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Old 01-07-2007, 04:09 PM   #1
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Exclamation Sick With It. . .{Countdown Collabo}

Sick With It. . .{Countdown Collabo}

Yea. . This CD Mafuckas. . .3-2-1 Bitches. . .Lemme Rip This Shit For Ya'll. . .Wordplay Insane Bitches. . .Just Try And Understand Me Now. . .

Only Had Ta Say Your Name One. . .
And Still It Left Your Tries Trumped//
Dude Has Clearsil On His Joints. . .
Cause They Refusin To Rise Up//
Yall Fake. . .Just Those Anti-“G’s”. . .
Makin Me Sleep With My Cats Head??//
I Know I’m Larger Than Ya Lives. . .
Guess You Could Call Me A Fathead//
Pay Homage. . .As I Give These Fucks. . .
A Benine Hurting. . .A Sly Murking. . .//
This Dudes Simply Behind Me. . .
Rap Version Of Nick Prochak To Ty Erving//
Your Attention May Attain To Me. . .
Amazed At How I Slay These Lames//
Dont Needa Waste More Time Cause. . .
Duke's Like Darrent Williams. . .Cant Play The Game//

WHOA. . .GET ON MY LEVEL. . .
Contunie The Murkage KP. . .

...Im giving out a "Warnin"...but believe i aint Ready Ta Die...
...Carryin Glock Without a care...like a Fed With A Nine...
"Strikin" Em down like Bowling...10 Murda's - see im Steady Wi' Mine...
Droppin eye scathing freestyles..sayin "props for the feed"'s' like givin Medals Ta Blind
Lyrically runnin rings round fools..Like Santa Claus cos i put ya in "Lapland"
I lose as often as a brand new GatJam..cos my flows tighter than the suit for BatMan..
Fuck with countdown..its "321" 'N' KP'll leave Your Lungs Fucked Mayne..
...all the others crews dissappeared..'We took ya out'.. - like Young Buck's Chain...

GOD DAMN WE KILLEN EM. . .Get 'Em Ant
In Here By Choice Force and Reason, I Rip Papers To Shreds//
Ima Have To Leave You Stuck Thinkin Like An Ache In ya Head//
Runnin BattleGrounds,"chicken" To Battle, The Net Kernal Sanders//
Wat I Write Is trueWat I Put Down Is Heat So Im Burnin Answers//
Words Attackin The Page,Mess Up Ya Grill WenYou Lackin A Face//
"Wat Comes Around Goes Around" Like You Catchin The Phrase//
Im Done Time To To Pass the Mic From Me To The Otha One//
.........Bow Down This The Countdown Man 3 2 The Mothafckin 1//


DUKES CANT FUCK WIT US
Finish Em LadyV

When The Clock Strikes 12 On The 11th Of May, To Heaven You Pray, Cause Death Is Knocking At Your Door Like Corrupted Jakes, Ready To Take, Any Stash Of Cash, I Armed With More Then Mace, I’ve Got Blood On My Hands From The Last Coward I Had To Face, He Put Up A Fight So I Had To Kill Him Violently, Teach These Clowns A Lesson So I Fucked With Him Mentally, Told Him To Strip In Broad Day Before I Empty Three, This Fool Was Reluctant So I Told Him I Burnt His Mother In A Suburban Jeep, He Must Have Seen Malice In My Eyes Because He Rang Home, No Answer, Great! My Plan Is Working More Then Perfectly, Urgently This Kid Tore The Gucci From His Shoulder Blades, Told Me I Could Have The Lambo And About 2 Mill In Weight, I Thought About It And Hesitated, I Could Take The Cash And Run, But I Answered No And I Told Him What’s Done Is Done, I Was Out For Revenge This Kid Disrespected A Queen, So I Told I Would Destroy Him Like Crack To A Fiend, He Bowed To Me Twice But I Replied, This Is About More Then Your Life, And Threw Him Inside The Lambo And Proceeded To Drive..Fast But Calm, The Kid’s Mumbling The Last Words Of A Psalm, His Instincts Kick In And Now He’s Banging And Yelling At The Window, Some Kid Spots Him And Reaches Over To Tell His Father, I Tell Him To Stop Moving Before I Make Him A Urban Martyr, I Put My Foot To The Pedal And He Tells Me He Respects Me, "A Queen Amongst Kings Is Very Healthy", He Tells Me If I Let Him Go I Will Become Made For Sure, The First In It’s Sordid History, Every Jewel I Rock Will Be Glistening, I Start To Grin, He Spots It And Plays On My Low Self Esteem, Assuring Me I’m All He Has Ever Wanted In A Thoro Queen, Before I Know It I’m Pulling Over, Unbuttoning His Shirt, He’s Got A Smile On His Face Doing The Same With My Skirt, Kissing Fanatically, On Him I Unleash My Wildest Fantasies, Before I Know It Were Done And I’m Totally Exhausted, I’m Breathing Heavy And Mad Sore Like I’ve Been Assaulted, I Look Over And Expect To See The Face Of My Beloved, But He’s Missing, The Window Is Broken And I’m Itching, Like A Fiend For His Touch, For His Love And Acceptance, But Dude Pawned Me Like A “No1 Mom” Pendant, This Is Want Happens When You Lust For Men And Earn For Acceptance Amongst His Friends, Know How Special You Are, Take Pride And Shoot For The Stars..

AHAHA . . .CANT FUCK WIT THIS. . .3-2-1 . . .Shout Out To Lotus And Spoken
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Old 01-07-2007, 04:12 PM   #2
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good collab
but Vs part extra LONG

good overall....9/10
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First - Benign? Attain? Yeah, maybe you should stop using words you don't understand.

Second - no.

Third - It's Colonel Sanders.

Last - you told a dude to strip; when he refused, you told him you'd burned his mother to death &, opposed to angering him, this made him obedient??? Not only this, but it made him want to have sex with you?? Ok.
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Old 01-07-2007, 05:17 PM   #4
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Old 01-07-2007, 05:17 PM   #5
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Woah Lady V was all over the place...its like an essay.

Yeah 1st dude (i didnt read who was who apart from Lady V) some words used incorrectly as Shogun pointed out.

2nd dude: kinda simple. some lines could of been made better

3rd dude - again simple...not saying too much.

edit: I finally read Lady v's verse....are you a Nas fan?
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Old 01-07-2007, 05:37 PM   #6
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Woah Lady V was all over the place...its like an essay.

Yeah 1st dude (i didnt read who was who apart from Lady V) some words used incorrectly as Shogun pointed out.

2nd dude: kinda simple. some lines could of been made better

3rd dude - again simple...not saying too much.

edit: I finally read Lady v's verse....are you a Nas fan?
pwnage?

And thx for the subliminal shout maybe?
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Old 01-07-2007, 05:44 PM   #7
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..umm where would that subliminal shout be? :/
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Old 01-07-2007, 05:59 PM   #9
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ladyv= dyke...i can tell by reading the first few...ummm, sentences(??) from her thesis
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..umm where would that subliminal shout be? :/
wuznt talkin 2 yu sun
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Ummmmm it was...okay...I guess...I was hype...but then I was...well...I'll just say that all hip-hop is an art and you guys and lady use it as an expression...I just don't know what you all were tryna say...was this a diss or just something just to do...SMH...IDK but don't think I'm tryna diss it but I've seen better focus from toodlers tryna color inside the lines....you guys went everywhere but like I said It's all love...no hate...just get focused...REAL TALK!

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i thought countdown was tm and thrillz..who the hell are these guys
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shits hot... lady v.... mad fuckin long lmao... cc nice shit... ant shit was hot juss too damn small... alltogether tho... 8/10... holla back

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and Spoken leaves comment wit out commentin KP


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iight...Verse 1: Average bars...nothing too special...kinda boring because there was nothing interesting said...

Verse 2:Weird attempts at wordplay and such...didnt really have good connections with them...simple Ready to Die connection...

Verse 3:you rhymed 1 wit 1....bars were simplistic...wasnt really feelin your verse at all...

Verse 4:structure made me lose interest...bars werent even...seemed more like poetry...somehow u used a story in a punchline collab...kinda confusing...story wasnt very entertaining....try a different structure and use a verse that relevant...


overall...

5/10

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Ummmmm it was...okay...I guess...I was hype...but then I was...well...I'll just say that all hip-hop is an art and you guys and lady use it as an expression...I just don't know what you all were tryna say...was this a diss or just something just to do...SMH...IDK but don't think I'm tryna diss it but I've seen better focus from toodlers tryna color inside the lines....you guys went everywhere but like I said It's all love...no hate...just get focused...REAL TALK!

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Black, You My Boy And All But If You Had Straight Up Said, It Was Wack Or I Fell Off, I Would Have Respected You More For Your Comments, But To Beat Around The Bush And Then Question My Love For Hip Hop As A Culture? Is Straight Up Disrespecting Me, And I Don't Appriate That

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