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Old 12-31-2006, 07:59 PM   #1
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The~Sleepers Present:The Warm Up

Sponsered By. Millions More Movement Ent.
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By:The Lyrical One aka The Pun. aka Cypha King
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U Weak? Yes Im verify that U bols aint official..The Lyrical Flow will Knock u out wit 2 like K.p's Initials..
Ima Boss....and The Sleepers Bosses to So we aint lookin for one like shareefa...so to destroy my army a vet is Benificial...
Im The Streets Peeps Sweet...U fuckin wit an elite..Grip tha Piece Prepare for Defeat..Straps a Tee-pot how I Heat Steam...
Ak47 For Ya Streetz..Ayo Soljah Tell me wats wrong wit these Bastards...Body In a Caskets eye shut near the pastor...Vivid in ya Mind Street dreams..
all types of Gangs In columbus Like Variety Meat..I was still goin shit on ya wit out rightin this on a Toliet seat...
Ya Rhymes Remind me of a woodshop Ya shit is Boarin/Boring...THe Flows a Jet the rhymes Is Soarin...Likes Jay-z album on the first week..
The Youngin a Serious Bol....Put out more Material than Wool...The Thanksgivin holiday wit Bullets...The Stuffin Ill cram u wit fulls....
Dont Take this a Diss this was for Motivation for Ya rookies to get off ya. ass....
Ima Ingorant dude Ill tell Babe truth that he ass....
So In order for Us to fight No need got Guns and knifes because I fight through these Lyrics..Cause im not tryin to die on tha Mic


Shouts to The Sleepers.MMM Ent.,GLK,Soljah,Hova, Jr-one
Neighborhood streetz shogun CC ant12345.Young Styles(MY BRUVA)
KP.Countdown,Meance everybody thats doin that real ass shit
none of this garbage ass hip-hop man dont talk about guns unless u
Kno how to put it together visually so i can see in my mind
Um who else i miss Disrespect,Bozz,Tambo,Cannon'd

and IM STILL STYLIN ON U NIGGAs
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Old 12-31-2006, 08:16 PM   #2
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Old 12-31-2006, 08:40 PM   #3
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I liked this compared to the rookies on HHboard. You had some nice punches in there, the flow wasn't too bad. Good job. 7.3/10.
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Old 12-31-2006, 08:49 PM   #4
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Thanks man ill be sure to rep u and give ur joint a rating

stay up

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Old 12-31-2006, 09:09 PM   #5
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damn u gettin wayyyyyyyyyy better....this was nice....8.5/10....but u didnt shout me out :(
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Old 12-31-2006, 09:32 PM   #6
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LOL

Thanks ima rep u tho ma bad

it was a keystyle
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Old 12-31-2006, 10:20 PM   #7
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UUPPPPPPPIINNNNNNN


The Sleepers Presents:Operation Warzone
The Sleepers Presents:Rebirth of the Streetz Feat Ant12345

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Old 12-31-2006, 10:35 PM   #8
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Old 12-31-2006, 10:39 PM   #9
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thanks for that
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Old 12-31-2006, 11:02 PM   #10
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ima have to go wit a 7/10

even tho im not feelin the style its helpin ya flow

so stay up
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Old 12-31-2006, 11:07 PM   #11
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damn u improved quick
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Old 12-31-2006, 11:36 PM   #12
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LOL

thanks gettin taught some shit
by 2 peeps on another site
but thanks ill rep u
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Old 01-01-2007, 01:47 AM   #13
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Uppin......this jawn...
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Old 01-01-2007, 03:25 AM   #14
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Old 01-01-2007, 03:32 AM   #15
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it was ight. keep improvin. Not much for the rhyme style or the structure whatever you call it. Stay up.
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Old 01-01-2007, 03:36 AM   #16
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Thanks...
For that Structure was to help my flow look better so it wont look outta order
But check Ya damn Pms
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Old 01-01-2007, 03:42 AM   #18
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cool...DISS COMINN TOMMORROW FOR BABE HAHA
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Yo This Was Nice...8.765444/10 ahahahaahah...upppppiinnn
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Old 01-01-2007, 12:29 PM   #20
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thanks man.....

Uppin this Jawn......

OPERATION WARZONE DISS COMIN SOON....
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Old 01-01-2007, 02:29 PM   #21
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shit was pretty decent... could done better and prolly coulda worded some lines a little different but its all good fam... 7/10... nice shit tho... stay up
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10/10 !!

i have to do that becuase of tha shout out..lol

but over all on tha real 8.5/10
on a low-inter level

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Old 01-01-2007, 03:23 PM   #23
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thanks
LMAO @ LOW INTER LEVEL

Im like Mid Inter dude check yo self j/p

ill rep u soon

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Old 01-01-2007, 06:28 PM   #24
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Old 01-02-2007, 03:58 AM   #25
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