What we do (freestyle)

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 03:06 PM

Yup Unhuh unhuh
Here we go mane

U tryin to war ima dead u next
take ya gurl lay her out on the mattress like a bedroom set
Body shots to the face get ya Stomach Upset
Im Playin ya whole crew out like bands wit Clarinets
Love flowin ova tracks talkin grease nuffin to regret
Takin the air you breath like Ur Oxygen owe a Debt
Snapped Ya Cd in 2 took the tape outta ya Cassette
Im the Luitenant u the Weak ass Cadet
So Listen U still a Rookie at the bottom im a Vet
so take this into consideration when u say u the best
U wanna talk funny like ppl wit Cancer Put a Hole in a Neck
Cant get Pussy so u on the phone havin Sex
Not on a Ship but i still pop inbetween Decks
U try to duck shots but they still Connect
bullets treat u horrible wit abuse and willful neglect
Bang off 100 shots wit no speacial Effects
Keep warmin ya face similar to the greenhouse effect
How u a baller if u use a Kroger Card to reduce the sale price
Ill damage ya lungs to the point were u need a breathin Device

Lets rock

ant. . . · 12-10-2006, 03:20 PM

its iight theres some things that didnt really go then theres som ethat made up for those

i say its good overall stay up

JR-One · 12-10-2006, 03:23 PM

After Reading The First Line:

U tryin to war ima dead u next

I Stopped Reading.. .. SMH.. ..

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 03:24 PM

Thnx for da feed man
maybe if u up we can do a collab
some shit ppl been waitin to see

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 03:25 PM

LMAO @ Jr-one

i have to have i dumb line when i start

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 05:26 PM

Uppin this Jawn

L.P. a.k.a Yung~One · 12-10-2006, 05:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ANT12345 Aka iLL-USiON

its iight theres some things that didnt really go then theres som ethat made up for those

i say its good overall stay up

pretty much same thyn i would'a sed but i do see u uppin ya game keep workin at it fam. u'll get der / overall 6.5/10.....

The Lyrical One · 12-10-2006, 05:57 PM

Yeah tnx mane
i feel of a whole lotta points from danger zone which was a 7.5/10

but ima get back to the inspiration and shit and keep workin

12-10-2006, 03:06 PM	#1
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	What we do (freestyle) What we do (freestyle) Yup Unhuh unhuh Here we go mane U tryin to war ima dead u next take ya gurl lay her out on the mattress like a bedroom set Body shots to the face get ya Stomach Upset Im Playin ya whole crew out like bands wit Clarinets Love flowin ova tracks talkin grease nuffin to regret Takin the air you breath like Ur Oxygen owe a Debt Snapped Ya Cd in 2 took the tape outta ya Cassette Im the Luitenant u the Weak ass Cadet So Listen U still a Rookie at the bottom im a Vet so take this into consideration when u say u the best U wanna talk funny like ppl wit Cancer Put a Hole in a Neck Cant get Pussy so u on the phone havin Sex Not on a Ship but i still pop inbetween Decks U try to duck shots but they still Connect bullets treat u horrible wit abuse and willful neglect Bang off 100 shots wit no speacial Effects Keep warmin ya face similar to the greenhouse effect How u a baller if u use a Kroger Card to reduce the sale price Ill damage ya lungs to the point were u need a breathin Device Lets rock

12-10-2006, 03:20 PM	#2
ant. . . Veteran Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: California Posts: 1,750 Repped: 3 Repped 64 Times in 41 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	its iight theres some things that didnt really go then theres som ethat made up for those i say its good overall stay up __________________

12-10-2006, 03:23 PM	#3
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,021 Repped: 19 Repped 52 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	After Reading The First Line: U tryin to war ima dead u next I Stopped Reading.. .. SMH.. .. __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

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12-10-2006, 03:24 PM	#4
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thnx for da feed man maybe if u up we can do a collab some shit ppl been waitin to see

12-10-2006, 03:25 PM	#5
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	LMAO @ Jr-one i have to have i dumb line when i start

12-10-2006, 05:26 PM	#6
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Uppin this Jawn

12-10-2006, 05:57 PM	#8
The Lyrical One !!..SuPeR LyRiCiSt..!! Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: lol Posts: 1,650 Repped: 31 Repped 15 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yeah tnx mane i feel of a whole lotta points from danger zone which was a 7.5/10 but ima get back to the inspiration and shit and keep workin