Mr.Me Too freestyle Disssin BWS

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 08:32 PM

Yup Bws Round 2 nigga You ready Lets go

What Emcees Need it Lyrical Direction from Vets
Better off to smir u tho Oberserved u witout Epericials-Bet Ya diss thought i forget.....
(Naw) Main Event i was Playin Now ill take it to a Greater-extent
Do u Dirty Mafia style a Wooden Boat wit a Leak and Cement
First we was cool!...wanted to be a captain In the crew.Now u actin rude
Like i wont clap the tool anybody that see this should be in a Imperative Mood
Get the Gauge blow ya legs Heels/Hills ova Head
I think U should be put in a Operation room on a Hospital bed
GUns drop u when i aim wit the Infared
Potato on the Gun smoke Hash full oF Brown Clap the Patato is Mashed Now
Talk of town Moms find u in the back yard bloody layin-down
Ive seen u Battle(garbage) U should battle in the Emergency-room-4-ya-life
Insurgency armed-wit-weapons U in urgency....The Cannon(boom)....U known to do go head and bite...
See Currently Ima Earnin my Stripes on the strip wit mad currency.....
Young Spittage Neva heard Of me...U must be stuck on Stupid.....Word to thee....Greatest....
My style Not yet complete....I can see ya heart beat u high on Cocaine
My Guns Dump Lungs Bust and more strikin Ya Knowledge-Domain
Mediks/Medixs Pickin up ya brains Miles-away
I will get to expire Put ya eye black like an automoblie tire
Get-u strecthed like a Telephone-wire
Ima Fuck the game i got Legends thoughts u rookie not one-n-da-Same
Im Insane and take what u Proclaim Fuckkaa......

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 08:40 PM

uppin this

Over_Flow · 12-10-2006, 08:42 PM

lmao..... i'll think about dissin u back.....

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 08:46 PM

U might as well rate it cause u kno for fact i out did ur diss u did to me and CC
so dont even think cause i put thi together in my head 30 seconds and finished typin in 1 min
so rate it BWS cause its not real beef i had to get u back cause we was cool
i got diss for no reason

Over_Flow · 12-10-2006, 08:49 PM

^^ 2 be real witcha.... this was better than like anythng uve done on this site...uve improved alot

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 08:58 PM

Knew it.................
I told u only a reply back to u
No beef cause its dumb(for real)
Just wanted to reply
I was out in a Coma when u dropped urs
my first diss(main event) my little brother did
and fucked up but im done

Lyrical Messiah · 12-10-2006, 10:01 PM

NIce shit Dolla you know who i want so keep ya eyes open

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 10:06 PM

Yes i do.........................I will Unless they feel heavyfrom weak ass rappers
like scruffy

Lyrical Messiah · 12-10-2006, 10:09 PM

NVH Most Wanted Bout to Release that diss bro IM me

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 10:25 PM

alright

Uppin ya

A.T.I. · 12-10-2006, 11:10 PM

pretty good, couple lines didnt really make sense, but some clever drops nonetheless

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 11:13 PM

alright mane thanks ill start workin on that shit

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 11:49 PM

Uppin........................Plz rate

The Lyrical One · 12-11-2006, 07:24 AM

uppin.....................

BWS-WE DONT TALK 2 POLICE · 12-12-2006, 04:16 AM

dissin me nigga?

.Krysis. · 12-12-2006, 12:00 PM

Ur gettin better....

Yung_blaze · 12-12-2006, 12:03 PM

outta ten il lgive it a 7 jst

sofis2cated · 12-12-2006, 12:56 PM

yo nice drop, some good lines and a decent flow, 7.5/10

The Lyrical One · 12-12-2006, 09:12 PM

Thnx to alll the feed i respect ya no doubt man if ya need anything i got ya

uppin this

LethalIsILL · 12-13-2006, 08:31 AM

u got betta

Wu-Tang Forever · 12-13-2006, 10:03 AM

.............

The Lyrical One · 12-13-2006, 09:10 PM

Thnx for the feed
uppin

Kid Corleone · 12-14-2006, 08:37 AM

Your flow is a little choppy Dun, You need to read your shit aloud before you type it. The bars are a little long, You should have a smooth rhyming motion.

The Lyrical One · 12-15-2006, 08:01 PM

I kno i should i dont write raps man i let em come to me

but thanks anymore feed

The Lyrical One · 12-16-2006, 01:03 AM

Uppin

new tracks comin......

12-10-2006, 08:32 PM	#1
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Mr.Me Too freestyle Disssin BWS Mr.Me Too freestyle Disssin BWS Yup Bws Round 2 nigga You ready Lets go What Emcees Need it Lyrical Direction from Vets Better off to smir u tho Oberserved u witout Epericials-Bet Ya diss thought i forget..... (Naw) Main Event i was Playin Now ill take it to a Greater-extent Do u Dirty Mafia style a Wooden Boat wit a Leak and Cement First we was cool!...wanted to be a captain In the crew.Now u actin rude Like i wont clap the tool anybody that see this should be in a Imperative Mood Get the Gauge blow ya legs Heels/Hills ova Head I think U should be put in a Operation room on a Hospital bed GUns drop u when i aim wit the Infared Potato on the Gun smoke Hash full oF Brown Clap the Patato is Mashed Now Talk of town Moms find u in the back yard bloody layin-down Ive seen u Battle(garbage) U should battle in the Emergency-room-4-ya-life Insurgency armed-wit-weapons U in urgency....The Cannon(boom)....U known to do go head and bite... See Currently Ima Earnin my Stripes on the strip wit mad currency..... Young Spittage Neva heard Of me...U must be stuck on Stupid.....Word to thee....Greatest.... My style Not yet complete....I can see ya heart beat u high on Cocaine My Guns Dump Lungs Bust and more strikin Ya Knowledge-Domain Mediks/Medixs Pickin up ya brains Miles-away I will get to expire Put ya eye black like an automoblie tire Get-u strecthed like a Telephone-wire Ima Fuck the game i got Legends thoughts u rookie not one-n-da-Same Im Insane and take what u Proclaim Fuckkaa......

12-10-2006, 11:10 PM	#11
A.T.I. Agitating the Ignorant Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: Toronto, ON Posts: 7,600 Repped: 1,376 Repped 2,044 Times in 719 Posts Neg Reps: 155 Neg Repped at 162 Times in 129 Posts	pretty good, couple lines didnt really make sense, but some clever drops nonetheless __________________ “At a snail's pace, I won this race that y'all trail"

12-12-2006, 12:00 PM	#16
.Krysis. AkA Riskz Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Manchester Posts: 3,253 Repped: 479 Repped 742 Times in 315 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Ur gettin better.... __________________ "I'm the Archbishop of this rap shit, excommunicate.. faith from my narrative, you don't want no arms like Hans Blix, watch me clamp this, like lock jaw, smack you so hard your frame took flight & soared like a Condor".

12-12-2006, 12:03 PM	#17
Yung_blaze Veteran Join Date: May 2006 Location: LONDON Posts: 5,070 Repped: 1,197 Repped 146 Times in 63 Posts Neg Reps: 7 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 4 Posts	outta ten il lgive it a 7 jst __________________ Play with the best die like the rest G_UNIT_THUG: Props 50, you da real fif?

12-13-2006, 08:31 AM	#20
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,965 Repped: 138 Repped 1,013 Times in 218 Posts Neg Reps: 56 Neg Repped at 81 Times in 57 Posts	u got betta __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

12-10-2006, 08:40 PM	#2
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin this

12-10-2006, 08:42 PM	#3
Over_Flow Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Queens. NY Posts: 2,793 Repped: 525 Repped 939 Times in 277 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lmao..... i'll think about dissin u back.....

12-10-2006, 08:46 PM	#4
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	U might as well rate it cause u kno for fact i out did ur diss u did to me and CC so dont even think cause i put thi together in my head 30 seconds and finished typin in 1 min so rate it BWS cause its not real beef i had to get u back cause we was cool i got diss for no reason

12-10-2006, 08:49 PM	#5
Over_Flow Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Queens. NY Posts: 2,793 Repped: 525 Repped 939 Times in 277 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^^ 2 be real witcha.... this was better than like anythng uve done on this site...uve improved alot

12-10-2006, 08:58 PM	#6
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Knew it................. I told u only a reply back to u No beef cause its dumb(for real) Just wanted to reply I was out in a Coma when u dropped urs my first diss(main event) my little brother did and fucked up but im done

12-10-2006, 10:01 PM	#7
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	NIce shit Dolla you know who i want so keep ya eyes open

12-10-2006, 10:06 PM	#8
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yes i do.........................I will Unless they feel heavyfrom weak ass rappers like scruffy

12-10-2006, 10:09 PM	#9
Lyrical Messiah Banned Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: NVH The Home of the Brave 3rd Wall 4 Life Posts: 1,776 Repped: 74 Repped 123 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 1 Post	NVH Most Wanted Bout to Release that diss bro IM me

12-10-2006, 10:25 PM	#10
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	alright Uppin ya

12-10-2006, 11:13 PM	#12
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	alright mane thanks ill start workin on that shit

12-10-2006, 11:49 PM	#13
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin........................Plz rate

12-11-2006, 07:24 AM	#14
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	uppin.....................

12-12-2006, 04:16 AM	#15
BWS-WE DONT TALK 2 POLICE Banned Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: COMPTON!!!!! Posts: 1,382 Repped: 141 Repped 433 Times in 157 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 2 Posts	dissin me nigga?

12-12-2006, 12:56 PM	#18
sofis2cated California Lyricist Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Bakersfield, CA Posts: 762 Repped: 33 Repped 10 Times in 8 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	yo nice drop, some good lines and a decent flow, 7.5/10

12-12-2006, 09:12 PM	#19
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thnx to alll the feed i respect ya no doubt man if ya need anything i got ya uppin this

12-13-2006, 10:03 AM	#21
Wu-Tang Forever Screw You Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: The 36 Chambers Posts: 801 Repped: 18 Repped 78 Times in 32 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 10 Times in 8 Posts	............. __________________

12-13-2006, 09:10 PM	#22
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thnx for the feed uppin

12-14-2006, 08:37 AM	#23
Kid Corleone Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Richmond, VA Posts: 652 Repped: 197 Repped 693 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Your flow is a little choppy Dun, You need to read your shit aloud before you type it. The bars are a little long, You should have a smooth rhyming motion.

12-15-2006, 08:01 PM	#24
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I kno i should i dont write raps man i let em come to me but thanks anymore feed

12-16-2006, 01:03 AM	#25
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin new tracks comin......

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