Some really quick shit

D-Hac · 12-28-2006, 02:58 AM

I'm like a toothbrush, cuz I'll freshen up any set..
I'm the one rapper like OSU, win ya pleny bets..
Put a shell on your back slow poke, now u a turtle..
This is the offspring of a pyromaniac yep I'm fertile.. (Makin Flamezz)
Tired of these old ass cats.. might as well make a paper ad..(1)
I'm bonin' your sister in her bedroom, I'm sly n wont wake your dad..
Hip Hop is getting torn down, but only to make innovations..
Soon I'll run this shit and won't have to go n rent a nation..
Don't come at me with your theories and damn fallacies..
Cuz I'm a loco mofo, and I'll through grenades at ya jeep..
Ya'll are no good and harmful, so I make my rhymes pasteurizing.. (Fuckin germs)
They call me the sun, cuz I'ma be most noticed after rising..

took a couple of mins.. bored

(1) I refered to rappers as cats.. when pet owners get tired of their pets they make ads in the newspaper.

B Dope · 12-28-2006, 04:34 AM

If ya line was good you shouldn't have to explain it. KNow what I'm saying.

D-Hac · 12-29-2006, 01:19 AM

No I don't.

tha don · 12-29-2006, 02:17 PM

it was a aight freestyle for a coupla minutes..good vocab but needs more multies but nothin really stood out..good job tho..

12-28-2006, 02:58 AM	#1
D-Hac Banned Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Ohio Posts: 1,642 Repped: 54 Repped 17 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Some really quick shit Some really quick shit I'm like a toothbrush, cuz I'll freshen up any set.. I'm the one rapper like OSU, win ya pleny bets.. Put a shell on your back slow poke, now u a turtle.. This is the offspring of a pyromaniac yep I'm fertile.. (Makin Flamezz) Tired of these old ass cats.. might as well make a paper ad..(1) I'm bonin' your sister in her bedroom, I'm sly n wont wake your dad.. Hip Hop is getting torn down, but only to make innovations.. Soon I'll run this shit and won't have to go n rent a nation.. Don't come at me with your theories and damn fallacies.. Cuz I'm a loco mofo, and I'll through grenades at ya jeep.. Ya'll are no good and harmful, so I make my rhymes pasteurizing.. (Fuckin germs) They call me the sun, cuz I'ma be most noticed after rising.. took a couple of mins.. bored (1) I refered to rappers as cats.. when pet owners get tired of their pets they make ads in the newspaper.

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12-28-2006, 04:34 AM	#2
B Dope Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Posts: 3,051 Repped: 638 Repped 375 Times in 112 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	If ya line was good you shouldn't have to explain it. KNow what I'm saying.

12-29-2006, 01:19 AM	#3
D-Hac Banned Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Ohio Posts: 1,642 Repped: 54 Repped 17 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	No I don't.

12-29-2006, 02:17 PM	#4
tha don THA ILLEST Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Tha COE Posts: 30 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	it was a aight freestyle for a coupla minutes..good vocab but needs more multies but nothin really stood out..good job tho..