~*A NEW REVELATION*~Ft: Tambo

R.A.W · 02-05-2007, 12:26 PM

Shouts Outs to The BIG homie Tambo Countdown
and Bang Bang Murder Unit stand up

Tambo~CountDown General
Lost part of my face laying there...bleeding from angles//
Depressed till she felt possessed and said that she was my angel//
When the threads of life come apart and the weaving gets tangled//
I saw that weed was draining life and just leaving me strangled//
Then notice...every move I make is like fleeing my breath//
And I know this...then wonder how the hell I’m seeing my death//
Momma got thunder pride she wonders why I’m being a wreck//
All cuz shes feeling what I’m feeling and she seeing me stressed//
But when I flow bullshit disappears and I can see crystal clear//
To my loved ones all I can promise is I wont miss a tear//
Don’t question if my kiss sincere...just know bliss is near//
Pray the coke come on boats and I don’t miss a pier//
Pray to God please help me stay strong if my pistol here//
Then tell my nina dry ya eyes...and when I’m gone//
Don’t fear thunder when the sky’ll cry..hear my song//
Pop another time, stack another grind...Jersey steered us wrong//

Young Jr.Writer-Bang Bang Murder Unit*
Lost My Soul Body Pusleless..while the Blood empty of my veins
Let My Thoughts Turn into actions..It Feels Good to Leave but Sad to see Moms in Pain
Cant No Longer Breath My Death is Near..Lurkin around the Corner
Homies Try to Keep The Reaper outta the group.like a Foreigner
The Scene Grusome Police aid'd By the Coroners..
On My way To Heaven Gates a BRIGHT Corriders
I Look Down Below My Moms In Misery..I Feel So Pathetic
Me and The Streetz will Neva Break we so connected
Even if im Goin I still Reach through Telepathy Fuck a Phone
Until Then Im Gone..Thats When It gets a Call Im C'Mon Home
I Hope They Acknowledge me and Not have Amensia wit Mental Blocks
and Not Leave me out Like They Mind Barricade Itself
I dont wanna Be a Black Image and Fade Myself..want to get paid myself
Neva walk in the Streetz Be a Party all life long Masquerade Myself
Stop The Fakin Ppl Portray and UpGrade Yaself
so for the Rest of my Life Ima Be Ridin Rugged...
More Than a Soljah Im the Definition of it...
I Jot down Thoughts and Express em to the Public
and Niggahs feel it even tho i dont let em touch it

Because Weather U Live or Die Its Based on Ya Self
REAL RAP

Shout to all The Countdown Generals
Bang Bang Murder Yet...GLK
man
Be Real cause this was real AhA
Im Out

IF U READ POST FEED

Lyrical Messiah · 02-05-2007, 12:39 PM

Yea i was feelin both verses

R.A.W · 02-05-2007, 12:41 PM

Uppin for Feed

^thanks Neighborhood

-K.P- · 02-05-2007, 01:06 PM

decent drop, 6.5/10 for RAW
7/10 for TM

R.A.W · 02-05-2007, 01:09 PM

^NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
*DIES*
stick hand outta grave
puts finger up

UPPIN

Lyrical Messiah · 02-05-2007, 01:49 PM

writers block 4 isnt out yet is it

R.A.W · 02-05-2007, 01:57 PM

^naw

feb 13th

LadyValentine · 02-05-2007, 04:23 PM

Nice Verses

Tambo You Came Nice As Usual, Shit I Can Feel

R.A.W Came Nice Too, The Emotion Was Clear

Stay Up

1

R.A.W · 02-05-2007, 04:25 PM

^
thanks girl
u came through

uppin for feed

~Young Gunna~ · 02-05-2007, 04:35 PM

tambo came decent....kinda basic but still not bad

second guy...upp ya game...it was semi wack to me

1

R.A.W · 02-05-2007, 04:37 PM

^
thanks gunna

ill step that up
i just came back to text
like last month

PBMaSteRMiNdiN · 02-05-2007, 05:13 PM

Good Good 8/10

R.A.W · 02-05-2007, 05:15 PM

Thanks Yo

Uppin this Ri Here

02-05-2007, 12:26 PM	#1
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	*~A NEW REVELATION~Ft: Tambo* *~A NEW REVELATION~Ft: Tambo* Shouts Outs to The BIG homie Tambo Countdown and Bang Bang Murder Unit stand up Tambo~CountDown General Lost part of my face laying there...bleeding from angles// Depressed till she felt possessed and said that she was my angel// When the threads of life come apart and the weaving gets tangled// I saw that weed was draining life and just leaving me strangled// Then notice...every move I make is like fleeing my breath// And I know this...then wonder how the hell I’m seeing my death// Momma got thunder pride she wonders why I’m being a wreck// All cuz shes feeling what I’m feeling and she seeing me stressed// But when I flow bullshit disappears and I can see crystal clear// To my loved ones all I can promise is I wont miss a tear// Don’t question if my kiss sincere...just know bliss is near// Pray the coke come on boats and I don’t miss a pier// Pray to God please help me stay strong if my pistol here// Then tell my nina dry ya eyes...and when I’m gone// Don’t fear thunder when the sky’ll cry..hear my song// Pop another time, stack another grind...Jersey steered us wrong// Young Jr.Writer-Bang Bang Murder Unit* Lost My Soul Body Pusleless..while the Blood empty of my veins Let My Thoughts Turn into actions..It Feels Good to Leave but Sad to see Moms in Pain Cant No Longer Breath My Death is Near..Lurkin around the Corner Homies Try to Keep The Reaper outta the group.like a Foreigner The Scene Grusome Police aid'd By the Coroners.. On My way To Heaven Gates a BRIGHT Corriders I Look Down Below My Moms In Misery..I Feel So Pathetic Me and The Streetz will Neva Break we so connected Even if im Goin I still Reach through Telepathy Fuck a Phone Until Then Im Gone..Thats When It gets a Call Im C'Mon Home I Hope They Acknowledge me and Not have Amensia wit Mental Blocks and Not Leave me out Like They Mind Barricade Itself I dont wanna Be a Black Image and Fade Myself..want to get paid myself Neva walk in the Streetz Be a Party all life long Masquerade Myself Stop The Fakin Ppl Portray and UpGrade Yaself so for the Rest of my Life Ima Be Ridin Rugged... More Than a Soljah Im the Definition of it... I Jot down Thoughts and Express em to the Public and Niggahs feel it even tho i dont let em touch it Because Weather U Live or Die Its Based on Ya Self REAL RAP Shout to all The Countdown Generals Bang Bang Murder Yet...GLK man Be Real cause this was real AhA Im Out IF U READ POST FEED

02-05-2007, 04:23 PM	#8
LadyValentine Veteran Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Throw A TV At You Crazy Posts: 3,948 Repped: 82 Repped 1,918 Times in 381 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 36 Times in 31 Posts	Nice Verses Tambo You Came Nice As Usual, Shit I Can Feel R.A.W Came Nice Too, The Emotion Was Clear Stay Up 1 __________________ Why In The Hell Would You Let Your Fingers Type Such Absurdity? - Me

02-05-2007, 05:13 PM	#12
PBMaSteRMiNdiN myspace.com/ObeythePen Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: In ThA NotePaD Posts: 4,906 Repped: 80 Repped 311 Times in 147 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 27 Times in 22 Posts	Good Good 8/10 __________________ "I'm having Murderous dreams cus I smoke like a Metric Ton, I Raise my L's in the Air like the Devil's Son." R.I.P. Big L & Vito

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02-05-2007, 12:39 PM	#2
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	Yea i was feelin both verses

02-05-2007, 12:41 PM	#3
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin for Feed ^thanks Neighborhood

02-05-2007, 01:06 PM	#4
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	decent drop, 6.5/10 for RAW 7/10 for TM

02-05-2007, 01:09 PM	#5
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DIES stick hand outta grave puts finger up UPPIN

02-05-2007, 01:49 PM	#6
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	writers block 4 isnt out yet is it

02-05-2007, 01:57 PM	#7
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^naw feb 13th

02-05-2007, 04:25 PM	#9
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ thanks girl u came through uppin for feed

02-05-2007, 04:35 PM	#10
~Young Gunna~ Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Gs Us Posts: 10,870 Repped: 156 Repped 574 Times in 243 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	tambo came decent....kinda basic but still not bad second guy...upp ya game...it was semi wack to me 1

02-05-2007, 04:37 PM	#11
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^ thanks gunna ill step that up i just came back to text like last month

02-05-2007, 05:15 PM	#13
R.A.W Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: OH 2 PA Posts: 244 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks Yo Uppin this Ri Here