Close the Blindes

YoungJ · 02-14-2007, 10:28 AM

I woke up and started conteplating if I'm still alive
Sayin' y'all raps aint wack is like sayin' Michael Jackson is still a guy
The blunt wrappin', the shit's crackin', fuck it we still got high
Marijuana exhale driftin' away as it fill the sky
Everyday is a day to be ended, so we neva waste
We taste buds literally, carryin' roaches just in case
I feel safe with the blade so I steal and touch the base
Get arrested, skip the trial, lock me up, fuck the case
This is life, we surrounded by the real and the fakeness
Dont think I can take this, I take hits AND make hits
I've seen 'em all, broads all around wit' the real and the fake tits
They doin' more bendin' ova then they do in the matrix
Haters will lay stiff because to me revenge is a must
It's been two years since I hit the principle, detention is up
Tensed up and went nuts, knockin' everyone in sight
It took five dads and twenty houses just for me to see the light
Takin' advice from fuckin' doctors, like "it'll be alright"
Shut up, I dont need help... I'm just sick and twisted
If you still don't get the point, you must'a missed it
Vicious, crunch my fist, HANCUFFED - CONVICTED
I've been deleverin' pain b/c I've had enough inflicted
But I toughened up, gun is tucked, wrote some lines
My life is fucked? ha, I don't want the light so I close the blindes

YoungJ · 02-14-2007, 11:58 AM

lookin 4 feed

YoungJ · 02-14-2007, 06:42 PM

ayo uppppppinnnnn

Lyrical Messiah · 02-14-2007, 06:53 PM

Ok my nigga you did good some lines were really good some lines were ehhh but we could work on our mistakes

YoungJ · 02-14-2007, 06:54 PM

i hear ya, im bout to post a new 1

Lyrical Messiah · 02-14-2007, 07:00 PM

Im bout to check it

Youngcity415 · 02-14-2007, 07:04 PM

dis wus straight but im sure u can do betta but it wus a good drop

02-14-2007, 10:28 AM	#1
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	Close the Blindes Close the Blindes I woke up and started conteplating if I'm still alive Sayin' y'all raps aint wack is like sayin' Michael Jackson is still a guy The blunt wrappin', the shit's crackin', fuck it we still got high Marijuana exhale driftin' away as it fill the sky Everyday is a day to be ended, so we neva waste We taste buds literally, carryin' roaches just in case I feel safe with the blade so I steal and touch the base Get arrested, skip the trial, lock me up, fuck the case This is life, we surrounded by the real and the fakeness Dont think I can take this, I take hits AND make hits I've seen 'em all, broads all around wit' the real and the fake tits They doin' more bendin' ova then they do in the matrix Haters will lay stiff because to me revenge is a must It's been two years since I hit the principle, detention is up Tensed up and went nuts, knockin' everyone in sight It took five dads and twenty houses just for me to see the light Takin' advice from fuckin' doctors, like "it'll be alright" Shut up, I dont need help... I'm just sick and twisted If you still don't get the point, you must'a missed it Vicious, crunch my fist, HANCUFFED - CONVICTED I've been deleverin' pain b/c I've had enough inflicted But I toughened up, gun is tucked, wrote some lines My life is fucked? ha, I don't want the light so I close the blindes

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02-14-2007, 11:58 AM	#2
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	lookin 4 feed

02-14-2007, 06:42 PM	#3
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	ayo uppppppinnnnn

02-14-2007, 06:53 PM	#4
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Ok my nigga you did good some lines were really good some lines were ehhh but we could work on our mistakes

02-14-2007, 06:54 PM	#5
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	i hear ya, im bout to post a new 1

02-14-2007, 07:00 PM	#6
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Im bout to check it

02-14-2007, 07:04 PM	#7
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	dis wus straight but im sure u can do betta but it wus a good drop