See You At The Morgue Bitch(Messiah Diss)

Sniper Locs · 02-10-2007, 10:20 PM

Kid you just rookie coming up for a fucking cookie
i got chocolate chip you fuckin get squashed turned in to mookie
ur bitch is mad niice thats i got her when she was loosy loosy
im a phantom when i spit raps,im spooky spooky
lyrically a messiah u not u just king david and im GOD
respect me u got my written frees under pictures in ur ipod
son u look up to me,im your boss
u prolly forgot what u said for this horrible cause
but i did this is less than a minute n a half i murdered u dawg

killa_cam · 02-10-2007, 11:07 PM

Ill break it down

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr.Slow Flow

Kid you just rookie coming up for a fucking cookie
i got chocolate chip you fuckin get squashed turned in to mookie

oh shiiit son......fuckin right...turn that bitch into mookie!

ur bitch is mad niice thats i got her when she was loosy loosy
im a phantom when i spit raps,im spooky spooky

daaaaaaaaamn....I get it....loosy loosy and spooky spooky...its like a double rhyme..

lyrically a messiah u not u just king david and im GOD
respect me u got my written frees under pictures in ur ipod

ooooooooooooooooh personal

son u look up to me,im your boss
u prolly forgot what u said for this horrible cause
but i did this is less than a minute n a half i murdered u dawg

^a minute and a half?? daaaamn boy....you gooood

overall this shit was nice as fuck

i dont get the title though...your gonna see him at the morgue?....are you the coroner?

i dont understand...

Sniper Locs · 02-11-2007, 01:26 AM

...........................

Sniper Locs · 02-11-2007, 01:44 AM

Out of the boredness and it's raining im gonna diss u don

Lyrical Messiah · 02-11-2007, 10:41 PM

Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this totally sucked but thanks for letting me know im on your mind

Sniper Locs · 02-11-2007, 11:32 PM

this sucked? its better than ur shit

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 02-11-2007, 11:34 PM

This Was Actually So Bad I Cant Rate It

Sniper Locs · 02-11-2007, 11:41 PM

fuk u nigga

DeionS · 02-12-2007, 01:29 AM

This Is Real Feed, No Hate, Just Being Real..

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr.Slow Flow

Kid you just rookie coming up for a fucking cookie

The Whole "Coming Up For A Fucking Cookie" Was Pointless.. Think Of Something More Creative.

i got chocolate chip you fuckin get squashed turned in to mookie

Again Pointless Line.. This Doesnt Hit Him With Anything, No Personal, Punches, Wordplay, Nothing. Flow In First 2 Lines Was Aight.

ur bitch is mad niice thats i got her when she was loosy loosy

This The Internet, You Dont Have Her Bitch.. If You Rap About A Niggaz Bitch Make It A Funny/Creative Line Or A Punch Or Something.. Dont Say Your Fucking Her Cause It's Too Unreal.

im a phantom when i spit raps,im spooky spooky

Makes Sense But The Whole "Loosy Loosy" & "Spooky Spooky" Ruins The Whole Concept Of The 2 Lines.

lyrically a messiah u not u just king david and im GOD

Makes Some What Sense, But Flow Was Off Big Time.

respect me u got my written frees under pictures in ur ipod

Again, Too Unreal, No Punches Line, Personal Nothing. Unless You Made This Into A Punch Or Something Creative It's Pointless.

son u look up to me,im your boss
u prolly forgot what u said for this horrible cause

Again, Nothing Creative.. Just Wasted Lines.. Flow Off, No Multies, Nothing Important About This.

but i did this is less than a minute n a half i murdered u dawg

This Is Prob The Best Line In The Free Because This The Only Realistic Line.

And Again, This Is Not Hate. I Dont Hate On Anybody Trying To Spit Unless They Disrespect Me. And This Is Being Real. You Got Alot To Work On, Next Time Take More Than Minute And A Half To Write A Diss To Somebody.

Stay Up.

Sniper Locs · 02-12-2007, 01:35 AM

good lookin out yo yeah that last line was prob the est 2 me too idk ill improve thanks agn

.Krysis. · 02-12-2007, 04:18 PM

ROFLMFAO !!!

cookie, mookie, spooky spooky, loosy loosy

Cam'Ron Stan

LaWN NAiL · 02-12-2007, 04:30 PM

"See You At The Morgue Bitch"

..so your gonna die right after him?

..or is that the new slang for "the spot" now?

"MEET ME AT THE MORGUE!...ITS GOIN DOOOOWWWWNNNN!!!"

Edit: This Free Was Ugh......Different..

02-10-2007, 10:20 PM	#1
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	See You At The Morgue Bitch(Messiah Diss) See You At The Morgue Bitch(Messiah Diss) Kid you just rookie coming up for a fucking cookie i got chocolate chip you fuckin get squashed turned in to mookie ur bitch is mad niice thats i got her when she was loosy loosy im a phantom when i spit raps,im spooky spooky lyrically a messiah u not u just king david and im GOD respect me u got my written frees under pictures in ur ipod son u look up to me,im your boss u prolly forgot what u said for this horrible cause but i did this is less than a minute n a half i murdered u dawg

02-11-2007, 11:34 PM	#7
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	This Was Actually So Bad I Cant Rate It __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

02-12-2007, 04:18 PM	#11
.Krysis. AkA Riskz Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 3,253 Repped: 479 Repped 742 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ROFLMFAO !!! cookie, mookie, spooky spooky, loosy loosy Cam'Ron Stan __________________ "I'm the Archbishop of this rap shit, excommunicate.. faith from my narrative, you don't want no arms like Hans Blix, watch me clamp this, like lock jaw, smack you so hard your frame took flight & soared like a Condor".

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02-11-2007, 01:26 AM	#3
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	...........................

02-11-2007, 01:44 AM	#4
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Out of the boredness and it's raining im gonna diss u don

02-11-2007, 10:41 PM	#5
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this totally sucked but thanks for letting me know im on your mind

02-11-2007, 11:32 PM	#6
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this sucked? its better than ur shit

02-11-2007, 11:41 PM	#8
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	fuk u nigga

02-12-2007, 01:35 AM	#10
Sniper Locs Banned Join Date: May 2006 Location: Los Angeles Posts: 2,574 Repped: 0 Repped 108 Times in 86 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	good lookin out yo yeah that last line was prob the est 2 me too idk ill improve thanks agn

02-12-2007, 04:30 PM	#12
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	"See You At The Morgue Bitch" ..so your gonna die right after him? ..or is that the new slang for "the spot" now? "MEET ME AT THE MORGUE!...ITS GOIN DOOOOWWWWNNNN!!!" Edit: This Free Was Ugh......Different..