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01-01-2007, 10:37 PM
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FUCK'EM ALL
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Fragment Of A Track im workin on
In my heart i know, that i lost my road
long ago, back when i had a single hope Now im Smoke and dayz arent as half as dope now my throat just longs for that piece of rope I gotta rhyme for my rights gotta fight for my life Its Time that im stuck with my prime for a night This mind has a price, just to get to my height this dynamite will have to take a blow to my sight gotta abstain from the praise i don’t deserve it Its a burden, im just tryna make these efforts worth-it make it perfect, all i want is to get out this furnace stop this burnin, before this world departs my service Decisions have been made that could ruin my brain waves my pain paves the same things, that could never break sane I know i got to break out, i cant take this im dying inside, and gettin hit with the same shit
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01-01-2007, 10:38 PM
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FUCK'EM ALL
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thats about half of it
its gonna be a freestyle when its done but this is what i got so far
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01-01-2007, 10:39 PM
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you attempted multies at the end. Thats a start. good vocab but you need punchlines and multies through the whole thing.
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01-01-2007, 10:43 PM
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thnkx man
i'll work on it
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01-03-2007, 12:31 PM
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14 n Runnin Da Game
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nice work it was aight ill battle yo holla back at me on a private message
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01-03-2007, 12:55 PM
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California Lyricist
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yo smoke this was good.. deep message on top of the nice flow, stay at it man and reveal the finished product when your done
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01-03-2007, 05:10 PM
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FUCK'EM ALL
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hell yeah i'll get at you soon as its done
deepz i'll holla at ya later i got some shit to do right now
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01-03-2007, 05:32 PM
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It Was Nice...
n' Dont Listen Ta Any1 That Tells Ya To Use Multies  Multies Are Just A Style Of Rap, Not Compulsary... They 'Make The Spit Better' I Guess... But U Dont Need Them Stay Up
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