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(A) Ay!...Acrobatic Automatics At Addicts...critically Acclaimed...Autos Aimed
Ammunition Addition At Abolitions...Acceleration At Aqcuisations...So Much Aggrovation Assassination Altercations....Annihilation At Alphabetazion And Anticipation Appreciation...Amputation At Affectation (B) Ballin And Brawlin...Bricks Break, then Bake...Betray Bitch and Bodies Bleed, Bomb Brothers..ima New Breed Brazehearted...and Broken..Behave in the Behives Blood Baths...Bringin Bullshit Broken Bribes . (C)Cuz im Clappin Caps...Cuttin Cats Collectin Cash..in Combats...Customize way im Committin Crimes...Cars and Cigars... Creative Ceasar Crashin Careers...Clear Cavalier..Clickin Clackin Cashiers (D)Danger Does Dominate...Demostrate Drinkin and Drivin Drug Dealing...Dope n Digits..Diggin Ditches for D'z Deprivin Drama Denies and Determines and Drives Dem Drugs Defy..Different Days...Dumpin Dukes and Dies (E) Extreme Ether...Education n Elevation Enemies are Evidence...which Equals Elimination Eatin Enemies..Erasin Easy Evacutation Expire and Explore..no time for Explanation (F)Fo Fo Follows...Firing and Fleein at Feds and Fly Fellows Forgot...Fuckin Fight..Faggots Fry Fatalities at Fake Flippers and Feds Finatic with Fryin Four pounds....Feed Fuckaz Fire and Fled (G)Gangstas Get Grabbed and Gunned..Go Getters Gonna Grind Godzilla in the Game... Gonna Gripp Grams and Grind Groupies in the Gillardo...Guns Gripped Going at the Grave Girls are Garbage...A in Gangsta...Got Good Grades (H)Hood Hoppin...Heads Higher and Heaters aimed High Hurry Haters..Hit Hustlers...Hip got Heat up close Hi-Fi Holdin Hammers...Harmless Hustlers Hired in Hesitation Hunting the Hunters...Hullcination...thirsty with Hydration (I)Infected In Inner Ignorance and Its Inflected Inside Is Insecure..Inhale...this herion Injected (J)Jugglin Jobs...Just Jabbin and Jabbin...we Jeez Jaded and Juiced...Jungle ...Jewelry Jump by Japenese (K)Killers Killin Killers...Keepin Knives..Keepin Kicks Kyle Korver shot... Killin Ny like Knicks (L)Losin Life...Losin Lower Legs...Lost in LAX Livin a Longshot Life... Laughin Loud in my Lex Lose or Lose...Load Large and Legit..Lefts Land Lucky Luger...Losers Lives Lost..Landing my Left Hand (M)Magical Mathematician...Money Makin Mission Make My Music...Meet Me and Meet a Mortician (N)Next Nigga Neglecting...Nothing New...New Necklace New Night...New Nickels...New Nextlist (O)Occupation Orientation....Over Origination Overevaluation...Open On Organization (P)Pistol Popper Plot Plotter...Police Patrol Pushin on Ports, Pistol on Parole Prize is Prison...Pistol a Pro Playin P...Packin a Peice, Powerful Pumps and Pistols...fuck Peace (Q)Quick Qualification...Quantification...no Quatation (R)Reputations Ride...Rotations in Relocations Reppin Revalations, Rappers Registrations Regulations Recriminations...Rider Relations...Rehilibitations (S)Snipers...Shooters..Slugs And Snubs Soldiers Soak ya...Shanks=Skin Scrubbed (T)Terrorist on Track...Tech Totin...hollow Tippin...Thugs Try To Take The Team..but start Trippin (U)Understand..the Universe..cant Unbreak her Unitys Unplanned...with the Undertaker (V)Violent Vocabulary...Verbs, Vision, and Voice Victim inside Violence...Violates the Voice (W)Whip Whores, Why Win With the Wars Within (X) X-Factor (Y) You.. (Z) Zebra... AAHAHAH This Was The Hardest Shit I Ever Done....So bare With Me If It Sucks
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito
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Lots Of The Rhymes Were Unoriginal, Some Bars Didn't Rhyme.. .. Lots Of Rhymes Were Ones Ending With The Letters: -tion.. ..
And, You Failed In The Very First Line: (A) Ay!...Acrobatic Automatics At Addicts...critically Acclaimed...Autos Aimed ^^ "critically" Doesn't Start With An 'A'.. .. You Screwed Up The Whole Focal Point Of The Freestyle In The First Line.. .. WTF? Throughout The Freestyle You Also Had The Words: "in", "and", "with" And Other Words That Didn't Pertain To The Focal Letter.. .. You Really Lost Motivation After 'A'.. .. The Bars Became Shorter, The Length In Which You Rapped About Each Letter Became Shorter.. .. The Last 18 Letters You Rapped About Were Completely Awful When It Came To Pertaining To The Subject.. .. (U)Understand..the Universe..cant Unbreak her Unitys Unplanned...with the Undertaker ^^ I Mean.. .. WTF..?.. "cant Unbreak her" In An Alphabetical Slaughter..?.. There Are 5 Words In That Bar That Don't Even Start With 'U'.. .. Overall: This Was A Complete Disaster And You Failed Horribly At Maintaining The Alphabetical Portion Of This Free.. ..
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U)Understand..the Universe..cant Unbreak her
Unitys Unplanned...with the Undertaker You used the letter W T H in that rhyme of U's. It was probably hard as hell but it wasnt very great. Props for the attemp though. |
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Yeah Struggle Alot....Its Not Easy....I used Alotta Fillers...But Hey...I Was Just Tryin
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I Struggled Alot On This....I used Alotta Fillers Like And I With...and Shit....But I Was Just tryin...Wasnt Tryin To Be Good
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito
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Chill.. .. This Isn't A Fucking Disney Movie.. ..
You Either Go Hard Or Go Home.. .. In This Case, You Would've Fuckin' Went Home.. .. You Obviously Didn't Try Very Fucking Hard If You've Got: (A) Ay!...Acrobatic Automatics At Addicts...critically Acclaimed...Autos Aimed ^^ A 'C' Word In The Very First Fucking Line For 'A'.. ..
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Its Not Easy As Sayin Ok Ima Ryme Every Single Word Startin With A B C....Its Hard
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito
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ok attempt, it is difficult, i managed to do A-to-D without using other letters though, stay up
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Yea I Saw Yours....But I Just Wanted To Complete It...I Didint Think I Would...Other Then Them Filler Words It Cant Be That Bad^
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"I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito
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Up Up Up Up Uppppiinnn
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