out my free now.