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Old 02-04-2007, 10:30 PM   #1
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I'm Sorry

I'm gonna try to record dis on da Lloyd Banks-Til The End Beat

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This goes out to the girls tryna make it/
Cuz when ya had relationships, niggaz be taking shit/
It ain't fair to have to stare and havem' not care/
And not be able to compare why yall both feeling despair/
Ya try to make it work but shit just ain't goin' down/
Like a house of straw, shit just start blowin' down/
Ya deserve betta is what ya daddy used to tell ya/
That's why in relationships ya goin' thru hell fo/
Some man who ya think ya can make a plan wit/
But when ya mention commitment he say he can't stand kids/
I'm sorry fo the shit that I did in the past tense/
And all I can ask is fo ya to give me one last chance/
To make it right/ I'll fight, I'll sweat, I'll bleed/
Cuz when I look back you the girl that I need/
I was blinded by the fact, that I thought you was an act/
Cuz a girl so perfect had to be a vision on crack/
I couldn't believe that you really cared for me/
That when I was scared you was scared for me/
I love you girl, you my world, It's all crazy/
I’m sorry when I wasn’t there or was lazy/
I wanna be the dude you'll take to meet ya fams/
I promise that i'll be there in ya future plans/
I apologize fo the chastize and the conflicts we had/
The fact is that I'm mad and sad/
that I couldn't be man enough to meet ya dad/
I try to say sorry but i still feel bad/
Cuz I turned my back on the last good thing in my life/
So I guess dat’s why I’m feelin’ all dis strife/
I mean I messed up bad and couldn’t let it all deceive me/
So I left ya first before ya could leave me/
Didn’t know ya really wanted to be wit me no matter/
Whether good times or bad/ Ya always holdin’ da ladder/
Keepin’ me stable while I was up high tryna come down/
Tryna make myself someone instead of some clown/
Rappin’ in da street just tryna get paid/
Like I was gonna make it in a way someday/
Ya never gave up on me/ Even when I doubted myself/
Always made sure that there was food on da shelf/
Gave me da security dat I needed in a girl/
Helped me see thru da abyss of my own world/
And when I left ya/ I felt like a part of me died/
Like da best thing was gone/ Felt like I wanted to cry/
And when it was all said and done/ and My day was finished/
It felt like a part of my soul had diminished/
I wish I could turn back the clock and reconsider/
The things dat I uttered and the shit dat I didta ya/
But I can’t so all I can ask is fo ya forgiveness/
Cuz deez bars dat I’m spittin’ is my only witness/

I'm sorry
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Old 02-04-2007, 10:33 PM   #2
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