Punchline rappings Finest

B Dope · 01-06-2007, 06:41 PM

Tell me your favorite punch and tell me which one ya
didn't like so much and if so how to improve for those high inter+ rappers.

With or without no bomb your so calm like nothing happens to tha don
Then in no long shit goes wrong, then you're air gaspin like Saddam

I'm tha bomb so all yall with cake should probably lock ya beema
Cause I get into that shit and leave it nice and clear like aquafina

Stick your dick in that thick shit then your pist cause she made it burn
Got ya turn but didnt learn that she be switching more balls than David stern

With your bros you always be dissing hoes, how you wouldn't be kissing those
Well If you're not pussy whipped than why she realling it in like a fishing pole

-K.P- · 01-06-2007, 06:49 PM

With or without no bomb your so calm like nothing happens to tha don
Then in no long shit goes wrong, then you're air gaspin like Saddam
DIDNT RHYME...
I'm tha bomb so all yall with cake should probably lock ya beema
Cause I get into that shit and leave it nice and clear like aquafina
this was ok
Stick your dick in that thick pussy then your pist cause she made it burn
Got ya turn but didnt learn that she be switching more balls than David stern
yea this was decent lol
With your bros you always be dissing hoes, how you wouldn't be kissing those
Well If you're not pussy whipped than why she realling it in like a fishing pole
corny.........

this was iight i enjoyed it, prolly a 6/10 drop, stay up

B Dope · 01-06-2007, 06:55 PM

That first one did rhyme, tha-don.........Sa-dom

B Dope · 01-06-2007, 06:57 PM

....................

-K.P- · 01-06-2007, 06:59 PM

who is sadOm?

B Dope · 01-06-2007, 07:04 PM

Saddam Hussein. But it is pronounced like it's Sa-dOm

-K.P- · 01-06-2007, 07:14 PM

not were im from boyo

B Dope · 01-06-2007, 07:17 PM

Well the real way is Sa-dom not sa-dam, but whatever though.

The Lyrical One · 01-06-2007, 07:23 PM

3/10

that saddam line was the only pucnhline usually ya drops be nice
but since u wanna judge on Punchlines this wat u get

and that david stern line was good but not OMFG

stay up keep workin on em

Just aim me so i can take u to this Link

B Dope · 01-06-2007, 07:29 PM

3/10? but I got 2 nice punches? I thought the aquafina one was ok I just need to word it better or set it up. The rest were punches too. If your saying they're not punches or if they wern't that good.

The Lyrical One · 01-06-2007, 07:43 PM

they werent that good

LIKE THEY WERENT THAT SERIOUS

i cant give advice cause i dont want haters on my damn back but ill show u

The Lyrical One · 01-06-2007, 07:52 PM

this my peeps

hades from another site one bar

Kid Stop Ya Wishing... Just Quit It, Yup, STOP Ya Dissin',
Cos Ya Shit Get No Feed.. Kinda Like Mal-Nutrition!!! (lol)

another
Damn Kid You Killed It..... Nah Ur Ass Like Colon!
My Punches Hit Lypse.. Now The Bitches Mouths Swollen

My Homie Kay-ohz also from another site

Im poppin da trunk so u betta run-fast... Me n Hades guna drop u in ur own BLOOD-BATH!! We dont play 'amatuer games', lik Halo-vets... Cuz we see u cowerin from 'F.E.A.R.' lik u BAILED-UR-DEATH!!

I'll jam 'hooked on phonics' in ya mind, so u can get a better koncept... Cuz bro fukkin wit a vet lands u mailin letters 2 CONVICTS!!

B Dope · 01-07-2007, 01:13 AM

couple those good^ Bumpin fo feed.

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 01-07-2007, 01:21 AM

naw. . .punches were lacking. . .

the david stern line was nice tho. . .

1st and 4th bars were . . .subpar. . .

B Dope · 01-07-2007, 01:44 AM

Thanks for feed.^ uppin......

BTW...Your avy scares me.(No Homo)

Tom Chambers · 01-07-2007, 03:35 AM

decent,,,,,but not OMG drop...................7/10.........

Tom Chambers · 01-07-2007, 03:35 AM

who is that in your sig???

B Dope · 01-07-2007, 12:47 PM

ms. bootylicious, beyonce.^^

Rascit · 01-07-2007, 01:17 PM

not bad still needs alot of work tho...keep it up

B Dope · 01-07-2007, 06:04 PM

Ight I know that the last ones suck, Bumpin for more feed on the others.

01-06-2007, 06:41 PM	#1
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Punchline rappings Finest Punchline rappings Finest Tell me your favorite punch and tell me which one ya didn't like so much and if so how to improve for those high inter+ rappers. With or without no bomb your so calm like nothing happens to tha don Then in no long shit goes wrong, then you're air gaspin like Saddam I'm tha bomb so all yall with cake should probably lock ya beema Cause I get into that shit and leave it nice and clear like aquafina Stick your dick in that thick shit then your pist cause she made it burn Got ya turn but didnt learn that she be switching more balls than David stern With your bros you always be dissing hoes, how you wouldn't be kissing those Well If you're not pussy whipped than why she realling it in like a fishing pole

01-07-2007, 01:17 PM	#19
Rascit Philthy Rich Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 2,840 Repped: 744 Repped 42 Times in 5 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	not bad still needs alot of work tho...keep it up __________________

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01-06-2007, 06:49 PM	#2
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	With or without no bomb your so calm like nothing happens to tha don Then in no long shit goes wrong, then you're air gaspin like Saddam DIDNT RHYME... I'm tha bomb so all yall with cake should probably lock ya beema Cause I get into that shit and leave it nice and clear like aquafina this was ok Stick your dick in that thick pussy then your pist cause she made it burn Got ya turn but didnt learn that she be switching more balls than David stern yea this was decent lol With your bros you always be dissing hoes, how you wouldn't be kissing those Well If you're not pussy whipped than why she realling it in like a fishing pole corny......... this was iight i enjoyed it, prolly a 6/10 drop, stay up

01-06-2007, 06:55 PM	#3
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	That first one did rhyme, tha-don.........Sa-dom

01-06-2007, 06:57 PM	#4
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	....................

01-06-2007, 06:59 PM	#5
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	who is sadOm?

01-06-2007, 07:04 PM	#6
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Saddam Hussein. But it is pronounced like it's Sa-dOm

01-06-2007, 07:14 PM	#7
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	not were im from boyo

01-06-2007, 07:17 PM	#8
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Well the real way is Sa-dom not sa-dam, but whatever though.

01-06-2007, 07:23 PM	#9
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	3/10 that saddam line was the only pucnhline usually ya drops be nice but since u wanna judge on Punchlines this wat u get and that david stern line was good but not OMFG stay up keep workin on em Just aim me so i can take u to this Link

01-06-2007, 07:29 PM	#10
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	3/10? but I got 2 nice punches? I thought the aquafina one was ok I just need to word it better or set it up. The rest were punches too. If your saying they're not punches or if they wern't that good.

01-06-2007, 07:43 PM	#11
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	they werent that good LIKE THEY WERENT THAT SERIOUS i cant give advice cause i dont want haters on my damn back but ill show u

01-06-2007, 07:52 PM	#12
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this my peeps hades from another site one bar Kid Stop Ya Wishing... Just Quit It, Yup, STOP Ya Dissin', Cos Ya Shit Get No Feed.. Kinda Like Mal-Nutrition!!! (lol) another Damn Kid You Killed It..... Nah Ur Ass Like Colon! My Punches Hit Lypse.. Now The Bitches Mouths Swollen My Homie Kay-ohz also from another site Im poppin da trunk so u betta run-fast... Me n Hades guna drop u in ur own BLOOD-BATH!! We dont play 'amatuer games', lik Halo-vets... Cuz we see u cowerin from 'F.E.A.R.' lik u BAILED-UR-DEATH!! I'll jam 'hooked on phonics' in ya mind, so u can get a better koncept... Cuz bro fukkin wit a vet lands u mailin letters 2 CONVICTS!!

01-07-2007, 01:13 AM	#13
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	couple those good^ Bumpin fo feed.

01-07-2007, 01:21 AM	#14
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	naw. . .punches were lacking. . . the david stern line was nice tho. . . 1st and 4th bars were . . .subpar. . .

01-07-2007, 01:44 AM	#15
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thanks for feed.^ uppin...... BTW...Your avy scares me.(No Homo)

01-07-2007, 03:35 AM	#16
Tom Chambers AkA Sur-Vis-U-All Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: pittsburgh Posts: 11,280 Repped: 132 Repped 477 Times in 296 Posts Neg Reps: 19 Neg Repped at 68 Times in 54 Posts	decent,,,,,but not OMG drop...................7/10.........

01-07-2007, 12:47 PM	#18
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ms. bootylicious, beyonce.^^

01-07-2007, 06:04 PM	#20
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ight I know that the last ones suck, Bumpin for more feed on the others.