Dead Presidents Keystyle....{whole bunch of stuff}

The Lyrical One · 01-06-2007, 11:29 PM

Highly Influenced By Lupe Fiascos Version

New York wat Up
Chi-town wat Up
Philly wat up
Columbus wat up
Doom Squad,Bang this One out

Through These Rhymes alotta Emcee Mis-direct..
Dont forget its the Internet
and its and Outrage Like wen Bush was Reelect
Let Me Resurrect...The Cuttin of Ya Talk...Like a Thread witta Short Subjects..
So The shit U tak bout is Incorrect..
...Lyrics That Lift Spirits and Move wit Lypse..and and Explodes on Ya mind like the Breakin of hemorrhagic cyst
Yes its an Honor to Be apart of the Movment But I ponder..and Wonder...
......and wen its Issue im like a Transponder...
Scars...are Visble and Clothes Our Tore..Sword in Hand Impleament of War..
Everything in ya Life is Limited like a conveince store...
and U dont kno that till U in Heaven Later staring down Ya Corpse

It was goin be a topical but i put all my thoughts into one
so i call it Multi-topical
but anyway tell me if i could re-word this holla

goin be Reworded soon....

Sean Washington · 01-06-2007, 11:34 PM

Through These Rhymes alotta Emcee Mis-direct..
Dont forget its the Internet
and its and Outrage Like wen Bush was Reelect

Opener was Funny lol

Overall Decent Drop.....7/10 Multies Were There

The Lyrical One · 01-06-2007, 11:35 PM

thanks Uppin this drop

The Lyrical One · 01-07-2007, 12:07 AM

UPPIN DEAD PREZ

I HAVE NACIREMA DREAMS 2 SO MAKE EM COME TRU

B Dope · 01-07-2007, 12:42 AM

It was ok. U needa work on your vocab a lil bit.

Example: Like subjects and reelect don't rhyme that good. Just the end of the words rhyme. If ya want it to be better you need sub to rhyme with the first part of the word too. So Sub and Re do ryhme. Got what I'm saying

B Dope · 01-07-2007, 12:43 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Lyrical One

UPPIN DEAD PREZ

I HAVE NACIREMA DREAMS 2 SO MAKE EM COME TRU

we all have nacirema dreams.

pr00f151 · 01-07-2007, 12:44 AM

pretty sure the name of the gang is goon squad dude but check the streets
maybe im mistakin maybe thats your e-net gang

The Lyrical One · 01-07-2007, 12:45 AM

Man i kno wat i was doin

it didnt matter bout the rhymin words

reelECT SubjECT

The Lyrical One · 01-07-2007, 12:47 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pr00f151

pretty sure the name of the gang is goon squad dude but check the streets
maybe im mistakin maybe thats your e-net gang

Rate tha Drop

and
DOOM SQAUDS A RAP GROUP {MINE}
AND A GANG OUT IN COLUMBUS AFFILIATE WIT MY STREET

pr00f151 · 01-07-2007, 12:50 AM

ya whatever man

The Lyrical One · 01-07-2007, 12:53 AM

U spammin my drop yo rate it
i wasnt tryin to be funny i was tellin U
I kno were Goon S is located in chicage i gave a shout out

so rate and dont spam

Nanse · 01-07-2007, 12:57 AM

it was pretty good. and ur avatar is fuckin SICK!111

props

The Lyrical One · 01-07-2007, 01:00 AM

lol

and ROTFFLMFAO AT UR OPTIMUS SIG

AND MY AVY IS A KING MORE CREATIVE THAN MOST

Nanse · 01-07-2007, 01:01 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Lyrical One

lol

and ROTFFLMFAO AT UR OPTIMUS SIG

AND MY AVY IS A KING MORE CREATIVE THAN MOST

Its not "Optimus" its Babe Truth, as red eye has told me on aim.

The Lyrical One · 01-07-2007, 01:04 AM

damn Truth u fat
u cant even fit a box for ur size
let me guess he turns into a cheeseburger vechile we he transform

Nanse · 01-07-2007, 01:05 AM

^^^ lmao pretty much owned

The Lyrical One · 01-07-2007, 01:08 AM

I own truth now Yey
but ima actuction him off now since we no use

B Dope · 01-07-2007, 01:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Lyrical One

Man i kno wat i was doin

it didnt matter bout the rhymin words

reelECT SubjECT

Thats cool all i'm sayin it would be better if they rhymed better.

The Lyrical One · 01-07-2007, 02:36 AM

UPpin thin jawn and the Other one

.Krysis. · 01-07-2007, 12:41 PM

Preferred Ya Other Drop, This Was Probs On The Same Lvl Tho, Maybe A 7/10 Tho...

...Lyrics That Lift Spirits and Move wit Lypse..and and Explodes on Ya mind like the Breakin of hemorrhagic cyst

Coo Line... ^^
Stay Up

The Lyrical One · 01-07-2007, 12:45 PM

thanks suppose to be a topical LOL

but i fuck it up and made it Multi-topical

uppin

01-06-2007, 11:29 PM	#1
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Dead Presidents Keystyle....{whole bunch of stuff} Dead Presidents Keystyle....{whole bunch of stuff} Highly Influenced By Lupe Fiascos Version New York wat Up Chi-town wat Up Philly wat up Columbus wat up Doom Squad,Bang this One out Through These Rhymes alotta Emcee Mis-direct.. Dont forget its the Internet and its and Outrage Like wen Bush was Reelect Let Me Resurrect...The Cuttin of Ya Talk...Like a Thread witta Short Subjects.. So The shit U tak bout is Incorrect.. ...Lyrics That Lift Spirits and Move wit Lypse..and and Explodes on Ya mind like the Breakin of hemorrhagic cyst Yes its an Honor to Be apart of the Movment But I ponder..and Wonder... ......and wen its Issue im like a Transponder... Scars...are Visble and Clothes Our Tore..Sword in Hand Impleament of War.. Everything in ya Life is Limited like a conveince store... and U dont kno that till U in Heaven Later staring down Ya Corpse It was goin be a topical but i put all my thoughts into one so i call it Multi-topical but anyway tell me if i could re-word this holla goin be Reworded soon....

01-07-2007, 12:57 AM	#12
Nanse Da Purple Pimp Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: I'm from N-E-W Jerz., where plenty murders occurz Posts: 3,131 Repped: 692 Repped 376 Times in 236 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 75 Times in 74 Posts	it was pretty good. and ur avatar is fuckin SICK!111 props __________________ I'm the M.B.P., Most Ballin-ist Player Make my own rules, bitch call me the mayor

01-07-2007, 01:05 AM	#16
Nanse Da Purple Pimp Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: I'm from N-E-W Jerz., where plenty murders occurz Posts: 3,131 Repped: 692 Repped 376 Times in 236 Posts Neg Reps: 49 Neg Repped at 75 Times in 74 Posts	^^^ lmao pretty much owned __________________ I'm the M.B.P., Most Ballin-ist Player Make my own rules, bitch call me the mayor

01-07-2007, 12:41 PM	#20
.Krysis. AkA Riskz Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 3,253 Repped: 479 Repped 742 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Preferred Ya Other Drop, This Was Probs On The Same Lvl Tho, Maybe A 7/10 Tho... ...Lyrics That Lift Spirits and Move wit Lypse..and and Explodes on Ya mind like the Breakin of hemorrhagic cyst Coo Line... ^^ Stay Up __________________ "I'm the Archbishop of this rap shit, excommunicate.. faith from my narrative, you don't want no arms like Hans Blix, watch me clamp this, like lock jaw, smack you so hard your frame took flight & soared like a Condor".

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01-06-2007, 11:34 PM	#2
Sean Washington 1-0-1 Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Teaneck NJ Posts: 164 Repped: 27 Repped 4 Times in 3 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Through These Rhymes alotta Emcee Mis-direct.. Dont forget its the Internet and its and Outrage Like wen Bush was Reelect Opener was Funny lol Overall Decent Drop.....7/10 Multies Were There

01-06-2007, 11:35 PM	#3
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks Uppin this drop

01-07-2007, 12:07 AM	#4
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	UPPIN DEAD PREZ I HAVE NACIREMA DREAMS 2 SO MAKE EM COME TRU

01-07-2007, 12:42 AM	#5
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	It was ok. U needa work on your vocab a lil bit. Example: Like subjects and reelect don't rhyme that good. Just the end of the words rhyme. If ya want it to be better you need sub to rhyme with the first part of the word too. So Sub and Re do ryhme. Got what I'm saying

01-07-2007, 12:44 AM	#7
pr00f151 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 195 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	pretty sure the name of the gang is goon squad dude but check the streets maybe im mistakin maybe thats your e-net gang

01-07-2007, 12:45 AM	#8
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Man i kno wat i was doin it didnt matter bout the rhymin words reelECT SubjECT

01-07-2007, 12:50 AM	#10
pr00f151 Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2005 Posts: 195 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ya whatever man

01-07-2007, 12:53 AM	#11
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	U spammin my drop yo rate it i wasnt tryin to be funny i was tellin U I kno were Goon S is located in chicage i gave a shout out so rate and dont spam

01-07-2007, 01:00 AM	#13
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lol and ROTFFLMFAO AT UR OPTIMUS SIG AND MY AVY IS A KING MORE CREATIVE THAN MOST

01-07-2007, 01:04 AM	#15
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	damn Truth u fat u cant even fit a box for ur size let me guess he turns into a cheeseburger vechile we he transform

01-07-2007, 01:08 AM	#17
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I own truth now Yey but ima actuction him off now since we no use

01-07-2007, 02:36 AM	#19
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	UPpin thin jawn and the Other one

01-07-2007, 12:45 PM	#21
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	thanks suppose to be a topical LOL but i fuck it up and made it Multi-topical uppin