Death of A KingPin Part 1 (Planning)

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 12:15 AM

here is part 1 part 2 coming soon.....

Hustle on the corner from the dead of the night till early morning//
Killed a nigga for the wrong amount of money time for mourning//
Still trynna figure out who tried to set me up but im jus outta luck//
So I retraced my steps till I figured out who is gonna get touched//
Thinking about the potent product and how I almost got shot up//
Bulletproof vest saved my flesh and now I gotta blow a spot up//
Fuck a misdemeanor I’m going to have to commit and all out felony//
Forget a dam lullaby imma let a silenced gat sing dis nigga a melody//
Niggas get on some kingpin shit start thinking that there untouchable//
But its outta question if ya can be touched as long as gunz is bustable//
Apply my Solders with heavy firearms exploding on contact like napalm//
Pump lead into A niggas chest and leave his face red just like the crayon//
But back to the fucking main story I got it in my own sacred mind category//
That imma leave the scene gory and I’ll heed to the quote murder ova glory//
Not for one second shall I even hesitate to ante up the normal murder rate//
Cuz not only am I murdering for respect but it’s a murder for the his cake//
Theres a guarantee that there will be fatal casualties but only to a certain degree//
Because any unwanted deaths won’t rest on my membrane they wont blame me//
Were in need of bulletproof vehicles incase niggas try and take us out from da base//
Cut the GPS out the car because I wouldn’t want to leave any type of fuckin trace//
You could call me a disgrace for organizing this type of plan ask who’s the man//
Leave niggas in a trance with bullets so small got em coming out da sweat glands//
But now that everything seems to be in plan looks like we got ourselves a mission//
Ready to put a KingPins death in to order his finale goes on wit my own permission//

sorry it got a lil long at da end but drop da feed o yea free agent holla at me

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 12:16 AM

uppin 4 da feed

B Dope · 02-06-2007, 12:26 AM

first thing first like I told you before cut your lines down by half.

I'll give you an example,
Your first couple lines i will fix

Hustle the corner from night till early morning
Killed niggas for wrong amount of money time for mourning

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 12:29 AM

ok^^ beside the lines being long jus pay attention to the lyrics n feed off dat i know the bars are long ok i posted it

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 01:00 AM

uppin 4 mo feed

єяіс є · 02-06-2007, 01:08 AM

this was aight prolly like a 6.5/10

needs better multies...peep my new drop

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 01:12 AM

iight i no i need more mulites err 1 says that im still workin on it but thanx 4 da feed uppin 4 mo

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 02-06-2007, 08:09 AM

Its Ok...7/10

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 11:05 AM

thanx uppin 4 mo feed

-K.P- · 02-06-2007, 11:37 AM

co sign with baller, it was ok, shorten the lines

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 11:53 AM

thanx uppin 4 mo feed

-LATIN- · 02-06-2007, 02:33 PM

Young city good shit fam!!!I liked the whole thing maybe shorten your bars up a lil bit but it was still sickkk!!! Keep em coming ONE

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 03:27 PM

^^ thanx 4 da feed yo uppin 4 more

R.A.W · 02-06-2007, 03:30 PM

This is Nice YO

I like that u used imaginary usage
get more discriptive wit words and u goin be
cool
Multies is not Neccesary in these kinds of drops
unless u want to

1

Can U rate my drop-RAW IS LIKE thanks

stay Illmatic and write away

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 03:52 PM

thanx n yea i'll check ur shit thanx 4 da feed

MiSs CaSsiDy · 02-06-2007, 04:11 PM

Still trynna figure out who tried to set me up but im jus outta luck//
So I retraced my steps till I figured out who is gonna get touched//

i like how u describe ya type movement like the way u reacted and the way u was thinking real skilled 5.5.

Thinking about the potent product and how I almost got shot up//
Bulletproof vest saved my flesh and now I gotta blow a spot up//

im starting to like ya style now more multis in ya flow coming im liking it 6.5.
lmao @now i gotta blow a spot up
if u serious u betta behave

But back to the fucking main story I got it in my own sacred mind category//
That imma leave the scene gory and I’ll heed to the quote murder ova glory//

Now u get a 8.5. for this all because u was going off subject then u realized it and stopped yaself and brought it back to the way the story was so i liked that

Were in need of bulletproof vehicles incase niggas try and take us out from da base//
Cut the GPS out the car because I wouldn’t want to leave any type of fuckin trace//

now u smart lol reeeeeeeal smart 5.5.

But now that everything seems to be in plan looks like we got ourselves a mission//
Ready to put a KingPins death in to order his finale goes on wit my own permission//

to be continued thank god lol j/p all this was crazy i explained it some off some on those was the best ones tho i was really impressed noone shouldnt be dissapointed reading it over all 5.5. holla

yo leave feed on my shit to

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 04:18 PM

thanx 4 da feed for each bar

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 04:42 PM

uppin 4 mo feed

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 05:53 PM

feed!!!!!!!!!!!

Youngcity415 · 02-06-2007, 08:35 PM

bring da feed uppppiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnn

Youngcity415 · 02-07-2007, 09:31 PM

uppin 4 feed

02-06-2007, 12:15 AM	#1
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Death of A KingPin Part 1 (Planning) Death of A KingPin Part 1 (Planning) here is part 1 part 2 coming soon..... Hustle on the corner from the dead of the night till early morning// Killed a nigga for the wrong amount of money time for mourning// Still trynna figure out who tried to set me up but im jus outta luck// So I retraced my steps till I figured out who is gonna get touched// Thinking about the potent product and how I almost got shot up// Bulletproof vest saved my flesh and now I gotta blow a spot up// Fuck a misdemeanor I’m going to have to commit and all out felony// Forget a dam lullaby imma let a silenced gat sing dis nigga a melody// Niggas get on some kingpin shit start thinking that there untouchable// But its outta question if ya can be touched as long as gunz is bustable// Apply my Solders with heavy firearms exploding on contact like napalm// Pump lead into A niggas chest and leave his face red just like the crayon// But back to the fucking main story I got it in my own sacred mind category// That imma leave the scene gory and I’ll heed to the quote murder ova glory// Not for one second shall I even hesitate to ante up the normal murder rate// Cuz not only am I murdering for respect but it’s a murder for the his cake// Theres a guarantee that there will be fatal casualties but only to a certain degree// Because any unwanted deaths won’t rest on my membrane they wont blame me// Were in need of bulletproof vehicles incase niggas try and take us out from da base// Cut the GPS out the car because I wouldn’t want to leave any type of fuckin trace// You could call me a disgrace for organizing this type of plan ask who’s the man// Leave niggas in a trance with bullets so small got em coming out da sweat glands// But now that everything seems to be in plan looks like we got ourselves a mission// Ready to put a KingPins death in to order his finale goes on wit my own permission// sorry it got a lil long at da end but drop da feed o yea free agent holla at me

02-06-2007, 01:08 AM	#6
єяіс є REPPIN' THE LOX/D-BLOCK Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: On Tha' Block 24/7 Posts: 1,043 Repped: 30 Repped 333 Times in 168 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was aight prolly like a 6.5/10 needs better multies...peep my new drop __________________ Real Niggaz listen to Real Hip-hop

02-06-2007, 08:09 AM	#8
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,902 Repped: 79 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Its Ok...7/10 __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

02-06-2007, 02:33 PM	#12
-LATIN- -+=IAMLYRICZ=+- Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: CHI CITY/DIRTY SOUTH Posts: 1,888 Repped: 334 Repped 29 Times in 27 Posts Neg Reps: 54 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Young city good shit fam!!!I liked the whole thing maybe shorten your bars up a lil bit but it was still sickkk!!! Keep em coming ONE __________________ NEW MYSPACE NEW GRAPHICS NEW PICTURES NEW MUSIC LATIN RELOADED (COMING SOON) CUT FROM A DIFFERENT CLOTH COMING AUG 26TH

02-06-2007, 04:11 PM	#16
MiSs CaSsiDy QUEEN OF HORRORCORE RAP Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: HELL Posts: 1,263 Repped: 9 Repped 31 Times in 13 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Still trynna figure out who tried to set me up but im jus outta luck// So I retraced my steps till I figured out who is gonna get touched// i like how u describe ya type movement like the way u reacted and the way u was thinking real skilled 5.5. Thinking about the potent product and how I almost got shot up// Bulletproof vest saved my flesh and now I gotta blow a spot up// im starting to like ya style now more multis in ya flow coming im liking it 6.5. lmao @now i gotta blow a spot up if u serious u betta behave But back to the fucking main story I got it in my own sacred mind category// That imma leave the scene gory and I’ll heed to the quote murder ova glory// Now u get a 8.5. for this all because u was going off subject then u realized it and stopped yaself and brought it back to the way the story was so i liked that Were in need of bulletproof vehicles incase niggas try and take us out from da base// Cut the GPS out the car because I wouldn’t want to leave any type of fuckin trace// now u smart lol reeeeeeeal smart 5.5. But now that everything seems to be in plan looks like we got ourselves a mission// Ready to put a KingPins death in to order his finale goes on wit my own permission// to be continued thank god lol j/p all this was crazy i explained it some off some on those was the best ones tho i was really impressed noone shouldnt be dissapointed reading it over all 5.5. holla yo leave feed on my shit to __________________

02-06-2007, 12:16 AM	#2
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin 4 da feed

02-06-2007, 12:26 AM	#3
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	first thing first like I told you before cut your lines down by half. I'll give you an example, Your first couple lines i will fix Hustle the corner from night till early morning Killed niggas for wrong amount of money time for mourning

02-06-2007, 12:29 AM	#4
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ok^^ beside the lines being long jus pay attention to the lyrics n feed off dat i know the bars are long ok i posted it

02-06-2007, 01:00 AM	#5
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin 4 mo feed

02-06-2007, 01:12 AM	#7
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	iight i no i need more mulites err 1 says that im still workin on it but thanx 4 da feed uppin 4 mo

02-06-2007, 11:05 AM	#9
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanx uppin 4 mo feed

02-06-2007, 11:37 AM	#10
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	co sign with baller, it was ok, shorten the lines

02-06-2007, 11:53 AM	#11
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanx uppin 4 mo feed

02-06-2007, 03:27 PM	#13
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^ thanx 4 da feed yo uppin 4 more

02-06-2007, 03:30 PM	#14
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	This is Nice YO I like that u used imaginary usage get more discriptive wit words and u goin be cool Multies is not Neccesary in these kinds of drops unless u want to 1 Can U rate my drop-RAW IS LIKE thanks stay Illmatic and write away

02-06-2007, 03:52 PM	#15
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanx n yea i'll check ur shit thanx 4 da feed

02-06-2007, 04:18 PM	#17
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanx 4 da feed for each bar

02-06-2007, 04:42 PM	#18
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin 4 mo feed

02-06-2007, 05:53 PM	#19
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	feed!!!!!!!!!!!

02-06-2007, 08:35 PM	#20
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	bring da feed uppppiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnn

02-07-2007, 09:31 PM	#21
Youngcity415 Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 1,247 Repped: 36 Repped 23 Times in 16 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin 4 feed

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