Wmd (words Of Mass Destruction)

dispatch886 · 02-14-2007, 03:36 PM

im writin all day you can call it construction,
but really im a weapon of mass destruction
in this world we livin in, but i aint givin in,
when i BLOW up you betta start forgivin man.
ima hip hop refiner, i sit back and relax like a lay-z boy recliner,
im an adult in this business but you just a minor.

send feedback...positive or negative

Lyrical Messiah · 02-14-2007, 03:46 PM

actually this is pretty good wish you would have made it longer keep it up man

Ps could you rate my 2 freestyles Pa State OF Mind and Black Democrat
thanks

dispatch886 · 02-21-2007, 03:20 AM

here's some more......feedback por favor

Im rollin blunts and twenties you rollin carpet mats
in back of the market at the target you workin at
Now if you could rap and attack on the track
You wouldn’t be livin in a beat up shack or be talkin smack
But you can’t so you better step the fuck back
And if I come through call customer service
Cause ima rip out your dick and insert a cervix
Whats a matter bitch startin to get nervous?
Yea its me jon blaze an im here to stay
Just remember next time whatever I say you obey
bitch

JR-One · 02-21-2007, 03:25 AM

That Was Awful.. ..

Homicidal Thots · 02-21-2007, 09:57 PM

not so good...flow was off....multies were off......poorly constructed pretty played out as well/to sum it up shit was WACK keep tryin tho u'll get it

02-14-2007, 03:36 PM	#1
dispatch886 Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 38 Repped: 1 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Wmd (words Of Mass Destruction) Wmd (words Of Mass Destruction) im writin all day you can call it construction, but really im a weapon of mass destruction in this world we livin in, but i aint givin in, when i BLOW up you betta start forgivin man. ima hip hop refiner, i sit back and relax like a lay-z boy recliner, im an adult in this business but you just a minor. send feedback...positive or negative

02-21-2007, 03:25 AM	#4
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,021 Repped: 19 Repped 52 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	That Was Awful.. .. __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

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02-14-2007, 03:46 PM	#2
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	actually this is pretty good wish you would have made it longer keep it up man Ps could you rate my 2 freestyles Pa State OF Mind and Black Democrat thanks

02-21-2007, 03:20 AM	#3
dispatch886 Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 38 Repped: 1 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	here's some more......feedback por favor Im rollin blunts and twenties you rollin carpet mats in back of the market at the target you workin at Now if you could rap and attack on the track You wouldn’t be livin in a beat up shack or be talkin smack But you can’t so you better step the fuck back And if I come through call customer service Cause ima rip out your dick and insert a cervix Whats a matter bitch startin to get nervous? Yea its me jon blaze an im here to stay Just remember next time whatever I say you obey bitch

02-21-2007, 09:57 PM	#5
Homicidal Thots Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: behind you (no homo) :ninja: Posts: 2,692 Repped: 485 Repped 352 Times in 127 Posts Neg Reps: 9 Neg Repped at 7 Times in 7 Posts	not so good...flow was off....multies were off......poorly constructed pretty played out as well/to sum it up shit was WACK keep tryin tho u'll get it