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Old 02-12-2007, 01:47 AM   #1
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As A Youngsta I Was In Denial Had To Adjust To The Lifestyle
Cops Check The File, I'd Be Locked Up Like Coffey In Green Mile
With The Leading-Strike Im Feed In Mics At The Speed Of Light
You Just Over Hype, While I Expose You Niggas Like Hidden Dikes
Save Your Embarrasment, This Aint A Fucking Experiment
Being Diligent It's Evident, You Would Run Away If I Say Im Intelligent
Some Days Its Sunny, Everybody Walks Around Wastin Money
I Shited On This Track, Thats Why It Smells So Funny
Im Like Banks First Album, Still Got That Hunger, Strike Like Thunder
Because Nigga Its Prime Time.. Like Deion When He Was Younger
I Dont Worry About Being Hated On, I Dont Need No Fans
Cause All My Lyrics Are "Intense (In Tents)".. Like Native Americans
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Old 02-12-2007, 08:22 AM   #2
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Cause All My Lyrics Are "Intense (In Tents)".. Like Native Americans
There Are So Many Things Wrong With This Line.. .. Ironically, You Have To Get Corrected By An Indian.. ..

1) The Marketing Campaign For The Television Show "The Apprentice" Was.. .. It's In Tents/Intense.. .. Because The Contestants Had To Sleep In Tents.. .. And That Was Considered Intense.. .. So You Stole That Idea.. ..
2) Native Americans Didn't Sleep In Tents.. .. They Slept In Tee Pees.. .. Which Don't Even Resemble Tents.. ..
3) The Line Doesn't Even Make Sense.. .. "All My Lyrics Are In Tents Like Native Americans".. .. The Wordplay Doesn't Work.. .. "In Tents Like Native Americans".. .. What A Poor Analogy.. ..
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Old 02-12-2007, 08:30 AM   #3
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....well Im Indian mixed wit Black and some Muslim type shit...

I dont kno shit about none of that....

anyway...I checked in old battles
and prime u have a SOOOOO much similar style
to this one dude...But I gotta go back and see who it was

anyway nicely done except for that line..INSULT TO ME AND JR-ONE

anymore indians here?
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Old 02-12-2007, 08:41 AM   #4
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^^ Shut The Fuck Up.. .. I Swear To Fucking Jesus If You Call Yourself Indian Again, I Will Get You Banned.. .. Guarantee.. ..

So Fucking Watch It You Changeling Schizo Fuckface.. ..
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Old 02-12-2007, 08:43 AM   #5
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Gasp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!but Its So True....go Head Jr-one Get Me Banned...

Lol

Go Head Banned Me Just Add Up So Much Stuff....

Bye


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Old 02-12-2007, 08:48 AM   #6
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....well Im Indian mixed wit Black and some Muslim type shit...
See, There Is So Much Fucking Wrong With That Statement.. ..

Firstly, You're A Fucking Black Child Sitting In Your House Who Wants Attention And To Get It You Decide To Create Multiple Personalities On A Website.. .. You're Not Indian.. .. You Claim To Be So Many Things And Claim Not To Be So Many Other Things.. .. But You're Not Indian.. .. You Can Claim To Be Whoever The Fuck You Want Kid.. .. I Don't Fucking Care.. .. But If You Claim Be Indian.. .. I'll Put A Fucking End To You On This Website.. .. This Website = Your Life.. .. So In Other Words, I'll Be Ending Your Multiple Personality Tyrade On This Site.. .. And I'll Be Ending Whatever You May Pathetically Call Your Life.. .. So You Can Crawl Into A Fetal Position And Cry Yourself To Sleep.. .. Just Claim To Be Indian Again.. ..

Also, "some Muslim type shit..."
MUSLIM IS A RELIGION.. .. NOT A RACE
You Can't Describe Your Race By A Religion.. .. You Fucking Ignorant Crack Baby.. ..
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Old 02-12-2007, 01:23 PM   #7
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Good looking JR on the feed.

And please stop spamming.
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Old 02-12-2007, 03:38 PM   #8
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Old 02-12-2007, 03:49 PM   #9
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^^ Shut The Fuck Up.. .. I Swear To Fucking Jesus If You Call Yourself Indian Again, I Will Get You Banned.. .. Guarantee.. ..

So Fucking Watch It You Changeling Schizo Fuckface.. ..
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You Give Hateful Comments To People All The Time...

Then Start Crying After Somebody Calls You By Your Race Over The Internet?

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Old 02-12-2007, 07:55 PM   #10
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Old 02-12-2007, 10:18 PM   #11
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Old 02-13-2007, 10:21 PM   #12
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Old 02-13-2007, 10:27 PM   #13
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Yea nice drop man I like drops that are short and right to the point


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Old 02-13-2007, 11:52 PM   #14
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^Good looking on this shit... Ill def go leave feed in a little bit man...
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