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Batman/EvaMendes Advocate
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Baltimore
Posts: 2,367
Repped: 216
Repped 541 Times in 262 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts
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I wrote this, need feedback
Pass me the rock, you know i stay ballin I make a touchdown, basket whateva u call it Im so fly no plan on fallin Leave ya jaw droppin like u saw a crip man walking (BALLLLIINNN) Dirty South doing the shoulda lean Go in the back me and ur girl screwing like coedine People Try and act tuff so they muggin mean But they afraid that things'll get spraying like MR CLean// (BALLLLLINN) I have no worthy advisary That cuz they pussy taking things in and out like a capillary Ya Boy fly like a green canary Getting the Ice Cream Cake like a Queen Dairy Im a Balla {Hook} Ice froze the watch SO i lost track of the minute And I shine like the sun so im tryna get back in it Cuz Day Light Saving will through a nigga off his game But still my skills stay sharp like a picture frame// I'm the King U pawns move one space I run threw u with a ball That a check. Get it Mate? But whos gonna call foul There aint no referee BK getting green and staying bright like a Christmas tree I swear this to u Its a guarantee None gonna care bout u cuz u aint betta than me 1 last thing b4 i sing off you aint sick cuz u can get cured like a winter cough Ya... |
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Lonnel
Join Date: May 2006
Location: chicago
Posts: 3,199
Repped: 190
Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts
Neg Reps: 16
Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts
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u would do a "text" remix...
AND A HORRIBLE ONE AT THAT! |
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Senior Member
Join Date: Nov 2006
Location: coquitlam:right by vancouver
Posts: 485
Repped: 10
Repped 3 Times in 3 Posts
Neg Reps: 0
Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts
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its alright u gotta work on some shit though 5/10
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