Straight Hype

B Dope · 02-04-2007, 10:10 PM

With the constant shit I'm droppin I leave rappers souls inertial
So yall anticipating my drop like the next super bowl commerical
All this chaos 24/7 is what leads to all these bunched thoughts
Confused bout life so I leave my house packed like a lunch box
I'm on the hectic pursuit for the Benjamen's and Washinton's
Hitting em up for the cake now they seein flashes of Pac Again
No ones able to match my talent, just wait for the microphone
Hoes realize my raps are gallant, so I debate who I'd Like to bone

$$$ C-Money $$$ · 02-04-2007, 10:37 PM

this shit is hot fam

Got some good lyrics and da flow is nice

stay up

B Dope · 02-04-2007, 11:00 PM

Thanks for the feed. Uppin

LethalIsILL · 02-05-2007, 07:23 PM

good flow and multies were decent
Confused bout life so I leave my house packed like a lunch box
^^that was the best line to me
can u leave feed on my drop

B Dope · 02-06-2007, 04:03 PM

ight thanks for feed. Bumpin for more. Reppin every that leaves feed.

B Dope · 02-06-2007, 04:36 PM

bumpin............

MiSs CaSsiDy · 02-06-2007, 04:47 PM

With the constant shit I'm droppin I leave rappers souls inertial
So yall anticipating my drop like the next super bowl commerical

i aint watch the balll thing commercial's i didnt really pay attention to it i believe i was working at that time 3.5

All this chaos 24/7 is what leads to all these bunched thoughts
Confused bout life so I leave my house packed like a lunch box

nigga not all lunch boxes are packed well mines was cuz i use to steal shit from my fredgerator lol i like that one though 4.5.

I'm on the hectic pursuit for the Benjamen's and Washington's
Hitting em up for the cake now they seein flashes of Pac Again

now this was sick 9.5. reeeeeeal sick i like how u continued it with a hard hiotting eco of the past times with pac that was neat

No ones able to match my talent, just wait for the microphone
Hoes realize my raps are gallant, so I debate who I'd Like to bone

lmao k baller keep spitting like this since u started youll deffinitly get a ten the last 2 bars was the toughest over all 4.0 holla

B Dope · 02-06-2007, 04:52 PM

thanks for the feed. Repped ya. BUmpin for more.

Stack$ · 02-06-2007, 04:59 PM

All this chaos 24/7 is what leads to all these bunched thoughts
Confused bout life so I leave my house packed like a lunch box
^^
fav line shit was hot
keep droppin that heat fam

B Dope · 02-06-2007, 05:03 PM

aight thanks for feed Stack$.

YoungJ · 02-06-2007, 05:46 PM

shit was hot, i liked it alot... but pac again and washington didn't rhyme much. even though i liked the lines alot, it would've been better if it rhymed.

still hot shit tho.

B Dope · 02-06-2007, 06:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by $cotty B

shit was hot, i liked it alot... but pac again and washington didn't rhyme much. even though i liked the lines alot, it would've been better if it rhymed.

still hot shit tho.

Thanks for the feed. I can see how ya think it don't rhyme very well. If it was audio no one would question it.

YoungJ · 02-06-2007, 06:49 PM

yeah i know wat you mean tho

B Dope · 02-08-2007, 01:13 AM

bumpin......

B Dope · 02-10-2007, 01:56 PM

bumpin.........

JR-One · 02-10-2007, 10:05 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Baller

With the constant shit I'm droppin I leave rappers souls inertial
So yall anticipating my drop like the next super bowl commerical

1st Line, You Can't Leave A Soul Inertial.. .. A Soul Cannot Act Slowly Or Inert.. .. It Doesn't Move Period.. ..
2nd Line, The Lines Are Too Long IMO.. .. Maybe It's Because I'm Tired And Reading Them Sluggishly.. .. But It's Throwing The Flow Off.. .. The Line Was Less Effective Because Of It.. .. It Wasn't All That Clever A Line To Begin With.. .. It's Like Saying:
dudes like my bars like they were boobies//

Quote:

All this chaos 24/7 is what leads to all these bunched thoughts
Confused bout life so I leave my house packed like a lunch box

1st Line, 'chaos 24/7'.. .. These Two Words Alone Throw Off The Flow.. .. For Two Words, There Are 7 Syllables.. .. Also, WTF Chaos Could You Possibly Be Going Through..?.. Any One Person In Africa's Chaos >> Yours.. ..
2nd Line.. .. Firstly, What Could You Be Confused About..?.. Secondly, That's A Horrible Horrible Punch.. .. Any Line Using The Word Lunchbox As A Punch, Is A Bad Line.. .. Thirdly, It Makes More Sense To Be Packed Like A Suitcase.. .. Not A Lunchbox.. ..

Quote:

I'm on the hectic pursuit for the Benjamen's and Washinton's
Hitting em up for the cake now they seein flashes of Pac Again

1st Line.. .. You Didn't Spell Benjamin Or Washington Right.. .. Pretty Much Signifying You've Never Received A Large Amount Of Either Of Them.. ..
2nd Line.. ..

You Literally Just Compared Yourself To 2Pac.. .. The Flow Was On Point For This Bar.. .. But The Punch For This Bar Was You.. .. Comparing Yourself To Tupac Shakur.. ..

Quote:

No ones able to match my talent, just wait for the microphone
Hoes realize my raps are gallant, so I debate who I'd Like to bone

1st Line.. .. "No ones able to match my talent".. .. Yet, 65% Of HHBoard >> You.. ..
2nd Line, Had To Be The Wackest Line Of The Whole Free.. .. And Yet You Ended With It.. ..

Also, Here's A Lesson To All Of You Kiddies.. ..
match my talent
raps are gallent

Match = Raps.. .. Both Have The Same Short 'A' Vowel Sound.. ..
My = Are.. .. Two Different Vowel Sounds.. .. One Has The Long 'I' Vowel Sound And One Doesn't.. ..
Talent = Gallant = Same Vowel Sounds.. ..

Therefore, My = Are.. .. Ruins The Multi/Flow.. .. Don't Get Me Wrong, It'll Still Pass.. .. But If You Want A Better Multi, Make Sure All The Vowel Sounds Work.. ..

^^ If You Want To Learn More About Vowel Sounds.. ..

Baller, Get At Me On Aim Or MSN.. ..

B Dope · 02-10-2007, 10:15 PM

Thanks a lot for the feed. I need ya msn information. Mine is ball.247@hotmail.com so just hit me up

02-04-2007, 10:10 PM	#1
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Straight Hype Straight Hype With the constant shit I'm droppin I leave rappers souls inertial So yall anticipating my drop like the next super bowl commerical All this chaos 24/7 is what leads to all these bunched thoughts Confused bout life so I leave my house packed like a lunch box I'm on the hectic pursuit for the Benjamen's and Washinton's Hitting em up for the cake now they seein flashes of Pac Again No ones able to match my talent, just wait for the microphone Hoes realize my raps are gallant, so I debate who I'd Like to bone

02-04-2007, 10:37 PM	#2
$$$ C-Money $$$ Da Realest Of Da Real Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: C-Block Massachusetts Posts: 1,426 Repped: 158 Repped 57 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 4 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	this shit is hot fam Got some good lyrics and da flow is nice stay up __________________ C-Money Battle Record W: 40 L: 12 KO: 38

02-05-2007, 07:23 PM	#4
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,966 Repped: 139 Repped 1,014 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	good flow and multies were decent Confused bout life so I leave my house packed like a lunch box ^^that was the best line to me can u leave feed on my drop __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

02-06-2007, 04:47 PM	#7
MiSs CaSsiDy QUEEN OF HORRORCORE RAP Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: HELL Posts: 1,263 Repped: 9 Repped 31 Times in 13 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	With the constant shit I'm droppin I leave rappers souls inertial So yall anticipating my drop like the next super bowl commerical i aint watch the balll thing commercial's i didnt really pay attention to it i believe i was working at that time 3.5 All this chaos 24/7 is what leads to all these bunched thoughts Confused bout life so I leave my house packed like a lunch box nigga not all lunch boxes are packed well mines was cuz i use to steal shit from my fredgerator lol i like that one though 4.5. I'm on the hectic pursuit for the Benjamen's and Washington's Hitting em up for the cake now they seein flashes of Pac Again now this was sick 9.5. reeeeeeal sick i like how u continued it with a hard hiotting eco of the past times with pac that was neat No ones able to match my talent, just wait for the microphone Hoes realize my raps are gallant, so I debate who I'd Like to bone lmao k baller keep spitting like this since u started youll deffinitly get a ten the last 2 bars was the toughest over all 4.0 holla __________________

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02-04-2007, 11:00 PM	#3
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for the feed. Uppin

02-06-2007, 04:03 PM	#5
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ight thanks for feed. Bumpin for more. Reppin every that leaves feed.

02-06-2007, 04:36 PM	#6
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	bumpin............

02-06-2007, 04:52 PM	#8
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks for the feed. Repped ya. BUmpin for more.

02-06-2007, 04:59 PM	#9
Stack$ Da Capo Join Date: Nov 2006 Posts: 266 Repped: 19 Repped 20 Times in 6 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	All this chaos 24/7 is what leads to all these bunched thoughts Confused bout life so I leave my house packed like a lunch box ^^ fav line shit was hot keep droppin that heat fam

02-06-2007, 05:03 PM	#10
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	aight thanks for feed Stack$.

02-06-2007, 05:46 PM	#11
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	shit was hot, i liked it alot... but pac again and washington didn't rhyme much. even though i liked the lines alot, it would've been better if it rhymed. still hot shit tho.

02-06-2007, 06:49 PM	#13
YoungJ Young J Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Providence RI Posts: 3,003 Repped: 203 Repped 385 Times in 113 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	yeah i know wat you mean tho

02-08-2007, 01:13 AM	#14
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	bumpin......

02-10-2007, 01:56 PM	#15
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	bumpin.........

02-10-2007, 10:15 PM	#17
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks a lot for the feed. I need ya msn information. Mine is ball.247@hotmail.com so just hit me up