!*~~~Raw is Like~~~*!

R.A.W · 02-06-2007, 03:05 PM

Internal Rhyme scheme

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Birds Chriping

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Raw Raw Raw Raw Raw Raw is Like

*

Ugh Yea

*

"Raw is . . ." - [Raw (7x)]

Verse

Heaven or Hell Magzine Inserted...Fetus Infant is Bein Born
comparble times Mans Gettin Murdered,Opening To Close
as far as Streetz Go I must Deliberately Explain,Thee Level
of Inconsiderets...Tryin Sabotage My Fame..Now Let me Explain the Letter that define my name,First it was Hussle..But the Year Has Changed
Question Me Now..Im am a Rap,Harcore for the game,Extravagent Studies of Pain...
Illegal Drug users shoot Up In the Rain,Drug Dealers on the corner movin' the cane
Saw Many people shot up Lives are drained,am I Truamatized or Insane
To Balance That,I Carry 38 to Perfect My aim,In woods Postin up old Pictures,
enough Power to Knock off frames
Line Up The Barrel,Pull The Index finger back and I sqeeuze
NeighborHood Scriptz,For Lost Souls Tryin to make it Crossroads
For The Corner shooters That Need clips that Cost Dough
To the OG's Handin out OZ'z Livin Luxeries and Nice
I take time to shout ya Out Hope U enjoyin Ya Life
IT is what it is...Life is What u Make It..Live it to the fullest no fake shit
Jail Cells Filled wit Criminals..who Raped Kids
Freedom and Wisdom..Wen I Speak my presence is felt
and Ya should Kno R-A-W is The Letter that spell

RAW

[Chorus: scratching by DJ Premier (2X)]

"RAW is like life or death.. I'm a rebel.. "
"My poetry's deep, I never fell.."
"RAW is like.. half man half amazing.."
"No doubt.."

*

U gotta feel that right there
Yea for all Them Grinders On HH
Keep doin that
all That Vets On HH
all the High inters
Mid inters
U got to this is for Ya

1 Love Stay ILLMATIC

Leave Links if u want feed

R.A.W · 02-06-2007, 03:08 PM

Uppin for feed

wrote it poetry style

Ill post the vid so ya can go wit the beat

R.A.W · 02-06-2007, 03:50 PM

Uppin this

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 03:55 PM

dis shit is good had a nice flow n everything

MiSs CaSsiDy · 02-06-2007, 03:59 PM

of Inconsiderets...Tryin Sabotage My Fame..Now Let me Explain the Letter that define my name,First it was Hussle..But the Year Has Changed
Question Me Now..Im am a Rap,Harcore for the game,Extravagent Studies of Pain...

i like how u did it ur on way sounded to much alike though but i like how u did this part the most im confused about how u make ya bars but ill guess i'll understand later

NeighborHood Scriptz,For Lost Souls Tryin to make it Crossroads
For The Corner shooters That Need clips that Cost Dough

sound to much like nas but im starting to understand more of what u be doing now its like listening to a song and adding ya own words like all emcees do over all this was 4.5. u should doit ya own way next time just my opinion it was below average close to it tho holla

R.A.W · 02-06-2007, 04:11 PM

^
thanks
for the feed
Had to use his style but ill do it my way next time

I used his All time favorite rhyme scheme
Internal

R.A.W · 02-06-2007, 04:24 PM

Uppin this.....if it need work tell me wat to work on

B Dope · 02-06-2007, 04:30 PM

You had a couple bars that didn't rhyme with eachother. Don't know what's up with that. Lacked multies, punches, and wordplay. You don't necissarily need punches or wordplay but it is good to do so. Check out my free.

YoungJ · 02-06-2007, 04:30 PM

im feelin it... good flo and all that. ill keep a look out on ya new shit. stay up

Lyrical Messiah · 02-06-2007, 04:34 PM

Im feeling it Some real shit

R.A.W · 02-06-2007, 06:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Baller

You had a couple bars that didn't rhyme with eachother. Don't know what's up with that. Lacked multies, punches, and wordplay. You don't necissarily need punches or wordplay but it is good to do so. Check out my free.

^
The Rhymes are Internal
in side the bar rhymin wit eachother

Mulites arent Neccesary ither

Multies dont have to be invovled wit topicals
or these types of subjects unless u want
wordplay i just did a drop wit that

but thank for the feed

Over_Flow · 02-07-2007, 08:31 AM

some of it didnt rhyme.....WACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

R.A.W · 02-07-2007, 02:10 PM

and Yet another Bitch has appeared to talk more shit...

Im already out fuck u talkin bout Faizan ur wack as fuck
ya drop=Featherweight kill ur self

Over_Flow · 02-07-2007, 04:33 PM

^^^me>u....its as simple as that

R.A.W · 02-07-2007, 07:10 PM

No Faizan

ME>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>U

its all so clear stop spammin my muthafuckin thread

Over_Flow · 02-08-2007, 08:30 AM

^^actually me> u tyshawn.....look at this and look at my new drop....my drop is wayyyyyyyyyy better

R.A.W · 02-08-2007, 08:33 AM

^
okay u made ur drop today..

Ive been writing this..since wat last week cause i was bored..
and u still hate on my frees smh

Nanse · 02-08-2007, 04:51 PM

raw is like......totalie gayyyyyyyyyy

R.A.W · 02-08-2007, 04:57 PM

^

why are u spammin my thread go sum were and fall back

lol

Nanse · 02-08-2007, 05:17 PM

You're not Nas; You're not anyone else that you've dickrode.....

You are RAW; You are Lyrical One; You are Sinis; You are Young Dolla

You are gay.

R.A.W · 02-08-2007, 06:36 PM

smh:

and Ur still thinking im dolla...its a same

I neva dickrode nobody on this site

and who wen im fuckin new here

ya immature as hell get a life

Nanse · 02-08-2007, 06:47 PM

^^^ I meant you dickride real artists, like nas.

And stop denying it. You've been exposed so many times, you can't deny it anymore.

R.A.W · 02-08-2007, 06:54 PM

^

No I dont dick ride Nas

I would mention him all the fuckin time then
ive been writin this piece

and Plz Nanse

They Havent exposed anything at all

i kno who face is behind the computer screen

they the ones lookin stupid tryin to xpose me

wen it aint workin...Ya got issues on not givin up
dont cha

Nanse · 02-08-2007, 07:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by R.A.W

^

No I dont dick ride Nas

I would mention him all the fuckin time then
ive been writin this piece

and Plz Nanse

They Havent exposed anything at all

i kno who face is behind the computer screen

they the ones lookin stupid tryin to xpose me

wen it aint workin...Ya got issues on not givin up
dont cha

Issues on giving up what? Exposing you? I don't need to give up exposing you because I never exposed you. You were already exposed when I logged in.

And you dickride a new artist everyweek. Next is going to be like tupac or some shit.

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 02-08-2007, 07:06 PM

SHUT THE FUCK UP DOLLA. . .STOP POSTING FREES HERE AS LYRICAL ONE AND ON OTHER BOARDS AS JAY HUSSLE AND VICE VERSE

YOU ARE WACK, YOU SUCK, YOU ARE BIPOLAR

I LOVE MAKING FUN OF YOU

ps.. . .this sucked

02-06-2007, 03:05 PM	#1
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	*!~~~Raw is Like~~~!* *!~~~Raw is Like~~~!* *Internal Rhyme scheme* * Birds Chriping * Raw Raw Raw Raw Raw Raw is Like * Ugh Yea * "Raw is . . ." - [Raw (7x)] Verse Heaven or Hell Magzine Inserted...Fetus Infant is Bein Born comparble times Mans Gettin Murdered,Opening To Close as far as Streetz Go I must Deliberately Explain,Thee Level of Inconsiderets...Tryin Sabotage My Fame..Now Let me Explain the Letter that define my name,First it was Hussle..But the Year Has Changed Question Me Now..Im am a Rap,Harcore for the game,Extravagent Studies of Pain... Illegal Drug users shoot Up In the Rain,Drug Dealers on the corner movin' the cane Saw Many people shot up Lives are drained,am I Truamatized or Insane To Balance That,I Carry 38 to Perfect My aim,In woods Postin up old Pictures, enough Power to Knock off frames Line Up The Barrel,Pull The Index finger back and I sqeeuze NeighborHood Scriptz,For Lost Souls Tryin to make it Crossroads For The Corner shooters That Need clips that Cost Dough To the OG's Handin out OZ'z Livin Luxeries and Nice I take time to shout ya Out Hope U enjoyin Ya Life IT is what it is...Life is What u Make It..Live it to the fullest no fake shit Jail Cells Filled wit Criminals..who Raped Kids Freedom and Wisdom..Wen I Speak my presence is felt and Ya should Kno R-A-W is The Letter that spell *RAW* [Chorus: scratching by DJ Premier (2X)] "RAW is like life or death.. I'm a rebel.. " "My poetry's deep, I never fell.." "RAW is like.. half man half amazing.." "No doubt.." * U gotta feel that right there Yea for all Them Grinders On HH Keep doin that all That Vets On HH all the High inters Mid inters U got to this is for Ya 1 Love Stay ILLMATIC Leave Links if u want feed

02-06-2007, 03:59 PM	#5
MiSs CaSsiDy QUEEN OF HORRORCORE RAP Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: HELL Posts: 1,263 Repped: 9 Repped 31 Times in 13 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	of Inconsiderets...Tryin Sabotage My Fame..Now Let me Explain the Letter that define my name,First it was Hussle..But the Year Has Changed Question Me Now..Im am a Rap,Harcore for the game,Extravagent Studies of Pain... i like how u did it ur on way sounded to much alike though but i like how u did this part the most im confused about how u make ya bars but ill guess i'll understand later NeighborHood Scriptz,For Lost Souls Tryin to make it Crossroads For The Corner shooters That Need clips that Cost Dough sound to much like nas but im starting to understand more of what u be doing now its like listening to a song and adding ya own words like all emcees do over all this was 4.5. u should doit ya own way next time just my opinion it was below average close to it tho holla __________________

02-08-2007, 04:51 PM	#18
Nanse Da Purple Pimp Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: I'm from N-E-W Jerz., where plenty murders occurz Posts: 3,131 Repped: 692 Repped 376 Times in 236 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 75 Times in 74 Posts	raw is like......totalie gayyyyyyyyyy __________________ I'm the M.B.P., Most Ballin-ist Player Make my own rules, bitch call me the mayor

02-08-2007, 05:17 PM	#20
Nanse Da Purple Pimp Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: I'm from N-E-W Jerz., where plenty murders occurz Posts: 3,131 Repped: 692 Repped 376 Times in 236 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 75 Times in 74 Posts	You're not Nas; You're not anyone else that you've dickrode..... You are RAW; You are Lyrical One; You are Sinis; You are Young Dolla You are gay. __________________ I'm the M.B.P., Most Ballin-ist Player Make my own rules, bitch call me the mayor

02-08-2007, 06:47 PM	#22
Nanse Da Purple Pimp Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: I'm from N-E-W Jerz., where plenty murders occurz Posts: 3,131 Repped: 692 Repped 376 Times in 236 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 75 Times in 74 Posts	^^^ I meant you dickride real artists, like nas. And stop denying it. You've been exposed so many times, you can't deny it anymore. __________________ I'm the M.B.P., Most Ballin-ist Player Make my own rules, bitch call me the mayor

02-06-2007, 03:08 PM	#2
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin for feed wrote it poetry style Ill post the vid so ya can go wit the beat

02-06-2007, 03:50 PM	#3
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin this

02-06-2007, 03:55 PM	#4
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	dis shit is good had a nice flow n everything

02-06-2007, 04:11 PM	#6
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ thanks for the feed Had to use his style but ill do it my way next time I used his All time favorite rhyme scheme Internal

02-06-2007, 04:24 PM	#7
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin this.....if it need work tell me wat to work on

02-06-2007, 04:30 PM	#8
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	You had a couple bars that didn't rhyme with eachother. Don't know what's up with that. Lacked multies, punches, and wordplay. You don't necissarily need punches or wordplay but it is good to do so. Check out my free.

02-06-2007, 04:30 PM	#9
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	im feelin it... good flo and all that. ill keep a look out on ya new shit. stay up

02-06-2007, 04:34 PM	#10
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Im feeling it Some real shit

02-07-2007, 08:31 AM	#12
Over_Flow Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Queens. NY Posts: 2,793 Repped: 525 Repped 939 Times in 277 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	some of it didnt rhyme.....WACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

02-07-2007, 02:10 PM	#13
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	and Yet another Bitch has appeared to talk more shit... Im already out fuck u talkin bout Faizan ur wack as fuck ya drop=Featherweight kill ur self

02-07-2007, 04:33 PM	#14
Over_Flow Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Queens. NY Posts: 2,793 Repped: 525 Repped 939 Times in 277 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^^me>u....its as simple as that

02-07-2007, 07:10 PM	#15
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	No Faizan ME>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>U its all so clear stop spammin my muthafuckin thread

02-08-2007, 08:30 AM	#16
Over_Flow Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Queens. NY Posts: 2,793 Repped: 525 Repped 939 Times in 277 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^actually me> u tyshawn.....look at this and look at my new drop....my drop is wayyyyyyyyyy better

02-08-2007, 08:33 AM	#17
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ okay u made ur drop today.. Ive been writing this..since wat last week cause i was bored.. and u still hate on my frees smh

02-08-2007, 04:57 PM	#19
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ why are u spammin my thread go sum were and fall back lol

02-08-2007, 06:36 PM	#21
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	smh: and Ur still thinking im dolla...its a same I neva dickrode nobody on this site and who wen im fuckin new here ya immature as hell get a life

02-08-2007, 06:54 PM	#23
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ No I dont dick ride Nas I would mention him all the fuckin time then ive been writin this piece and Plz Nanse They Havent exposed anything at all i kno who face is behind the computer screen they the ones lookin stupid tryin to xpose me wen it aint workin...Ya got issues on not givin up dont cha

02-08-2007, 07:06 PM	#25
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	SHUT THE FUCK UP DOLLA. . .STOP POSTING FREES HERE AS LYRICAL ONE AND ON OTHER BOARDS AS JAY HUSSLE AND VICE VERSE YOU ARE WACK, YOU SUCK, YOU ARE BIPOLAR I LOVE MAKING FUN OF YOU ps.. . .this sucked

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