Expression Freestyle (warning:advanced vocab. retards beware)

sofis2cated · 12-12-2006, 06:25 PM

Music is the gateway for expression of the soul
Freedom is deliverance from depression as a whole
Aggression must withhold - release confessions to be told
An outcast of society because the obsession to control
Innocence lost with the inauguration of a G life
Psychologically glossed like the illumination of street lights
Fascination with sweet thighs resulted in knee highs*
For a 3 year old little girl whose adoration keeps me alive
Moved beyond twisted fingers and proclaiming gang alliances
Became a gifted teacher by reclaiming flame inside of him
Inherited mind elevation like hydraulics for the brain
Destroyed time alteration like an alcoholic gone insane**
Symbolic with the name sofis2cateds parabolic with the game
Rhymes making women wet like they frolicked in the rain
Always pure with the flow - construction of a masterpiece
Become mature as we grow – destruction of disaster frees***

*socks for my daughter
**drunks usually can’t keep track of time
***tired of the same old gun talk freestyles
If you don’t understand a line cuz of the vocabulary don’t hate, get your ass a dictionary!

J~Souljah · 12-12-2006, 06:42 PM

6.378/10

keep it up

sofis2cated · 12-12-2006, 07:47 PM

^^ 4 sho, nice rating!

ant. . . · 12-12-2006, 07:56 PM

ay good shit man stay up

U Not Like Me · 12-12-2006, 08:15 PM

that was some nice stuff man, pretty good vocab

The Kid Blaze · 12-12-2006, 08:22 PM

feelin it .. nice vocab choice

Innocence lost with the inauguration of a G life
Psychologically glossed like the illumination of street lights

LaWN NAiL · 12-12-2006, 08:35 PM

nice vocab..{which u only aimed for..} =)

sofis2cated · 12-12-2006, 08:37 PM

^^ exactly.. wasn't trying to show off lyrical skill, just good use of vocab, something a little different

~Young Gunna~ · 12-12-2006, 08:38 PM

it was so so....some of the vocab was used very well but some was pretty forced...keep at it tho..1

!{THR!LLZ}! · 12-12-2006, 08:43 PM

VoCaB WaS GOod...O/A iT WAS iGhT I WaNNa See More DrOpz FrOM u...

sofis2cated · 12-12-2006, 08:58 PM

^^ good looking on the feedback fellas
could you please go vote on this battle, we only need a couple more thanx

sofis2cated · 12-13-2006, 12:52 PM

uppin for more feed

.Krysis. · 12-13-2006, 12:57 PM

I Liked...But How Come Your Other Dropes Arent Anyfin Like This?

sofis2cated · 12-13-2006, 01:05 PM

^^ I was only focusing on the vocabulary aspect of it, I'm writing rhymes that mainly focus on one particular element of rhyming in order to discover my weaknesses and strengths ya smell me...

.Krysis. · 12-13-2006, 01:14 PM

Ye I ... Smell ... You

-K.P- · 12-13-2006, 01:17 PM

is it a good smell? ^

.Krysis. · 12-13-2006, 01:20 PM

Its....Strange....

sofis2cated · 12-13-2006, 01:22 PM

it's just the leftover pussy residue from scruffydevons mom.. shit stains like spray from a skunk

.Krysis. · 12-13-2006, 01:34 PM

loooooooooooooooooooooooool

sofis2cated · 12-13-2006, 07:08 PM

no more feed? I'm trying to improve on my skills, I'm dropping another freestyle tomorrow

ant. . . · 12-13-2006, 08:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sofis2cated

it's just the leftover pussy residue from scruffydevons mom.. shit stains like spray from a skunk

LOL

Just Had To Say That My Bad For Free postin

*Walks Backwards Till Out Of Thread*

LethalIsILL · 12-14-2006, 12:39 AM

its aiight duke

12-12-2006, 06:25 PM	#1
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	Expression Freestyle (warning:advanced vocab. retards beware) Expression Freestyle (warning:advanced vocab. retards beware) Music is the gateway for expression of the soul Freedom is deliverance from depression as a whole Aggression must withhold - release confessions to be told An outcast of society because the obsession to control Innocence lost with the inauguration of a G life Psychologically glossed like the illumination of street lights Fascination with sweet thighs resulted in knee highs* For a 3 year old little girl whose adoration keeps me alive Moved beyond twisted fingers and proclaiming gang alliances Became a gifted teacher by reclaiming flame inside of him Inherited mind elevation like hydraulics for the brain Destroyed time alteration like an alcoholic gone insane Symbolic with the name sofis2cateds parabolic with the game Rhymes making women wet like they frolicked in the rain Always pure with the flow - construction of a masterpiece Become mature as we grow – destruction of disaster frees* socks for my daughter drunks usually can’t keep track of time **tired of the same old gun talk freestyles If you don’t understand a line cuz of the vocabulary don’t hate, get your ass a dictionary!

12-12-2006, 07:56 PM	#4
ant. . . Veteran Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: California Posts: 1,750 Repped: 3 Repped 64 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	ay good shit man stay up __________________

12-12-2006, 08:22 PM	#6
The Kid Blaze Nike KB / Air-Blaze Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Tree City Posts: 7,255 Repped: 68 Repped 151 Times in 54 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	feelin it .. nice vocab choice Innocence lost with the inauguration of a G life Psychologically glossed like the illumination of street lights __________________

12-12-2006, 08:43 PM	#10
!{THR!LLZ}! {NJ}-W's 45~2 L's- Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: {CMD} -NJ- Posts: 3,713 Repped: 13 Repped 14 Times in 10 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	VoCaB WaS GOod...O/A iT WAS iGhT I WaNNa See More DrOpz FrOM u... __________________ {NJ THRILLA THE KILLA}{THRILLZ}{05-07} {SOLO KILL COUNT}{W'S 45 - 3 L'S}{{321}} {RHYME REF}{VET SLAYA}{G-WORLD'S MINE}

12-13-2006, 12:57 PM	#13
.Krysis. AkA Riskz Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 3,253 Repped: 479 Repped 742 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I Liked...But How Come Your Other Dropes Arent Anyfin Like This? __________________ "I'm the Archbishop of this rap shit, excommunicate.. faith from my narrative, you don't want no arms like Hans Blix, watch me clamp this, like lock jaw, smack you so hard your frame took flight & soared like a Condor".

12-12-2006, 06:42 PM	#2
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 22 Times in 17 Posts	6.378/10 keep it up

12-12-2006, 07:47 PM	#3
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	^^ 4 sho, nice rating!

12-12-2006, 08:15 PM	#5
U Not Like Me You Should Already Know Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Springfield, Massachusetts Posts: 293 Repped: 63 Repped 9 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	that was some nice stuff man, pretty good vocab

12-12-2006, 08:35 PM	#7
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	nice vocab..{which u only aimed for..} =)

12-12-2006, 08:37 PM	#8
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	^^ exactly.. wasn't trying to show off lyrical skill, just good use of vocab, something a little different

12-12-2006, 08:38 PM	#9
~Young Gunna~ Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Gs Us Posts: 10,870 Repped: 156 Repped 574 Times in 243 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	it was so so....some of the vocab was used very well but some was pretty forced...keep at it tho..1

12-12-2006, 08:58 PM	#11
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	^^ good looking on the feedback fellas could you please go vote on this battle, we only need a couple more thanx

12-13-2006, 12:52 PM	#12
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	uppin for more feed

12-13-2006, 01:05 PM	#14
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	^^ I was only focusing on the vocabulary aspect of it, I'm writing rhymes that mainly focus on one particular element of rhyming in order to discover my weaknesses and strengths ya smell me...

12-13-2006, 01:14 PM	#15
.Krysis. AkA Riskz Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 3,253 Repped: 479 Repped 742 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ye I ... Smell ... You __________________ "I'm the Archbishop of this rap shit, excommunicate.. faith from my narrative, you don't want no arms like Hans Blix, watch me clamp this, like lock jaw, smack you so hard your frame took flight & soared like a Condor".

12-14-2006, 12:39 AM	#22
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,013 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	its aiight duke __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

12-13-2006, 01:17 PM	#16
-K.P- Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: UK Posts: 2,515 Repped: 142 Repped 119 Times in 47 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	is it a good smell? ^

12-13-2006, 01:20 PM	#17
.Krysis. AkA Riskz Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 3,253 Repped: 479 Repped 742 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Its....Strange.... __________________ "I'm the Archbishop of this rap shit, excommunicate.. faith from my narrative, you don't want no arms like Hans Blix, watch me clamp this, like lock jaw, smack you so hard your frame took flight & soared like a Condor".

12-13-2006, 01:22 PM	#18
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	it's just the leftover pussy residue from scruffydevons mom.. shit stains like spray from a skunk

12-13-2006, 01:34 PM	#19
.Krysis. AkA Riskz Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 3,253 Repped: 479 Repped 742 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	loooooooooooooooooooooooool __________________ "I'm the Archbishop of this rap shit, excommunicate.. faith from my narrative, you don't want no arms like Hans Blix, watch me clamp this, like lock jaw, smack you so hard your frame took flight & soared like a Condor".

12-13-2006, 07:08 PM	#20
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	no more feed? I'm trying to improve on my skills, I'm dropping another freestyle tomorrow

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