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Old 01-07-2007, 09:18 PM   #1
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Tha Breakdown Pt:1{The awakining of skills}

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Apraisin...The Awakining of Skills...Wit this Demonstrate the Meaning of wat It mean to be a Genius
This is Pure Brillance of a Mastermind...Givin off sensantions..Leavin Rookies Temptations...or Ether
InSpiration....Kno were this Goin on a Rhymin Destination...Simple Job...Just feel the appliacation...
This My Revenge an ReTaliation...For The Forgeting of this Foundation....Lit it speak for my words...from Educations
U copycats...cheap imitations...similar to to Bad Illustration..But the Importation..is havin motivation...
My Innovation....witout a invitiation to the mind...I will still somehow Inflitrate It..no hesitation...
Enter Ya Lungs Fuckin em Up In need of respirators...This By rule regulation..breakin it is an violation...
Speed this up accelaration....Anticipation...On Yall Discrimination against...This Speech...
Peeps is actin Flowtatious...Like i wont spin em around wit out beenin on axes of rotation..
Copper Tins Bang through The body Penetration...Gave it to ur friend first but next if u anxious.....
Opponents exchange rounds...But its time for Elimations...Comin in swarms Infestation....
GUess Ya wasnt well Preparated....One of da best no Debatiton stop ya extra hatin...
Make weak lyricist Void through Nullification...Try to be accepted by Buisness organization....
Sharp-witt so if it touch ur Heart than the rest of ya Organs is achin...E-beef..Diss tracks Annialation
On Supercomputer cant use Infarred Radiation...But U can end some Nacirema Dreams through devastation...
even tho Martin ended segration...we as Black and whites are still rasict



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try to do the unthinkable so i do it
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shouts to GLK
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DOOM SQUAD for all u hater keep doin it cause ima keep gettin better
hahahahahah
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Old 01-07-2007, 09:46 PM   #2
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UPPIN THis Jawn right herrrrrrrr
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Old 01-07-2007, 10:18 PM   #3
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u big word usin ass nigga lmao......

That Shit Was ill lmao u ni3e Dogg

add some more Punches in ya spit Tho
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Old 01-07-2007, 10:21 PM   #4
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cool i just wanted vocab and flow
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Old 01-07-2007, 11:20 PM   #5
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damn u uzed dem wrdz perfect shit iz sick

if u had punches 10/10

but witout 9/10 still hot drop
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Old 01-07-2007, 11:27 PM   #7
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LOL

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Old 01-08-2007, 12:28 AM   #8
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Old 01-08-2007, 08:48 AM   #9
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Your Vocabulary is on point.Your multies just go with the flow and thats a good thing because there not forced

100% fire homie
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and this proves you don't need punchlines to drop a hot verse

stay up bruh
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thanks man..............
A point ppl need to get across LOL
It took an hour to drop this but it came out right
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shit was nice dun....some of it didnt make sense and some of the rhymes were forced which took away from the general hotness of this piece!
and change ya structure its stretched as fuck.........other than that youre doing good homie keep at it!
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on the real, i think you improving, i don't like the structure you use, its a lil hard to read, but your vocab is good, flow was pretty nice too, stay up and keep improving, take my structure tips too
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Sees wat KP posted......



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thanks for the feed tho

If i have to change this structure one more damn time
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Uppin this dropp Plz rate it dont be lazy
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Dont hate on me rate the fuckin drop....

or i will knock on ya doors......
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i'll give it a 8/10
like some others i dont like the structure and the lack of punchlines take away from the glory
but the multies and vocab was just amazing
if you structure your upcoming drops then people will be able to understand the flow of the drop better
just some advice
but that was some hot shit man keep it up
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*sees smoke1lifes post*


U rookies....j/p

Not everydrops about Punchlines...Yes ima punchline rapper
but sorry if i cant fullfil U guys wants and demands
Not everydrop come wit Punchlines
and i will fix the structure soon...My new drop same structure more punches

HAPPY!

MY NEW DROPS WILL HAVE A NEW STRUCTURE IF U DONT LIKE THE NEW ONE
IDC BECAUSE IM NOT GOIN CHANGE IT 4 PPL DEMANDS
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