New Approach..

.Krysis. · 01-02-2007, 06:26 PM

A Load o Shit But.. Gettin Used To A Diff Style.. So..

Birthed As A Gift n' Im Replicating My Death..
Crusifying To Wither The Breath Of The Weak..
Set Back The Date On The Clock n' Its Back To The Bleak..
Stretched The Physique To Compete In The Present..
Fractured Sections Re-Collected Now Its 100 Percent..
Merge The Good With The Bad n' Present A New Structure..
Stuck On The 'Spot' When I Was Just Waitin On My Rupture..
Pressure Released As I Spit The Toxic Contents..
Now Sifting Through The Future But Back To The Present..
Leaving The Past As Nuttin But A Series Of Events..
An Indescribable Scent That Creates Your Fear..
Smell Me A Mile Off But I Never Wet Myself With A Tear..
A Bullet Sounds The Same In Every Language, Its Easily Understood..
To Steal From Wealthy n' Collate My Problems Like Robin Should..

Feed Moi..

єяіс є · 01-02-2007, 07:41 PM

this was aight 7/10

LaWN NAiL · 01-02-2007, 08:00 PM

Contents and Present doesn't rhyme..

Present and Percent doesn't rhyme either..

sofis2cated · 01-02-2007, 08:22 PM

nice drop.. true some of the words didn't rhyme but it was still decent.. i agree 7/10 stay up

.Krysis. · 01-03-2007, 10:10 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by G0t CaNNoN'D?

Contents and Present doesn't rhyme..

Present and Percent doesn't rhyme either..

Yup Guess So..

.Krysis. · 01-03-2007, 10:12 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by єяіс є

this was aight 7/10

Coo..

Quote:

Originally Posted by sofis2cated

nice drop.. true some of the words didn't rhyme but it was still decent.. i agree 7/10 stay up

I Was Messin Around With The Rhymin In This.. Like Wit The First Line I Had The Last Word Rhymin With A Word In Tha MIddle Of The Next Line.. Dint Work Very Well But Its w/e

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01-02-2007, 06:26 PM	#1
.Krysis. AkA Riskz Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 3,253 Repped: 479 Repped 742 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	New Approach.. New Approach.. A Load o Shit But.. Gettin Used To A Diff Style.. So.. Birthed As A Gift n' Im Replicating My Death.. Crusifying To Wither The Breath Of The Weak.. Set Back The Date On The Clock n' Its Back To The Bleak.. Stretched The Physique To Compete In The Present.. Fractured Sections Re-Collected Now Its 100 Percent.. Merge The Good With The Bad n' Present A New Structure.. Stuck On The 'Spot' When I Was Just Waitin On My Rupture.. Pressure Released As I Spit The Toxic Contents.. Now Sifting Through The Future But Back To The Present.. Leaving The Past As Nuttin But A Series Of Events.. An Indescribable Scent That Creates Your Fear.. Smell Me A Mile Off But I Never Wet Myself With A Tear.. A Bullet Sounds The Same In Every Language, Its Easily Understood.. To Steal From Wealthy n' Collate My Problems Like Robin Should.. *Feed Moi..* __________________ "I'm the Archbishop of this rap shit, excommunicate.. faith from my narrative, you don't want no arms like Hans Blix, watch me clamp this, like lock jaw, smack you so hard your frame took flight & soared like a Condor".

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01-02-2007, 07:41 PM	#2
єяіс є REPPIN' THE LOX/D-BLOCK Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: On Tha' Block 24/7 Posts: 1,043 Repped: 30 Repped 333 Times in 168 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	this was aight 7/10

01-02-2007, 08:00 PM	#3
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	Contents and Present doesn't rhyme.. Present and Percent doesn't rhyme either..

01-02-2007, 08:22 PM	#4
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	nice drop.. true some of the words didn't rhyme but it was still decent.. i agree 7/10 stay up