When you Lie

.JKN. · 01-07-2007, 06:03 PM

When ya lie in your raps, the craft is soft//
Forced crap at an attempt for crack leave you lost//
Your shit dont stick, sounds like ya just slacked off//
What you got there aint sick, its just a bad cough//

You bust guns? You on the block and You Drug Dealing?//
You aint nun, half of what you say come from nyquil and dreamin//
You rhyming under pressure like crunchtime, so u spit bout caps peeling//
You soft though, thats why when I throw punchlines, you catch feelins//

I dont need a smith n' wesson for heat, my flow leave you in peace//
This a competition, u lose, u beat, u short like a midgets knees//
Dont take it harsh brejin, head home and handle the grief//
But if ya want war, call me a fat texan with meat, I love the beef//

cuz My rhymes leave stung like killa beez by the severals//
leave you hung on a tree, choking for life wit red eyes like the devil//
and even if u survive, u wouldnt be worth more then bootlegged bezels//
cuz you'd be left deformed like babies born at high radiation levels//

B Dope · 01-07-2007, 06:20 PM

Not bad considering this is one of your first drops. If it is. I seen you attempted multies in some of your stuff which is a good thing for a first drop.
Needa work on your punches though.

.JKN. · 01-07-2007, 06:23 PM

lol im more into gfx but i just wanted to drop something cuz i rhyme for awhile then stop and get rusty lol

01-07-2007, 06:03 PM	#1
.JKN. Banned Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 2,055 Repped: 93 Repped 164 Times in 62 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	When you Lie When you Lie When ya lie in your raps, the craft is soft// Forced crap at an attempt for crack leave you lost// Your shit dont stick, sounds like ya just slacked off// What you got there aint sick, its just a bad cough// You bust guns? You on the block and You Drug Dealing?// You aint nun, half of what you say come from nyquil and dreamin// You rhyming under pressure like crunchtime, so u spit bout caps peeling// You soft though, thats why when I throw punchlines, you catch feelins// I dont need a smith n' wesson for heat, my flow leave you in peace// This a competition, u lose, u beat, u short like a midgets knees// Dont take it harsh brejin, head home and handle the grief// But if ya want war, call me a fat texan with meat, I love the beef// cuz My rhymes leave stung like killa beez by the severals// leave you hung on a tree, choking for life wit red eyes like the devil// and even if u survive, u wouldnt be worth more then bootlegged bezels// cuz you'd be left deformed like babies born at high radiation levels//

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01-07-2007, 06:20 PM	#2
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Not bad considering this is one of your first drops. If it is. I seen you attempted multies in some of your stuff which is a good thing for a first drop. Needa work on your punches though.

01-07-2007, 06:23 PM	#3
.JKN. Banned Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 2,055 Repped: 93 Repped 164 Times in 62 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lol im more into gfx but i just wanted to drop something cuz i rhyme for awhile then stop and get rusty lol