3RiC & Southside50mob collabo pt.3

єяіс є · 01-07-2007, 06:57 PM

(3RiC)
-nigga i can do u like tha pringles motto..and pop~ya~top
a nigga will do anything to get away...even jus shot~tha~cop
-on tha run from tha law..they cant catch~a~nigga
runnin fast like a sprinter...i unleash tha latch~of~tha~trigga(runnin' ready to fire)
-i assasinate niggaz...like its my only~ocupation
when i clap bullets..it looks like an openly~standin~ovation

(Southside50mob)
-ya'll mutha fuckas claim the big apple
you dont got shit but a fuckin bottled snapple
-queens dont need ya and brooklyn wouldnt feed ya
bronx says ya'll neva lead us
-harlem ready for war ya'll neva beat us
and every borrow will let u kno you'll neva be us

єяіс є · 01-07-2007, 08:12 PM

uppin fo feed........

B Dope · 01-07-2007, 08:19 PM

Look eric ya need to expand your vocab. Need to have some two sylable words with a multie. Don't just think about a multie either. Think of a punch then make the other bar rhyme multiple with it.

-i assasinate niggaz...like its my only~ocupation
when i clap bullets..it looks like an openly~standin~ovation

That is not good at all^. What is your multie with only? It cant be Openly because you have Standing after it. If that was supposed to be a multie than it should be openly ovation and only ocupation. Feel Me? Last thing about that bar. Ovation and ocupation don't rhyme very well, same with openly and only. Openly has 3 syllables while only has 2. Rep me for the tips bro.

The Lyrical One · 01-07-2007, 09:45 PM

everytime u rate its about mulites man Its not that Important man at all
every post about somebodies drop is Mulites and Punches wen urs barely even hittin

But eric this is still weak tho step it up

would should could simple

assassination evaporation collaboration

complex

start usin better since Stand Ovation look that shit up

and get a vet to help u on this shit

B Dope · 01-07-2007, 10:47 PM

My punches aint even hittin? Bro what are you talkin about? IN that free I dropped everybody thought they were good but you. Plus those punches wernt supposed to be hittin anybody because they wernt aimed at anyone. Yes the were good. And yes multies are important. If ya wanna be a good rapper you need them. It adds complexity to a rhyme. And I'm telling them about them because the obviously don't use them and niether do you. I don't know why you're talkin shit on me when I'm better than you.

єяіс є · 01-09-2007, 07:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Lyrical One

everytime u rate its about mulites man Its not that Important man at all
every post about somebodies drop is Mulites and Punches wen urs barely even hittin

But eric this is still weak tho step it up

would should could simple

assassination evaporation collaboration

complex

start usin better since Stand Ovation look that shit up

and get a vet to help u on this shit

aight thanx fo tha' tip

01-07-2007, 06:57 PM	#1
єяіс є REPPIN' THE LOX/D-BLOCK Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: On Tha' Block 24/7 Posts: 1,043 Repped: 30 Repped 333 Times in 168 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	3RiC & Southside50mob collabo pt.3 3RiC & Southside50mob collabo pt.3 (3RiC) -nigga i can do u like tha pringles motto..and pop~ya~top a nigga will do anything to get away...even jus shot~tha~cop -on tha run from tha law..they cant catch~a~nigga runnin fast like a sprinter...i unleash tha latch~of~tha~trigga(runnin' ready to fire) -i assasinate niggaz...like its my only~ocupation when i clap bullets..it looks like an openly~standin~ovation (Southside50mob) -ya'll mutha fuckas claim the big apple you dont got shit but a fuckin bottled snapple -queens dont need ya and brooklyn wouldnt feed ya bronx says ya'll neva lead us -harlem ready for war ya'll neva beat us and every borrow will let u kno you'll neva be us __________________ Real Niggaz listen to Real Hip-hop

01-07-2007, 08:12 PM	#2
єяіс є REPPIN' THE LOX/D-BLOCK Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: On Tha' Block 24/7 Posts: 1,043 Repped: 30 Repped 333 Times in 168 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin fo feed........ __________________ Real Niggaz listen to Real Hip-hop

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01-07-2007, 08:19 PM	#3
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Look eric ya need to expand your vocab. Need to have some two sylable words with a multie. Don't just think about a multie either. Think of a punch then make the other bar rhyme multiple with it. -i assasinate niggaz...like its my only~ocupation when i clap bullets..it looks like an openly~standin~ovation That is not good at all^. What is your multie with only? It cant be Openly because you have Standing after it. If that was supposed to be a multie than it should be openly ovation and only ocupation. Feel Me? Last thing about that bar. Ovation and ocupation don't rhyme very well, same with openly and only. Openly has 3 syllables while only has 2. Rep me for the tips bro.

01-07-2007, 09:45 PM	#4
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	everytime u rate its about mulites man Its not that Important man at all every post about somebodies drop is Mulites and Punches wen urs barely even hittin But eric this is still weak tho step it up would should could simple assassination evaporation collaboration complex start usin better since Stand Ovation look that shit up and get a vet to help u on this shit

01-07-2007, 10:47 PM	#5
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	My punches aint even hittin? Bro what are you talkin about? IN that free I dropped everybody thought they were good but you. Plus those punches wernt supposed to be hittin anybody because they wernt aimed at anyone. Yes the were good. And yes multies are important. If ya wanna be a good rapper you need them. It adds complexity to a rhyme. And I'm telling them about them because the obviously don't use them and niether do you. I don't know why you're talkin shit on me when I'm better than you.