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Old 01-05-2007, 04:43 PM   #1
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Yea... CountDown In The Buildin... This Is Some Real Shit... I Wanted Ta Show You I Aint Juss Bout Bustin Guns... I Can Tell Stories Too... And I Brought My Dude Ant Along For Tha Ride... Show Em' Whats Good Ant...

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Fed Up Wit The Home Life, Tired Of The Problems
..Would Flee Just To get Away, This Happened Often..
Finally His Anger Fulfilled His Dreams And Pulled A Gun
..Knowing His Guilt, At First he Was Happy..............
..he Knows Wat Hes Done And his Cool Had Run
Ruled Wit 2 Life sentences On The Count Of Man Slaughter
Gettin Cuffed And Pulled Away from The Mans Daughter
Now Hes Stuck behind Bars Wit No Friends Or Family
Tryin To get Out His Plans Started To began happening
Went To Court once More After 5 Years got Death
Figuered He Was Gon Die Anyways.......................
...........Tried To Run From there And Was Shot dead

Aight Fam... Lemme SHow Em' Whats Good Real Quick... Look:

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there was this kid named Tony, he was young & confused..
aint kno how ta take pressure from the others at school..
mama bought em' a chain, they started runnin his jewels..
an easy target, they even took his lunch money too..
got tired of the bullys, started runnin wit dudes..
he started sellin cocaine & copped a couple of tools..
it became his lifestyle, not juss somethin ta do..
i mean, what would he do, if he didnt have it?..
prolly get a grip on life & juss grasp it..
but he has it...
losin his sanity, he cant quite grab it..
momma found out bout the coke, the bitch went rabid..
she said "if you dont stop the im throwin you out"..
he said "either shut up or im chokin you out"..
she called the cops, now the fiends gotta cope wit a drought..
got cought up on charges & approached wit a dought..
the stand, found guilty & he litterally passed out..
2 years passed, now hes out up in a crack house..
his life blacked out & his dudes left em'..
so he joined a gang, a fam whod accept em'..
thought the lord blessed em', hes reppin a rag..
said "damn this is the life that im destined ta have"..
looked forward ta the future, wants ta step on his past..
but whats, left in the past made him a man..
cuz he never had someone that done gave em' a hand..
so now hes living fearless and hes takin a stand..
for the sake of his fam, he started sellin coke again..
said this is the reality wit no pretend..
so he started coppin better coke, his product was the best..
then a fiend came and asked, lemme cop it for the less.. (cut the price)
he said no, so the fiend pulled a shotty from his vest..
now Tony layin dead cuz he shot em' in the chest.. Damn!


Damn Man... This Shit Juss Goes Ta Show You How Fucked Up Life can Be... Treat It Well And Make Tha Rite Decisions... You Only Live Once And You Dont Wanna Waste It Fuckin Up... Real Talk...

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Old 01-05-2007, 04:53 PM   #2
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yea this real talk, i liked it, it was all true, life shit...i'd like to see more like this around...

Ant's was koo, and my fam spoken brought nice shit as always, multies were on point, i enjoyed it overall...hard to rank it lyrically because it was storytelling, an easy 8.5 for enjoyability
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Ant Verse WaS StraiGht...Always Got A Different Style...

iM BOut To Get Ready 4 WOrk ThOugh...

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Old 01-05-2007, 09:07 PM   #4
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this was pretty good. . .nice to see spo change it up a lil. . .did well. . .ant did his thing. . .

prolly be a good audio. . .over some storytelling beat. . .
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Old 01-06-2007, 12:11 AM   #5
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Nice, I Enjoyed Both Verses And Saw The Slick Rick Shine In Both Of You, Nice To See You Do Something Different Spoken, And I Offically Request A Remix On This, I've Got A Verse Perfect For This Theme


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Wanted Ta Show You I Aint Juss Bout Bustin Guns...

he started sellin cocaine & copped a couple of tools..

he said no, so the fiend pulled a shotty from his vest..
now Tony layin dead cuz he shot em' in the chest.. Damn!
Still couldn't go a verse without talking about guns eh?

That said, credit where it's due; you didn't just talk about guns, you talked about cocaine too.......& that's deep, LAWL.
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Old 01-07-2007, 03:17 AM   #8
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hahah ant you know you coulda made a verse 10x better then this since you always rappin bout this topic ahhaha. it was stillnice tho props ta both
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