Behold.....The Phinali

LaWN NAiL · 02-11-2007, 12:04 AM

The Axe That We Act With..
Has Juss Cut The Earth's Axis..
No Wonder The World Is So Crooked..
No Library Card To Get Ma Soul Booked
And Get It Tooken Through The Devil's Lashes..
Im Untouchable..Da Fact Is..
Ya Shells Is Shook
Like Passin Through Bullet Proof Glasses..
No Ashes To Ashes..You 6 Feet Deep..
While Da Shovel Laughin..
Now Wait Till The Sound Bounce
And The Rounds Get To Cuttin..
U Juss An "Invisible Diamond In The Rough"
How U "A-Mount To Nothin"..

Switchin Up Da Flow

Ma Brain Found That Sound Of Music Ruled It From Ruthless
It Lifted The Sadness Fix From Being The Dad-less Kid..
Mind Flowing Tracks..So After The Long Run..It Led Me..
That "Music's The Father" That Fed Me..
He Spewed The Greatest..
So Producers Hate It wen i Spit On Their "Dead Beat"..
U Wasn't Ready For a Nigga Comin This Deep..
Too Bad Ya "Flow Derived From Ass"
So If U Diss Me..Its Obvious U Goin Up "Shit Creek"..

Bringin Back Da Flow..

The Opposite Man..
Writin Down Lines On da "Black Side Of Ma Manus"..
To "Get Back" To Da "Topic At Hand"..
Ya Raps is Crap Catchin' U Cats In traps
Derailin Ya Tracks..Be careful
Cuz Im "Pointin Locations In Transformation"
Like Tabs in a Werewolf..
N Ma Bullets.."Pushin Indiviually Silly"
Cuz My Weapon Of Choice Is Like "Crabs In Da Barrel"..
Keep Blastin Da Tool Till i Prove
His Skull Never Helped His Head
N After Im Done
Its Gon Be Like A "Funarel Filled Wit Snitches"
Cuz "U Can Tell Hes Dead"..

LaWN NAiL · 02-11-2007, 12:34 AM

uppin........

LaWN NAiL · 02-11-2007, 01:04 AM

ring around the roooooosey

Tom Chambers · 02-11-2007, 02:42 AM

meh its alright....isn't great....but decent 7/10

LaWN NAiL · 02-11-2007, 01:11 PM

Uppin.......

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 02-11-2007, 05:06 PM

co sign with lotus. . .sorta lacked direction + one theme imo. . youve done much better than this. . .6/10

LaWN NAiL · 02-11-2007, 06:00 PM

^^ :( :( :( :( :(

H.O.V.A. · 02-11-2007, 08:00 PM

Honestley your flow was kinda off...I'd give it 6.5/10

Rhymes like booked and crooked really dont work out well. Stay up tho

LaWN NAiL · 02-11-2007, 08:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Pandemic aka HOVA

Honestley your flow was kinda off...I'd give it 6.5/10

Rhymes like booked and crooked really dont work out well. Stay up tho

oh i was rhymin' Crooked N Tooken..

Thanks on da Feed..

LaWN NAiL · 02-12-2007, 03:18 AM

up up and away....

!{THR!LLZ}! · 02-12-2007, 03:43 AM

This Wacn't Ya Best Fam ... 6.5 Outta 10 ... I Wasn't Feelin Da Way U Was Switchin Up Ya Flow & Shit ... Topic Look Like It Slid A Lil To ... Stay Up Tho G ...32~1~

LaWN NAiL · 02-12-2007, 03:31 PM

:( :( :( :( ..

02-11-2007, 12:04 AM	#1
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	Behold.....The Phinali Behold.....The Phinali The Axe That We Act With.. Has Juss Cut The Earth's Axis.. No Wonder The World Is So Crooked.. No Library Card To Get Ma Soul Booked And Get It Tooken Through The Devil's Lashes.. Im Untouchable..Da Fact Is.. Ya Shells Is Shook Like Passin Through Bullet Proof Glasses.. No Ashes To Ashes..You 6 Feet Deep.. While Da Shovel Laughin.. Now Wait Till The Sound Bounce And The Rounds Get To Cuttin.. U Juss An "Invisible Diamond In The Rough" How U "A-Mount To Nothin".. Switchin Up Da Flow Ma Brain Found That Sound Of Music Ruled It From Ruthless It Lifted The Sadness Fix From Being The Dad-less Kid.. Mind Flowing Tracks..So After The Long Run..It Led Me.. That "Music's The Father" That Fed Me.. He Spewed The Greatest.. So Producers Hate It wen i Spit On Their "Dead Beat".. U Wasn't Ready For a Nigga Comin This Deep.. Too Bad Ya "Flow Derived From Ass" So If U Diss Me..Its Obvious U Goin Up "Shit Creek".. Bringin Back Da Flow.. The Opposite Man.. Writin Down Lines On da "Black Side Of Ma Manus".. To "Get Back" To Da "Topic At Hand".. Ya Raps is Crap Catchin' U Cats In traps Derailin Ya Tracks..Be careful Cuz Im "Pointin Locations In Transformation" Like Tabs in a Werewolf.. N Ma Bullets.."Pushin Indiviually Silly" Cuz My Weapon Of Choice Is Like "Crabs In Da Barrel".. Keep Blastin Da Tool Till i Prove His Skull Never Helped His Head N After Im Done Its Gon Be Like A "Funarel Filled Wit Snitches" Cuz "U Can Tell Hes Dead"..

02-12-2007, 03:43 AM	#11
!{THR!LLZ}! {NJ}-W's 45~2 L's- Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: {CMD} -NJ- Posts: 3,713 Repped: 13 Repped 14 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	This Wacn't Ya Best Fam ... 6.5 Outta 10 ... I Wasn't Feelin Da Way U Was Switchin Up Ya Flow & Shit ... Topic Look Like It Slid A Lil To ... Stay Up Tho G ...32~1~ __________________ {NJ THRILLA THE KILLA}{THRILLZ}{05-07} {SOLO KILL COUNT}{W'S 45 - 3 L'S}{{321}} {RHYME REF}{VET SLAYA}{G-WORLD'S MINE}

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02-11-2007, 12:34 AM	#2
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	uppin........

02-11-2007, 01:04 AM	#3
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	ring around the roooooosey

02-11-2007, 02:42 AM	#4
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,279 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	meh its alright....isn't great....but decent 7/10

02-11-2007, 01:11 PM	#5
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	Uppin.......

02-11-2007, 05:06 PM	#6
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	co sign with lotus. . .sorta lacked direction + one theme imo. . youve done much better than this. . .6/10

02-11-2007, 06:00 PM	#7
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	^^ :( :( :( :( :(

02-11-2007, 08:00 PM	#8
H.O.V.A. Banned Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: LI Posts: 4,564 Repped: 102 Repped 293 Times in 39 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Honestley your flow was kinda off...I'd give it 6.5/10 Rhymes like booked and crooked really dont work out well. Stay up tho

02-12-2007, 03:18 AM	#10
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	up up and away....

02-12-2007, 03:31 PM	#12
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	:( :( :( :( ..