Lost

Pineapple · 01-07-2007, 11:10 PM

im lost lost alongside my material thingz
lost girlz diddnt tie em down wit ringz
finnaly realized life dont shine like bling
homies dead n some gone 4 eva in da bing
i cant 4get my past so i cant concentrate on wat da futur bringz
n i kno my flow juss got off
.......but can a man cry witout bein soft?
im lyriccly in tearz starin at wallz hopin my peerz will re appear
n i understand yall dont think my writtenz iz ill
but i juss need to get shit off my chest so chill
wit da negative commentz if u got em den dont reply
cuz in dis cold world im juss tryna survive
but survival iz hard to acomplish
wen u dont got a accomplice
i juss need sumtn to keep me from fallin like a harness

The Lyrical One · 01-07-2007, 11:21 PM

to sort
its was alright tho
5.5/10

can u rate my drop Plz

Pineapple · 01-07-2007, 11:22 PM

^^^^^^^^^^yezzz i moved up to alright n yea ill rate urz but ur shit iz alwayz fire tho..........

Pineapple · 01-08-2007, 08:06 AM

can i get anymore feed?

01-07-2007, 11:10 PM	#1
Pineapple Complex Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 2,938 Repped: 1,221 Repped 2,319 Times in 707 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 3 Posts	Lost Lost im lost lost alongside my material thingz lost girlz diddnt tie em down wit ringz finnaly realized life dont shine like bling homies dead n some gone 4 eva in da bing i cant 4get my past so i cant concentrate on wat da futur bringz n i kno my flow juss got off .......but can a man cry witout bein soft? im lyriccly in tearz starin at wallz hopin my peerz will re appear n i understand yall dont think my writtenz iz ill but i juss need to get shit off my chest so chill wit da negative commentz if u got em den dont reply cuz in dis cold world im juss tryna survive but survival iz hard to acomplish wen u dont got a accomplice i juss need sumtn to keep me from fallin like a harness

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01-07-2007, 11:21 PM	#2
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	to sort its was alright tho 5.5/10 can u rate my drop Plz

01-07-2007, 11:22 PM	#3
Pineapple Complex Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 2,938 Repped: 1,221 Repped 2,319 Times in 707 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 3 Posts	^^^^^^^^^^yezzz i moved up to alright n yea ill rate urz but ur shit iz alwayz fire tho..........

01-08-2007, 08:06 AM	#4
Pineapple Complex Join Date: Oct 2006 Posts: 2,938 Repped: 1,221 Repped 2,319 Times in 707 Posts Neg Reps: 10 Neg Repped at 3 Times in 3 Posts	can i get anymore feed?