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12-30-2006, 02:40 PM
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My 1st Rhyme
ii juss thought i would try dis rap stuff out
itz wuteva man, i pop it off n get dat chedda~~ barettaz hit ya head up, i'm really tired of ya get upz~~ haha, dese ppl kno mizfit be tha illest or wuteva u call it~~ in depth thoughtz, mah mind stay in tha barz like a alcoholic~~ i stack hiztory bookz till i reach da grave of dem~~ superficial liarz claim 2 spit flamez, i'm blazin dem~~ all dese ppl say hip hop is dead, i'm ashamed of dem~~ i guess mizfit gotta play like superman, i'm savin dem~~ thru tha schizophrenic mentality, i'm raisin dem~~ ya metaphorz n simple wordplay aint phasin em~~ ya boi gon stay tha same, tha game aint changin em~~ sum dayz i reflect n see dat time is aging em~~ try 2 play my part but dey keep turnin tha page again~~ ya pocketz a lil thin?, get flipped like a razr den~~ 4get tha nickz n dimez u chase~~ juss feel dis shit, aint no time 2 waste~~ tell me wut yall think |
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12-30-2006, 02:44 PM
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dude don't take offense to this but gangsta shit clearly ain't your style change it up get lyrical spit whats on your mind not what you hear on the radio
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12-30-2006, 02:47 PM
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Unoriginality aside I felt that this was a decent verse. You say it's your first time, that's excellent for your first time
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12-30-2006, 02:47 PM
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ummm
well dis is mah 1st 1 but i'll try 2 switch it up but i dont listen 2 gangsta rap enuff 2 get my rhymez from it..... |
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12-30-2006, 02:49 PM
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Lovin the multi's at the end you got this lyricism stuff down already
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12-30-2006, 04:01 PM
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you used some multies. . .begining sucked ass. . .meh . . .wack. . .but decent for a first drop. . . better than my first drop
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12-30-2006, 04:28 PM
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my first drop wasn't bad either but it wasn't good
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12-30-2006, 04:36 PM
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Yea
mines i dont kno i dont care good drop tho man this is good for ur first drop and stay up can u rate my 4 alarm blaze plz thanks u |
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12-30-2006, 04:49 PM
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hopefully ur last??
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12-30-2006, 04:53 PM
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i knew sumbody was gonna hate
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12-31-2006, 12:19 AM
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much liver than c-money shit...no hate for the record...if this where you startin you only got one direction to go fam...and thats up...
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12-31-2006, 05:59 PM
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for bein da firstdrop it was preety gud
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12-31-2006, 06:33 PM
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yea its excellent for a first drop man..u got talent stay at it....and fuck the haters, expecially the haters in HHBOARD
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